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195 Commits

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Hanker10 ca45c969d5 1 Cor 9:16 change wording for clarity
1 Cor 9:16 change wording for clarity
2016-07-13 16:41:59 -04:00
Hanker10 d2ceca9836 1 Cor 9:15 change wording for clarity
1 Cor 9:15 change wording "money" to "any of these things" because the rights Paul could have claimed go beyond the monetary and other changes for clarity
2016-07-13 16:40:23 -04:00
Hanker10 83ddca4b73 1 Cor 9:10 cut extra wording
1 Cor 9:10 cut extra wording at the end, ", just like an an apostle over his church" since this is not at all in the text. Besides, it gives the idea that apostles have churches like pastors, but apostles are sent out, pastors stay.
2016-07-13 16:32:36 -04:00
Hanker10 4d1454350f 1 Cor 9:9 add missing word
1 Cor 9:9 add missing word
2016-07-13 16:30:08 -04:00
Hanker10 463f4fcf0a 1 Cor 9:5 change wording
1 Cor 9:5 change wording to include missing ideas from the original
2016-07-13 16:24:24 -04:00
Hanker10 58cd312c16 1 Cor 9:3 change wording
1 Cor 9:3 change wording for clarity
2016-07-13 16:23:00 -04:00
Hanker10 410f926034 1 Cor 8:2 improve wording
1 Cor 8:2 improve wording
2016-07-13 13:38:11 -04:00
Hanker10 d86ec39351 1 Cor 7:36 improve wording
1 Cor 7:36 improve wording
2016-07-13 13:32:22 -04:00
Hanker10 d93ff11a0b 1 Cor 7:35 improve wording
1 Cor 7:35 improve wording
2016-07-13 13:31:11 -04:00
Hanker10 412b480445 1 Cor 7:34 change wording
1 Cor 7:34 change wording to keep the ideas closer to the original
2016-07-13 13:28:47 -04:00
Hanker10 053c7eb3a8 1 Cor 7:34 change "girls" to "young ladies"
1 Cor 7:34 change "girls" to "young ladies"
2016-07-13 13:24:49 -04:00
Hanker10 44a4ca5dd5 1 Cor 7:33 change "day to day" to "ordinary"
1 Cor 7:33 change "day to day" to "ordinary"
2016-07-13 13:22:07 -04:00
Hanker10 7764530cfb 1 Cor 7:30 change "shed a tear"
1 Cor 7:30 change "shed a tear" to what you see because it is an idiom that could be unfamiliar to many. Also, dropped "or in their hearts" after "joy on their faces" because this is added. Also, "they wanted" after "to buy something." These are all additions that qualify the ideas too far.
2016-07-13 13:18:23 -04:00
Hanker10 9ce09929d4 1 Cor 7:21 change word "buy" to "gain"
1 Cor 7:21 change word "buy" to "gain" since not all slaves had to purchase their freedom and this idea is not in the original
2016-07-13 12:55:30 -04:00
Hanker10 107391498f 1 Cor 7:11 drop last sentence
1 Cor 7:11 drop last sentence, "These are the commands of the Lord." since this is not in the original and is repeated from verse 10 unnecessarily.
2016-07-13 12:43:08 -04:00
Hanker10 df0db16a31 1 Cor 7:6 change wording
1 Cor 7:6 change wording to include the concept of concession (as in ULB)
2016-07-13 12:39:21 -04:00
Hanker10 228ebbefa9 1 Cor 6:13 change wording
1 Cor 6:13 change wording: "person" is too broad a term to represent "stomach."
2016-07-13 10:32:16 -04:00
Hanker10 b81aff5ce9 1 Cor 6:12 correct faulty wording
1 Cor 6:12 correct faulty wording
2016-07-13 10:23:42 -04:00
Hanker10 e248c2a714 1 Cor 6:10 change wording about the kingdom
1 Cor 6:10 change wording about the kingdom
2016-07-13 10:20:58 -04:00
Hanker10 4ffcbb6348 1 Cor 6:9 change wording about the kingdom
1 Cor 6:9 change wording about the kingdom
2016-07-13 10:17:12 -04:00
Hanker10 0f17ab3cf8 1 Cor 6:5 change wording
1 Cor 6:5 change wording to include the idea of shaming
2016-07-13 10:08:42 -04:00
Hanker10 7d2631d626 1 Cor 6:1 change wording
1 Cor 6:1 change wording to include the idea of "daring to" since their practice violated the sanctity of the body of believers
2016-07-13 10:00:34 -04:00
Henry Whitney 1f33510e85 extra empty paras 2016-07-13 09:30:12 -04:00
Hanker10 fb678a8761 1 Cor 5:10 change words for clarity
1 Cor 5:10 change words for clarity
2016-07-12 21:33:58 -04:00
Hanker10 9b04192d61 1 Cor 5:9 change word for clarity
1 Cor 5:9 change word for clarity: "be with" becomes "keep company with"
2016-07-12 21:28:43 -04:00
Hanker10 3131be8755 1 Cor 5:7 change word for clarity
1 Cor 5:7 change word for clarity: "affect" becomes "infect"
2016-07-12 21:26:55 -04:00
Hanker10 0fe2f94a5c 1 Cor 5:5 add 2 phrases for clarity
1 Cor 5:5 add 2 phrases for clarity
2016-07-12 21:24:58 -04:00
Hanker10 0d7361ece1 1 Cor 4:21 change one word
1 Cor 4:21 change one word: "rod" so that the meaning comes out better
2016-07-12 17:22:42 -04:00
Hanker10 88001c8b9a 1 Cor 4:7 correct wrong noun number
1 Cor 4:7 correct wrong noun number
2016-07-12 17:17:17 -04:00
Hanker10 2a4b1db682 1 Cor 4:6 correct bad wording
1 Cor 4:6 correct bad wording
2016-07-12 17:15:33 -04:00
Hanker10 7be4104d54 1 Cor 4:3 change wording
1 Cor 4:3 change wording. Paul does not say he is not able to judge himself. He does not bother judging himself.
2016-07-12 17:12:05 -04:00
Hanker10 f160bd67ce 1 Cor 3:13 change wording
1 Cor 3:13 change wording, "how hard we worked for him" to what you see.
2016-07-12 16:54:07 -04:00
Hanker10 4b3ee1d0dd 1 Cor 3:10 change wording
1 Cor 3:10 change wording to correct idea about Paul's giftedness.
2016-07-12 16:50:44 -04:00
Henry Whitney 828a4fd1f2 typo 2016-07-12 16:43:35 -04:00
Henry Whitney ab1a8ca559 typo 2016-07-12 16:43:35 -04:00
Hanker10 b29e30e7dd 1 Cor 3:4 change wording
1 Cor 3:4 change wording: "tearing the church into pieces" is an assumption here. This is probably true, but Paul is working up to this evaluation of the Corinthians. It is too early to let that cat out of the bag here.
2016-07-12 15:57:30 -04:00
Hanker10 c1ceab7596 1 Cor 3:2 change "meat" to "solid food"
1 Cor 3:2 change "meat" to "solid food"
2016-07-12 15:53:39 -04:00
Hanker10 eccbb0a764 1 Cor 2:15 change one word
1 Cor 2:15 change one word: "judgment" to "evaluate" since this will avoid the connotation (at least for English speakers) of patronizing dominance over others.
2016-07-12 15:50:30 -04:00
Hanker10 45b66a3ef9 1 Cor 2:3 change wording
1 Cor 2:3 change wording since there is no indication the weakness was physical. There is also no indication that Paul's trembling was because of enemies. Many say it was because of the awesome  responsibility he felt weighing on him and/or because he had just come from Athens where his presentation bombed.
2016-07-12 15:12:16 -04:00
Henry Whitney 54279cf480 κοπιαω has element of difficulty absent in UDB 2016-07-12 14:17:49 -04:00
Henry Whitney 3f2d3b6613 resolved ambiguity of "look" 2016-07-12 14:16:37 -04:00
Hanker10 6c66e17fcb 1 Cor 1:25 change confusing wording
1 Cor 1:25 change confusing wording. God is not foolish or weak but appears so to the worldly.
2016-07-12 13:57:32 -04:00
Hanker10 aa98f27228 1 Cor 1:18 change "know" to "understand"
1 Cor 1:18 change "know" to "understand"
2016-07-12 13:51:33 -04:00
Hanker10 b24ab0ccef 1 Cor 1:17 confusing structure changed
1 Cor 1:17 confusing structure changed
2016-07-12 13:49:51 -04:00
Hanker10 8793409dce 1 Cor 1:10 change wording
1 Cor 1:10 change wording. "this" to "your" since there is no prior reference to what the argument is.
2016-07-12 13:36:54 -04:00
Hanker10 36ee701aa5 1 Cor 1:9 change wording
1 Cor 1:9 change wording to avoid the connotation that God's keeping of the promise is only in the future. The original is a statement of fact.
2016-07-12 13:32:29 -04:00
Hanker10 c781d3c30a 1 Cor 1:7 change wording
1 Cor 1:7 change wording to avoid the connotation that
2016-07-12 13:28:07 -04:00
Hanker10 c488916e01 1 Cor 1:6 change wording
1 Cor 1:6 change wording to avoid the idea that the confirmation was done by the Corinthians
2016-07-12 13:23:01 -04:00
Hanker10 f29116fbe7 1 Cor 1:5 change wording
1 Cor 1:5 change wording at the end of the verse. "to speak his truth and to know God" is too restrictive. The speech and the knowledge are general, not just theological.
2016-07-12 10:49:12 -04:00
Henry Whitney 2e2e55f7f6 corrected correction 2016-07-11 16:45:26 -04:00
Henry Whitney 75771b7f2c removed passive 2016-07-11 16:45:04 -04:00
Henry Whitney f6f427fa00 3:21-22 clarification 2016-07-11 16:20:54 -04:00
Henry Whitney 62b8179b53 3:18-19 cleanup 2016-07-11 15:26:40 -04:00
Henry Whitney ccb4d3a6b9 zapped bad commas 2016-07-11 15:22:29 -04:00
Henry Whitney 7a4171025d 3:15 made complete sentence 2016-07-11 15:19:26 -04:00
Henry Whitney bd9f6e6b98 3:14-15 explicating logic 2016-07-11 15:17:22 -04:00
Henry Whitney 5988458b9e building materials 2016-07-11 14:30:55 -04:00
Henry Whitney c2158424e7 the "building" is not a "dwelling" 2016-07-11 12:53:04 -04:00
Henry Whitney 6097f7a528 concretized "dwelling" 2016-07-11 12:49:52 -04:00
Henry Whitney bc950793f1 connectors 2016-07-11 12:35:53 -04:00
Henry Whitney 370db91ffc smoothed out clauses 2016-07-11 12:35:53 -04:00
Henry Whitney d4d6f599de more concrete vocabulary 2016-07-11 11:59:14 -04:00
Henry Whitney 0e1c52d7a8 "of glory" modifies "lord" rather than telling what people would do 2016-07-11 11:59:14 -04:00
Henry Whitney 5078809e1c Attempted de-figurativization 2016-07-11 10:24:00 -04:00
Henry Whitney a496fe9cc9 2:3 Restructured to remove awkwardness 2016-07-11 09:56:33 -04:00
Henry Whitney 017b4d00f2 removed comma splice 2016-07-08 16:47:51 -04:00
Henry Whitney 15d85fed92 spurious comma 2016-07-08 16:40:43 -04:00
Henry Whitney 060a05f383 spurious comma 2016-07-08 16:40:43 -04:00
Henry Whitney 29207ff4a2 1:27 smoothed out grammar 2016-07-08 16:15:34 -04:00
Henry Whitney 9e413fd5b3 1:24 restored TFT
To say that "Christ is his power and the [his?] wisdom" is highly
abstract.
2016-07-08 15:52:51 -04:00
Henry Whitney ebd6cd4888 1:20 clarification 2016-07-08 15:21:27 -04:00
Henry Whitney ae987df147 1:17 clarification 2016-07-08 15:01:28 -04:00
Henry Whitney 6eb86aa978 zapped double spaces 2016-07-08 14:57:38 -04:00
Henry Whitney 12109f4bb8 comma
The comma denotes that Paul can say that he gives thanks because of the
grace. No comma denotes that the grace is the reason he gives thanks.
2016-07-08 13:55:07 -04:00
Henry Whitney 597f5392b3 stray line 2016-07-08 13:53:40 -04:00
Henry Whitney 267526185c corrected misspelling 2016-07-08 13:43:38 -04:00
Henry Whitney a7eb45cd10 specified both valences of "write" 2016-07-08 13:29:24 -04:00
Henry Whitney 856727f81b zapped extra empty lines 2016-07-08 13:27:32 -04:00
Tom Warren 45bcde799f baptism for the dead
commentary in the text
2016-06-29 06:33:45 -04:00
Tom Warren c6a36137aa Clarity on crowns
and olive leaves
2016-06-28 23:46:35 -04:00
Tom Warren b567b6cb5f Simplify 2016-06-28 06:47:02 -04:00
Tom Warren 0feca203e8 Sea of Reeds
continuity
2016-06-28 04:12:11 -04:00
Henry Whitney 3a7d17fee6 Lowercasing mid-sentence "Scriptur" 2016-06-20 16:25:02 -04:00
pohlig 59e3a372a6 Update 08.usfm 2016-05-19 13:37:47 -04:00
pohlig 4f75acea14 Update 01.usfm 2016-05-19 13:30:21 -04:00
pohlig f4a879882f Update 01.usfm 2016-05-19 13:28:22 -04:00
lrsallee 47268a0ab6 1Co 12:1 UDB
Removed double-space from line.
2016-05-11 09:18:55 -04:00
lrsallee fd542ee83a 1Co 11:34 UDB
Removed double-space from line.
2016-05-11 09:17:49 -04:00
Henry Whitney 5551b82649 Update 12.usfm 2016-05-05 10:40:51 +05:45
pohlig e0dae6e4c6 Update 15.usfm 2016-04-22 14:39:46 -04:00
pohlig 187db5c0a4 Update 13.usfm 2016-04-22 12:23:04 -04:00
pohlig 5ff639f45b Update 13.usfm 2016-04-22 12:21:32 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 55a1862e25 V1 sea of Reeds 2016-04-14 16:12:36 -04:00
Apache Production e3fd5a5d05 Added README.md for each book with links to door43.org 2016-04-05 15:56:40 +00:00
Richard Mahn 78b7b614f7 Initial commit from Etherpad 2016-04-01 21:07:40 +00:00