Hanker10
ca45c969d5
1 Cor 9:16 change wording for clarity
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1 Cor 9:16 change wording for clarity
2016-07-13 16:41:59 -04:00
Hanker10
d2ceca9836
1 Cor 9:15 change wording for clarity
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1 Cor 9:15 change wording "money" to "any of these things" because the rights Paul could have claimed go beyond the monetary and other changes for clarity
2016-07-13 16:40:23 -04:00
Hanker10
83ddca4b73
1 Cor 9:10 cut extra wording
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1 Cor 9:10 cut extra wording at the end, ", just like an an apostle over his church" since this is not at all in the text. Besides, it gives the idea that apostles have churches like pastors, but apostles are sent out, pastors stay.
2016-07-13 16:32:36 -04:00
Hanker10
4d1454350f
1 Cor 9:9 add missing word
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1 Cor 9:9 add missing word
2016-07-13 16:30:08 -04:00
Hanker10
463f4fcf0a
1 Cor 9:5 change wording
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1 Cor 9:5 change wording to include missing ideas from the original
2016-07-13 16:24:24 -04:00
Hanker10
58cd312c16
1 Cor 9:3 change wording
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1 Cor 9:3 change wording for clarity
2016-07-13 16:23:00 -04:00
Hanker10
410f926034
1 Cor 8:2 improve wording
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1 Cor 8:2 improve wording
2016-07-13 13:38:11 -04:00
Hanker10
d86ec39351
1 Cor 7:36 improve wording
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1 Cor 7:36 improve wording
2016-07-13 13:32:22 -04:00
Hanker10
d93ff11a0b
1 Cor 7:35 improve wording
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1 Cor 7:35 improve wording
2016-07-13 13:31:11 -04:00
Hanker10
412b480445
1 Cor 7:34 change wording
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1 Cor 7:34 change wording to keep the ideas closer to the original
2016-07-13 13:28:47 -04:00
Hanker10
053c7eb3a8
1 Cor 7:34 change "girls" to "young ladies"
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1 Cor 7:34 change "girls" to "young ladies"
2016-07-13 13:24:49 -04:00
Hanker10
44a4ca5dd5
1 Cor 7:33 change "day to day" to "ordinary"
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1 Cor 7:33 change "day to day" to "ordinary"
2016-07-13 13:22:07 -04:00
Hanker10
7764530cfb
1 Cor 7:30 change "shed a tear"
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1 Cor 7:30 change "shed a tear" to what you see because it is an idiom that could be unfamiliar to many. Also, dropped "or in their hearts" after "joy on their faces" because this is added. Also, "they wanted" after "to buy something." These are all additions that qualify the ideas too far.
2016-07-13 13:18:23 -04:00
Hanker10
9ce09929d4
1 Cor 7:21 change word "buy" to "gain"
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1 Cor 7:21 change word "buy" to "gain" since not all slaves had to purchase their freedom and this idea is not in the original
2016-07-13 12:55:30 -04:00
Hanker10
107391498f
1 Cor 7:11 drop last sentence
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1 Cor 7:11 drop last sentence, "These are the commands of the Lord." since this is not in the original and is repeated from verse 10 unnecessarily.
2016-07-13 12:43:08 -04:00
Hanker10
df0db16a31
1 Cor 7:6 change wording
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1 Cor 7:6 change wording to include the concept of concession (as in ULB)
2016-07-13 12:39:21 -04:00
Hanker10
228ebbefa9
1 Cor 6:13 change wording
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1 Cor 6:13 change wording: "person" is too broad a term to represent "stomach."
2016-07-13 10:32:16 -04:00
Hanker10
b81aff5ce9
1 Cor 6:12 correct faulty wording
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1 Cor 6:12 correct faulty wording
2016-07-13 10:23:42 -04:00
Hanker10
e248c2a714
1 Cor 6:10 change wording about the kingdom
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1 Cor 6:10 change wording about the kingdom
2016-07-13 10:20:58 -04:00
Hanker10
4ffcbb6348
1 Cor 6:9 change wording about the kingdom
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1 Cor 6:9 change wording about the kingdom
2016-07-13 10:17:12 -04:00
Hanker10
0f17ab3cf8
1 Cor 6:5 change wording
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1 Cor 6:5 change wording to include the idea of shaming
2016-07-13 10:08:42 -04:00
Hanker10
7d2631d626
1 Cor 6:1 change wording
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1 Cor 6:1 change wording to include the idea of "daring to" since their practice violated the sanctity of the body of believers
2016-07-13 10:00:34 -04:00
Henry Whitney
1f33510e85
extra empty paras
2016-07-13 09:30:12 -04:00
Hanker10
fb678a8761
1 Cor 5:10 change words for clarity
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1 Cor 5:10 change words for clarity
2016-07-12 21:33:58 -04:00
Hanker10
9b04192d61
1 Cor 5:9 change word for clarity
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1 Cor 5:9 change word for clarity: "be with" becomes "keep company with"
2016-07-12 21:28:43 -04:00
Hanker10
3131be8755
1 Cor 5:7 change word for clarity
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1 Cor 5:7 change word for clarity: "affect" becomes "infect"
2016-07-12 21:26:55 -04:00
Hanker10
0fe2f94a5c
1 Cor 5:5 add 2 phrases for clarity
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1 Cor 5:5 add 2 phrases for clarity
2016-07-12 21:24:58 -04:00
Hanker10
0d7361ece1
1 Cor 4:21 change one word
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1 Cor 4:21 change one word: "rod" so that the meaning comes out better
2016-07-12 17:22:42 -04:00
Hanker10
88001c8b9a
1 Cor 4:7 correct wrong noun number
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1 Cor 4:7 correct wrong noun number
2016-07-12 17:17:17 -04:00
Hanker10
2a4b1db682
1 Cor 4:6 correct bad wording
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1 Cor 4:6 correct bad wording
2016-07-12 17:15:33 -04:00
Hanker10
7be4104d54
1 Cor 4:3 change wording
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1 Cor 4:3 change wording. Paul does not say he is not able to judge himself. He does not bother judging himself.
2016-07-12 17:12:05 -04:00
Hanker10
f160bd67ce
1 Cor 3:13 change wording
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1 Cor 3:13 change wording, "how hard we worked for him" to what you see.
2016-07-12 16:54:07 -04:00
Hanker10
4b3ee1d0dd
1 Cor 3:10 change wording
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1 Cor 3:10 change wording to correct idea about Paul's giftedness.
2016-07-12 16:50:44 -04:00
Henry Whitney
828a4fd1f2
typo
2016-07-12 16:43:35 -04:00
Henry Whitney
ab1a8ca559
typo
2016-07-12 16:43:35 -04:00
Hanker10
b29e30e7dd
1 Cor 3:4 change wording
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1 Cor 3:4 change wording: "tearing the church into pieces" is an assumption here. This is probably true, but Paul is working up to this evaluation of the Corinthians. It is too early to let that cat out of the bag here.
2016-07-12 15:57:30 -04:00
Hanker10
c1ceab7596
1 Cor 3:2 change "meat" to "solid food"
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1 Cor 3:2 change "meat" to "solid food"
2016-07-12 15:53:39 -04:00
Hanker10
eccbb0a764
1 Cor 2:15 change one word
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1 Cor 2:15 change one word: "judgment" to "evaluate" since this will avoid the connotation (at least for English speakers) of patronizing dominance over others.
2016-07-12 15:50:30 -04:00
Hanker10
45b66a3ef9
1 Cor 2:3 change wording
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1 Cor 2:3 change wording since there is no indication the weakness was physical. There is also no indication that Paul's trembling was because of enemies. Many say it was because of the awesome responsibility he felt weighing on him and/or because he had just come from Athens where his presentation bombed.
2016-07-12 15:12:16 -04:00
Henry Whitney
54279cf480
κοπιαω has element of difficulty absent in UDB
2016-07-12 14:17:49 -04:00
Henry Whitney
3f2d3b6613
resolved ambiguity of "look"
2016-07-12 14:16:37 -04:00
Hanker10
6c66e17fcb
1 Cor 1:25 change confusing wording
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1 Cor 1:25 change confusing wording. God is not foolish or weak but appears so to the worldly.
2016-07-12 13:57:32 -04:00
Hanker10
aa98f27228
1 Cor 1:18 change "know" to "understand"
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1 Cor 1:18 change "know" to "understand"
2016-07-12 13:51:33 -04:00
Hanker10
b24ab0ccef
1 Cor 1:17 confusing structure changed
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1 Cor 1:17 confusing structure changed
2016-07-12 13:49:51 -04:00
Hanker10
8793409dce
1 Cor 1:10 change wording
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1 Cor 1:10 change wording. "this" to "your" since there is no prior reference to what the argument is.
2016-07-12 13:36:54 -04:00
Hanker10
36ee701aa5
1 Cor 1:9 change wording
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1 Cor 1:9 change wording to avoid the connotation that God's keeping of the promise is only in the future. The original is a statement of fact.
2016-07-12 13:32:29 -04:00
Hanker10
c781d3c30a
1 Cor 1:7 change wording
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1 Cor 1:7 change wording to avoid the connotation that
2016-07-12 13:28:07 -04:00
Hanker10
c488916e01
1 Cor 1:6 change wording
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1 Cor 1:6 change wording to avoid the idea that the confirmation was done by the Corinthians
2016-07-12 13:23:01 -04:00
Hanker10
f29116fbe7
1 Cor 1:5 change wording
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1 Cor 1:5 change wording at the end of the verse. "to speak his truth and to know God" is too restrictive. The speech and the knowledge are general, not just theological.
2016-07-12 10:49:12 -04:00
Henry Whitney
2e2e55f7f6
corrected correction
2016-07-11 16:45:26 -04:00
Henry Whitney
75771b7f2c
removed passive
2016-07-11 16:45:04 -04:00
Henry Whitney
f6f427fa00
3:21-22 clarification
2016-07-11 16:20:54 -04:00
Henry Whitney
62b8179b53
3:18-19 cleanup
2016-07-11 15:26:40 -04:00
Henry Whitney
ccb4d3a6b9
zapped bad commas
2016-07-11 15:22:29 -04:00
Henry Whitney
7a4171025d
3:15 made complete sentence
2016-07-11 15:19:26 -04:00
Henry Whitney
bd9f6e6b98
3:14-15 explicating logic
2016-07-11 15:17:22 -04:00
Henry Whitney
5988458b9e
building materials
2016-07-11 14:30:55 -04:00
Henry Whitney
c2158424e7
the "building" is not a "dwelling"
2016-07-11 12:53:04 -04:00
Henry Whitney
6097f7a528
concretized "dwelling"
2016-07-11 12:49:52 -04:00
Henry Whitney
bc950793f1
connectors
2016-07-11 12:35:53 -04:00
Henry Whitney
370db91ffc
smoothed out clauses
2016-07-11 12:35:53 -04:00
Henry Whitney
d4d6f599de
more concrete vocabulary
2016-07-11 11:59:14 -04:00
Henry Whitney
0e1c52d7a8
"of glory" modifies "lord" rather than telling what people would do
2016-07-11 11:59:14 -04:00
Henry Whitney
5078809e1c
Attempted de-figurativization
2016-07-11 10:24:00 -04:00
Henry Whitney
a496fe9cc9
2:3 Restructured to remove awkwardness
2016-07-11 09:56:33 -04:00
Henry Whitney
017b4d00f2
removed comma splice
2016-07-08 16:47:51 -04:00
Henry Whitney
15d85fed92
spurious comma
2016-07-08 16:40:43 -04:00
Henry Whitney
060a05f383
spurious comma
2016-07-08 16:40:43 -04:00
Henry Whitney
29207ff4a2
1:27 smoothed out grammar
2016-07-08 16:15:34 -04:00
Henry Whitney
9e413fd5b3
1:24 restored TFT
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To say that "Christ is his power and the [his?] wisdom" is highly
abstract.
2016-07-08 15:52:51 -04:00
Henry Whitney
ebd6cd4888
1:20 clarification
2016-07-08 15:21:27 -04:00
Henry Whitney
ae987df147
1:17 clarification
2016-07-08 15:01:28 -04:00
Henry Whitney
6eb86aa978
zapped double spaces
2016-07-08 14:57:38 -04:00
Henry Whitney
12109f4bb8
comma
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The comma denotes that Paul can say that he gives thanks because of the
grace. No comma denotes that the grace is the reason he gives thanks.
2016-07-08 13:55:07 -04:00
Henry Whitney
597f5392b3
stray line
2016-07-08 13:53:40 -04:00
Henry Whitney
267526185c
corrected misspelling
2016-07-08 13:43:38 -04:00
Henry Whitney
a7eb45cd10
specified both valences of "write"
2016-07-08 13:29:24 -04:00
Henry Whitney
856727f81b
zapped extra empty lines
2016-07-08 13:27:32 -04:00
Tom Warren
45bcde799f
baptism for the dead
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commentary in the text
2016-06-29 06:33:45 -04:00
Tom Warren
c6a36137aa
Clarity on crowns
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and olive leaves
2016-06-28 23:46:35 -04:00
Tom Warren
b567b6cb5f
Simplify
2016-06-28 06:47:02 -04:00
Tom Warren
0feca203e8
Sea of Reeds
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continuity
2016-06-28 04:12:11 -04:00
Henry Whitney
3a7d17fee6
Lowercasing mid-sentence "Scriptur"
2016-06-20 16:25:02 -04:00
pohlig
59e3a372a6
Update 08.usfm
2016-05-19 13:37:47 -04:00
pohlig
4f75acea14
Update 01.usfm
2016-05-19 13:30:21 -04:00
pohlig
f4a879882f
Update 01.usfm
2016-05-19 13:28:22 -04:00
lrsallee
47268a0ab6
1Co 12:1 UDB
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Removed double-space from line.
2016-05-11 09:18:55 -04:00
lrsallee
fd542ee83a
1Co 11:34 UDB
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Removed double-space from line.
2016-05-11 09:17:49 -04:00
Henry Whitney
5551b82649
Update 12.usfm
2016-05-05 10:40:51 +05:45
pohlig
e0dae6e4c6
Update 15.usfm
2016-04-22 14:39:46 -04:00
pohlig
187db5c0a4
Update 13.usfm
2016-04-22 12:23:04 -04:00
pohlig
5ff639f45b
Update 13.usfm
2016-04-22 12:21:32 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel
55a1862e25
V1 sea of Reeds
2016-04-14 16:12:36 -04:00
Apache Production
e3fd5a5d05
Added README.md for each book with links to door43.org
2016-04-05 15:56:40 +00:00
Richard Mahn
78b7b614f7
Initial commit from Etherpad
2016-04-01 21:07:40 +00:00