Commit Graph

195 Commits

Author SHA1 Message Date
Henry Whitney 75771b7f2c removed passive 2016-07-11 16:45:04 -04:00
Henry Whitney f6f427fa00 3:21-22 clarification 2016-07-11 16:20:54 -04:00
Henry Whitney 62b8179b53 3:18-19 cleanup 2016-07-11 15:26:40 -04:00
Henry Whitney ccb4d3a6b9 zapped bad commas 2016-07-11 15:22:29 -04:00
Henry Whitney 7a4171025d 3:15 made complete sentence 2016-07-11 15:19:26 -04:00
Henry Whitney bd9f6e6b98 3:14-15 explicating logic 2016-07-11 15:17:22 -04:00
Henry Whitney 5988458b9e building materials 2016-07-11 14:30:55 -04:00
Henry Whitney c2158424e7 the "building" is not a "dwelling" 2016-07-11 12:53:04 -04:00
Henry Whitney 6097f7a528 concretized "dwelling" 2016-07-11 12:49:52 -04:00
Henry Whitney bc950793f1 connectors 2016-07-11 12:35:53 -04:00
Henry Whitney 370db91ffc smoothed out clauses 2016-07-11 12:35:53 -04:00
Henry Whitney d4d6f599de more concrete vocabulary 2016-07-11 11:59:14 -04:00
Henry Whitney 0e1c52d7a8 "of glory" modifies "lord" rather than telling what people would do 2016-07-11 11:59:14 -04:00
Henry Whitney 5078809e1c Attempted de-figurativization 2016-07-11 10:24:00 -04:00
Henry Whitney a496fe9cc9 2:3 Restructured to remove awkwardness 2016-07-11 09:56:33 -04:00
Henry Whitney 017b4d00f2 removed comma splice 2016-07-08 16:47:51 -04:00
Henry Whitney 15d85fed92 spurious comma 2016-07-08 16:40:43 -04:00
Henry Whitney 060a05f383 spurious comma 2016-07-08 16:40:43 -04:00
Henry Whitney 29207ff4a2 1:27 smoothed out grammar 2016-07-08 16:15:34 -04:00
Henry Whitney 9e413fd5b3 1:24 restored TFT
To say that "Christ is his power and the [his?] wisdom" is highly
abstract.
2016-07-08 15:52:51 -04:00
Henry Whitney ebd6cd4888 1:20 clarification 2016-07-08 15:21:27 -04:00
Henry Whitney ae987df147 1:17 clarification 2016-07-08 15:01:28 -04:00
Henry Whitney 6eb86aa978 zapped double spaces 2016-07-08 14:57:38 -04:00
Henry Whitney 12109f4bb8 comma
The comma denotes that Paul can say that he gives thanks because of the
grace. No comma denotes that the grace is the reason he gives thanks.
2016-07-08 13:55:07 -04:00
Henry Whitney 597f5392b3 stray line 2016-07-08 13:53:40 -04:00
Henry Whitney 267526185c corrected misspelling 2016-07-08 13:43:38 -04:00
Henry Whitney a7eb45cd10 specified both valences of "write" 2016-07-08 13:29:24 -04:00
Henry Whitney 856727f81b zapped extra empty lines 2016-07-08 13:27:32 -04:00
Tom Warren 45bcde799f baptism for the dead
commentary in the text
2016-06-29 06:33:45 -04:00
Tom Warren c6a36137aa Clarity on crowns
and olive leaves
2016-06-28 23:46:35 -04:00
Tom Warren b567b6cb5f Simplify 2016-06-28 06:47:02 -04:00
Tom Warren 0feca203e8 Sea of Reeds
continuity
2016-06-28 04:12:11 -04:00
Henry Whitney 3a7d17fee6 Lowercasing mid-sentence "Scriptur" 2016-06-20 16:25:02 -04:00
pohlig 59e3a372a6 Update 08.usfm 2016-05-19 13:37:47 -04:00
pohlig 4f75acea14 Update 01.usfm 2016-05-19 13:30:21 -04:00
pohlig f4a879882f Update 01.usfm 2016-05-19 13:28:22 -04:00
lrsallee 47268a0ab6 1Co 12:1 UDB
Removed double-space from line.
2016-05-11 09:18:55 -04:00
lrsallee fd542ee83a 1Co 11:34 UDB
Removed double-space from line.
2016-05-11 09:17:49 -04:00
Henry Whitney 5551b82649 Update 12.usfm 2016-05-05 10:40:51 +05:45
pohlig e0dae6e4c6 Update 15.usfm 2016-04-22 14:39:46 -04:00
pohlig 187db5c0a4 Update 13.usfm 2016-04-22 12:23:04 -04:00
pohlig 5ff639f45b Update 13.usfm 2016-04-22 12:21:32 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 55a1862e25 V1 sea of Reeds 2016-04-14 16:12:36 -04:00
Apache Production e3fd5a5d05 Added README.md for each book with links to door43.org 2016-04-05 15:56:40 +00:00
Richard Mahn 78b7b614f7 Initial commit from Etherpad 2016-04-01 21:07:40 +00:00