en_tn/pro/27/23.md

Be sure you know the condition of your flocks, and be concerned about your herds

These two phrases have basically the same meaning and are used together for emphasis. (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism)

Does a crown endure for all generations?

AT: "A crown does not last for all generations." (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-rquestion)

a crown

This refers to a king's rule over his kingdom. AT: "a king's rule" (rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy)

the new growth appears

"the new sprouts appear" or "the new grass starts to grow"