Commit Graph

1522 Commits

Author SHA1 Message Date
pohlig 5aa6f16489 Update 01.usfm 2016-05-20 19:55:45 -04:00
Tom Warren 7ec2576cf3 Vs 7
Clarity and simplification
2016-05-20 15:34:59 -04:00
Tom Warren 7fbf2042c6 Comma removed from vs 24 2016-05-20 10:31:20 -04:00
Tom Warren 8a0e9a24d5 Vs 24
Master (regardless of the formal) is here the first word in the sentence in two exclamations.
So both are caps. Matching the UDB.
2016-05-20 08:21:57 -04:00
Tom Warren 054d268c4e Vs 4
Clean up
2016-05-20 08:08:16 -04:00
Tom Warren 3ac0ef2c82 Vss 22-23
Shortened sentences for pithiness.
2016-05-20 08:05:52 -04:00
pohlig f8e2e9586c Update 04.usfm 2016-05-19 19:39:18 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 74e82e7968 V26-28 rewrite 2016-05-19 17:55:04 -04:00
pohlig 93219bf385 Update 03.usfm 2016-05-19 17:49:17 -04:00
pohlig 05fc53f7b1 Update 03.usfm 2016-05-19 17:46:21 -04:00
pohlig e10682f4cd Update 03.usfm 2016-05-19 17:44:46 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel a94cb07188 V23-26 rewrite 2016-05-19 17:12:54 -04:00
pohlig 0542d4d001 Update 01.usfm 2016-05-19 17:02:08 -04:00
Tom Warren 6e382fe4ed 1JN 4:18
Throws fear out, more natural than "throws out fear.
2016-05-19 16:47:44 -04:00
hharrissWA c7123d0336 Update 29.usfm 2016-05-19 15:44:43 -05:00
hharrissWA 0a1ff1a360 Update 28.usfm 2016-05-19 15:40:18 -05:00
BramvandenHeuvel fc30ccbe36 V14-22 corrections 2016-05-19 16:29:42 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 447c0e852c V19 come, follow me 2016-05-19 15:44:08 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 28b9190a80 V1 sea 2016-05-19 15:32:06 -04:00
hharrissWA a20d8d3ea2 Update 27.usfm 2016-05-19 14:28:45 -05:00
BramvandenHeuvel 4450b7958c V11, 13 rewrites 2016-05-19 15:15:56 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 99580c7c51 V9 in Galilee 2016-05-19 14:27:46 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel d8834ba117 V11 in Galilee 2016-05-19 14:27:27 -04:00
hharrissWA 3e3dd57a5b Update 27.usfm 2016-05-19 13:24:56 -05:00
hharrissWA a3334cc76b Update 26.usfm 2016-05-19 13:13:41 -05:00
BramvandenHeuvel 87066cbb3b V5 "The whole country of" 2016-05-19 14:11:22 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel a3280863fc V1-6 partial rewrite/corrections 2016-05-19 14:07:28 -04:00
pohlig fd9d254de6 Update 03.usfm 2016-05-19 13:46:37 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 47035b2941 V32 rewrite 2016-05-19 12:54:06 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel f64850f19d V2 punctuation 2016-05-19 12:23:10 -04:00
hharrissWA 8d85628f0a Update 25.usfm 2016-05-19 11:10:55 -05:00
hharrissWA 0d50e1f642 Update 24.usfm 2016-05-19 11:08:29 -05:00
hharrissWA aa2b9cf685 Update 22.usfm 2016-05-19 11:05:52 -05:00
hharrissWA bec898f34a Update 21.usfm 2016-05-19 11:04:59 -05:00
hharrissWA 8292085cb2 Update 19.usfm 2016-05-19 11:03:56 -05:00
Tom Warren 0d14a62fcf Vs 14
The placement of the Exclamation point, this follows the majority of modern translation. More an appeal to pay attention, rather than pointing the the imminent return of Christ.
2016-05-19 12:02:40 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 9e97ee3f79 V24, 25 punctuation 2016-05-19 12:01:08 -04:00
Tom Warren 3160393199 Vs 18
relative clause with no comma (don't want to restrict who the mockers are).
2016-05-19 11:58:26 -04:00
hharrissWA 8648c8a929 Update 18.usfm 2016-05-19 10:57:59 -05:00
hharrissWA 9d461a15ac Update 17.usfm 2016-05-19 10:56:37 -05:00
BramvandenHeuvel ab467d9e78 V10 dried-up 2016-05-19 11:47:08 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 9d0208d79b V10, 23 commas 2016-05-19 11:11:19 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel da7ac3ce64 V16 delete comma 2016-05-19 11:09:08 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel e416b03b3c V12 who lived before you 2016-05-19 11:01:00 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel c5f8d6206e V6 Jordan River 2016-05-19 10:56:30 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel c448940cbb V18, 19 added commas 2016-05-19 10:49:10 -04:00
hharrissWA bb12ef5fed Update 16.usfm 2016-05-19 07:52:44 -05:00
hharrissWA 26d9d08b06 Update 15.usfm 2016-05-19 07:45:59 -05:00
BramvandenHeuvel d3edbb1b6b Update 06.usfm 2016-05-18 16:05:00 -04:00
Tom Warren aa2b9e84de Update 05.usfm 2016-05-18 13:39:44 -04:00