en_tn/lev/27/07.md

sixty years old and up

"sixty years old and older"

sixty ... fifteen ... ten

"60 ... 15 ... 10" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-numbers)

fifteen shekels

If it is necessary to use modern weight units, here are two ways of doing it. AT: "fifteen pieces of silver" or "150 grams of silver" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-bweight)

for a female ten shekels

The phrases "of that age" and "your standard value must be" are left out, but are meant to be understood. AT: "for a female of that age your standard value must be ten shekels" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-ellipsis)

the person being given must be presented to the priest

This can be stated in active form. AT "he must present to the priest the person he is giving" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive)