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 \v 8 So the men got up and went. Joshua commanded those who went to write the description of the land, saying, "Go up and down in the land and write a description of it and return to me. I will cast lots for you here before Yahweh at Shiloh."
-\v 9 The men left and walked up and down through the land and wrote a description of it in a scroll by its cities in seven sections, listing the cities in each section. Then they returned to Joshua in the camp at Shiloh.
+\v 9 The men left and walked up and down in the land and wrote a description of it in a scroll by its cities in seven sections, listing the cities in each section. Then they returned to Joshua in the camp at Shiloh.
 
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-\v 10 Then Joshua cast lots for them at Shiloh before Yahweh. And there Joshua assigned the land to the people of Israel—to each given his portion of the land.
+\v 10 Then Joshua cast lots for them at Shiloh before Yahweh. And there Joshua assigned the land to the people of Israel—to each was given his portion of the land.
 
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 \v 11 The assignment of land for the tribe of Benjamin was given to each of their clans. The territory of their assigned land was located between the descendants of Judah and the descendants of Joseph.
-\v 12 On the north side their border began at Jordan. The border went up to the ridge north of Jericho, and then up through the hill country westward. There it reached the wilderness of Beth Aven.
+\v 12 On the north side, their border began at Jordan. The border went up to the ridge north of Jericho, and then up through the hill country westward. There it reached the wilderness of Beth Aven.
 
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 \v 13 From there the border passed along south in the direction of Luz (the same place as Bethel). Then the border went down to Ataroth Addar, by the mountain that lies south of Beth Horon.
-\v 14 The boundary goes in another direction: on the western side it turns toward the south, heading toward the mountain that is across from Beth Horon. This boundary ended at Kiriath Baal (that is, Kiriath Jearim), a city that belonged to the tribe of Judah. This formed the border on the western side.
+\v 14 The boundary then went in another direction: on the western side it turned toward the south, heading toward the mountain across from Beth Horon. This boundary ended at Kiriath Baal (that is, Kiriath Jearim), a city that belonged to the tribe of Judah. This formed the border on the western side.
 
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 \v 15 The south side began just outside of Kiriath Jearim. The border went from there to Ephron, to the spring of the waters of Nephtoah.
-\v 16 The boundary then went down to the border of the mountain that overlooks the valley of Ben Hinnom, which was at the northern end of the valley of Rephaim. It then went down to the valley of Hinnom, south of the slope of the Jebusites, and continued down to En Rogel.
+\v 16 The boundary then went down to the border of the mountain which was opposite the valley of Ben Hinnom, which was at the northern end of the valley of Rephaim. It then went down to the valley of Hinnom, south of the slope of the Jebusites, and continued down to En Rogel.
 
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 \v 17 It turned northward, going in the direction of En Shemesh, and from there it went out to Geliloth, which was opposite the ascent of Adummim. Then it went down to the Stone of Bohan (Bohan was a son of Reuben).
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 \v 25 There were also the cities of Gibeon, Ramah, Beeroth,
 \v 26 Mizpeh, Kephirah, Mozah,
 \v 27 Rekem, Irpeel, Taralah,
-\v 28 Zelah, Haeleph, Jebus (the same as Jerusalem), Gibeah, and Kiriath. There were fourteen cities, not counting their villages. This was the inheritance of Benjamin for its clans.
+\v 28 Zelah, Haeleph, Jebus (the same as Jerusalem), Gibeah, and Kiriath. There were fourteen cities, not counting their villages. This was the inheritance of Benjamin for their clans.
 
 
 

06-JOS/19.usfm

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 \v 32 The sixth casting of lots fell to tribe of Naphtali, and it was given to their clans.
 \v 33 Their border ran from Heleph, from the oak at Zaanannim, on to Adaminekeb and Jabneel, as far as Lakkum; it ended at the Jordan.
-\v 34 The border turned westward to Aznothtabor and went on to Hukkok; it touched Zebulun on the south, and reached to Asher on the west and Judah on the east at the Jordan River.
+\v 34 The border turned westward to Aznoth Tabor and went on to Hukkok; it touched Zebulun on the south, and reached to Asher on the west and Judah on the east at the Jordan River.
 
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 \v 35 The fortified cities were Ziddim, Zer, Hammath, Rakkath, Chinnereth,
 \v 36 Adamah, Ramah, Hazor,
-\v 37 Kedesh, Edrei, and Enhazor.
+\v 37 Kedesh, Edrei, and En Hazor.
 
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-\v 38 There were also Yiron, Migdalel, Horem, Bethanath, and Beth Shemesh. There were nineteen cities, not counting their villages.
+\v 38 There were also Yiron, Migdalel, Horem, Beth Anath, and Beth Shemesh. There were nineteen cities, not counting their villages.
 \v 39 This was the inheritance of the tribe of Naphtali, and it was given to their clans—the cities, including their villages.
 
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 \v 43 It also included Elon, Timnah, Ekron,
 \v 44 Eltekeh, Gibbethon, Baalath,
-\v 45 Jehud, Beneberak, Gath Rimmon,
+\v 45 Jehud, Bene Berak, Gath Rimmon,
 \v 46 Me Jarkon, and Rakkon along with the territory across from Joppa.
 
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