Other: Anger through Avenge #22

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craig wants to merge 1 commits from Rick_F4 into Restructure

craig commented

2020-05-05 21:04:48 +00:00

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This replaces PR #21.

SusanQuigley commented

2020-05-06 14:35:43 +00:00

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Rick_F3 was based off the master.
Rick_F4 was based off "Restructure."

These look good. Here are some more changes to make to Rick_F4. Let me know when you are done. (The number below is the line number on the left of the page in edit mode.)

anger - Delete #38. There should be only one empty line at the bottom.
anguish - #5: Change "inflicts pain" to "inflict pain" (3s present tense)
armor - #5: Delete "weapons" (Plural)
arrogant - #5: Add arrogantly (Different part of speech)
ash - #5 Delete "ashes" (Plural)
assembly - #5: See Restructure_instructions on the Restructure branch.
astray - #5 Delete "goes astray" (and gone astray, went astray?) Change "made a mistake" to make a mistake"?

Rick_F3 was based off the master. Rick_F4 was based off "Restructure." These look good. Here are some more changes to make to Rick_F4. Let me know when you are done. (The number below is the line number on the left of the page in edit mode.) anger - Delete #38. There should be only one empty line at the bottom. anguish - #5: Change "inflicts pain" to "inflict pain" (3s present tense) armor - #5: Delete "weapons" (Plural) arrogant - #5: Add arrogantly (Different part of speech) ash - #5 Delete "ashes" (Plural) assembly - #5: See Restructure_instructions on the Restructure branch. astray - #5 Delete "goes astray" (and gone astray, went astray?) Change "made a mistake" to make a mistake"?