en_tn_condensed/jer/33/01.md

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the word of Yahweh came to Jeremiah a second time, while he was ... guard, saying,

"While Jeremiah was ... guard, Yahweh spoke this second message to Jeremiah:". This introduces a special message from God. See Jeremiah 1:13.

came to Jeremiah

There is no need to translate using first person.

he was still shut within

"he was still a prisoner in"

the courtyard of the guard

An open area attached to the king's palace, surrounded by buildings and where they kept prisoners. See Jeremiah 32:2