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It is not the sound of a shout of victory, and it is not the sound of a cry of defeat
The abstract nouns "victory" and "defeat" can be expressed as verbs. Alternate translation: "It is not the sound people make when they have won a battle, and not the sound people make when they have lost a battle" (See: rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-abstractnouns)
shout ... cry
These words translate the same Hebrew word, which fits well with both "victory" and "defeat." There is no such word in English, but if your language has such a word, you may want to use it here.