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-# General Information:
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-A king from the attacking army is speaking to the men under his control.
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 # Dedicate yourselves
 
-It can be stated clearly that the kings say this. Alternate translation: "The kings say to their armies, 'Dedicate yourselves" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-explicit]])
+"The kings say to their armies, 'Dedicate yourselves". A king from the attacking army is speaking to his men.  
 
 # Dedicate yourselves to the gods for the battle
 
-The attacking army tries to ensure that their gods will help them during the war by performing ceremonies and making sacrifices to them. Alternate translation: "Prepare for war by purifying yourselves and sacrificing to the gods" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-explicit]])
+"Prepare for war by purifying yourselves and sacrificing to the gods"
 
-# Arise, let us attack
+# Arise, let us attack at noon
 
-To arise or stand up is a metaphor for no longer watching and thinking and instead beginning to act. Alternate translation: "Let us stop thinking and begin to attack" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])
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-# let us attack at noon
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-"Let us attack Jerusalem at noon"
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-# Woe to us! For the daylight is fading away and the evening shadows are falling
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-The kings say this later in the day when they want their army to keep fighting even though it is getting dark.
+"Let us stop thinking and begin to attack Jerusalem at noon"
 
 # Woe to us! For
 
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 # the daylight is fading away
 
-The end of the day is spoken of in terms of its light becoming dark. Alternate translation: "the day is ending" or "it is beginning to get dark" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]])
+"the day is ending" or "it is beginning to get dark"
 
 # are falling
 
 "are stretching out" or "are getting longer"
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