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Shallum ... Hallohesh

These are names of men. (See: rc://en/ta/man/jit/translate-names)

repaired, along with his daughters

These phrase refer to repairing the wall. Alternate translation: "repaired another section of the wall ... repaired the wall, along with his daughters" (See: rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-ellipsis)

Shallum son of Hallohesh, the official

Shallum was the ruler, not Hallohesh.

official

leader or chief administrator. See how you translated this in Nehemiah 3:9.

half the district

"Half" means one part out of two equal parts. (See: rc://en/ta/man/jit/translate-fraction)