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celebrate with great joy

The abstract noun "joy" can be expressed as a verb. Alternate translation: "rejoice greatly" (See: rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-abstractnouns)

the words that were made known to them

This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "the words that he declared to them" (See: rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive)