467 B
467 B
the place ... was shaken
This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "the place ... shook" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive)
they were all filled with the Holy Spirit
This can be stated in active form. See how you translated this in Acts 2:4. Alternate translation: "the Holy Spirit had filled them all" or "God had filled them all with the Holy Spirit" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive)