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Letters were sent to all the Jews

This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "They sent letters to all the Jews" (See: rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive)

Letters

You may need to use a word for written instructions that is more general than "letter" so that the reader does not think that these documents were about only personal matters.

127 provinces

"one hundred and twenty-seven provinces" (See: rc://en/ta/man/jit/translate-numbers)

wishing the Jews safety and truth

The abstract nouns "safety" and "truth" can be expressed with phrases. Alternate translation: "wishing that the Jews would be safe and that people would be faithful to the Jews" (See: rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-abstractnouns)