Hanker10
45b66a3ef9
1 Cor 2:3 change wording
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1 Cor 2:3 change wording since there is no indication the weakness was physical. There is also no indication that Paul's trembling was because of enemies. Many say it was because of the awesome responsibility he felt weighing on him and/or because he had just come from Athens where his presentation bombed.
2016-07-12 15:12:16 -04:00
Henry Whitney
54279cf480
κοπιαω has element of difficulty absent in UDB
2016-07-12 14:17:49 -04:00
Henry Whitney
3f2d3b6613
resolved ambiguity of "look"
2016-07-12 14:16:37 -04:00
Hanker10
6c66e17fcb
1 Cor 1:25 change confusing wording
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1 Cor 1:25 change confusing wording. God is not foolish or weak but appears so to the worldly.
2016-07-12 13:57:32 -04:00
Hanker10
aa98f27228
1 Cor 1:18 change "know" to "understand"
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1 Cor 1:18 change "know" to "understand"
2016-07-12 13:51:33 -04:00
Hanker10
b24ab0ccef
1 Cor 1:17 confusing structure changed
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1 Cor 1:17 confusing structure changed
2016-07-12 13:49:51 -04:00
Hanker10
8793409dce
1 Cor 1:10 change wording
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1 Cor 1:10 change wording. "this" to "your" since there is no prior reference to what the argument is.
2016-07-12 13:36:54 -04:00
Hanker10
36ee701aa5
1 Cor 1:9 change wording
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1 Cor 1:9 change wording to avoid the connotation that God's keeping of the promise is only in the future. The original is a statement of fact.
2016-07-12 13:32:29 -04:00
Hanker10
c781d3c30a
1 Cor 1:7 change wording
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1 Cor 1:7 change wording to avoid the connotation that
2016-07-12 13:28:07 -04:00
Hanker10
c488916e01
1 Cor 1:6 change wording
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1 Cor 1:6 change wording to avoid the idea that the confirmation was done by the Corinthians
2016-07-12 13:23:01 -04:00
Hanker10
f29116fbe7
1 Cor 1:5 change wording
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1 Cor 1:5 change wording at the end of the verse. "to speak his truth and to know God" is too restrictive. The speech and the knowledge are general, not just theological.
2016-07-12 10:49:12 -04:00
Tom Warren
43dde8ed89
changes
2016-07-12 10:24:10 -04:00
Tom Warren
505515d287
passive to active voice
2016-07-12 09:07:43 -04:00
Tom Warren
6d6ae7a4a5
like the ULB
2016-07-12 09:05:08 -04:00
Tom Warren
5b568d6b85
Added missing
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who was sitting on the cloud
2016-07-12 08:56:14 -04:00
Henry Whitney
2e2e55f7f6
corrected correction
2016-07-11 16:45:26 -04:00
Henry Whitney
75771b7f2c
removed passive
2016-07-11 16:45:04 -04:00
Henry Whitney
f6f427fa00
3:21-22 clarification
2016-07-11 16:20:54 -04:00
pohlig
7b4f4901ab
Update 14.usfm
2016-07-11 15:30:05 -04:00
pohlig
ee3b7873f2
Update 14.usfm
2016-07-11 15:28:13 -04:00
Henry Whitney
62b8179b53
3:18-19 cleanup
2016-07-11 15:26:40 -04:00
Henry Whitney
ccb4d3a6b9
zapped bad commas
2016-07-11 15:22:29 -04:00
Henry Whitney
7a4171025d
3:15 made complete sentence
2016-07-11 15:19:26 -04:00
Henry Whitney
bd9f6e6b98
3:14-15 explicating logic
2016-07-11 15:17:22 -04:00
Henry Whitney
5988458b9e
building materials
2016-07-11 14:30:55 -04:00
Tom Warren
9c110aa968
farmeRs
2016-07-11 14:23:23 -04:00
Tom Warren
ad2d8d517b
Christ's authority
2016-07-11 14:18:29 -04:00
Tom Warren
e8e26089a1
assorted fixes
2016-07-11 13:46:14 -04:00
Tom Warren
a687f49e3e
pigeons throughout
2016-07-11 13:01:52 -04:00
Tom Warren
49740c2647
doves to pidgeons
2016-07-11 13:00:26 -04:00
Henry Whitney
c2158424e7
the "building" is not a "dwelling"
2016-07-11 12:53:04 -04:00
Henry Whitney
6097f7a528
concretized "dwelling"
2016-07-11 12:49:52 -04:00
Henry Whitney
bc950793f1
connectors
2016-07-11 12:35:53 -04:00
Henry Whitney
370db91ffc
smoothed out clauses
2016-07-11 12:35:53 -04:00
Tom Warren
de552993f4
Revision to who is doing what to whom
2016-07-11 12:21:31 -04:00
Tom Warren
c526d3038d
Revised who stayed in Jerusalem
2016-07-11 12:11:55 -04:00
Henry Whitney
d4d6f599de
more concrete vocabulary
2016-07-11 11:59:14 -04:00
Henry Whitney
0e1c52d7a8
"of glory" modifies "lord" rather than telling what people would do
2016-07-11 11:59:14 -04:00
Tom Warren
5623d1ba30
chaste to not having sexual relations
2016-07-11 11:40:32 -04:00
Henry Whitney
5078809e1c
Attempted de-figurativization
2016-07-11 10:24:00 -04:00
Henry Whitney
a496fe9cc9
2:3 Restructured to remove awkwardness
2016-07-11 09:56:33 -04:00
hharrissWA
c422807b58
Update 03.usfm
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v. 10
comma added between clauses
2016-07-10 15:21:43 -05:00
hharrissWA
6458af25ea
Update 02.usfm
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v. 15
A semicolon is not needed because of the presence of the conjunction “and.”
Changed to a comma.
2016-07-10 15:19:46 -05:00
Hanker10
8e987aeccb
Romans 16:25-27 restore idea of doxology
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Romans 16:25-27 restore idea of doxology and follow original wording more closely
2016-07-09 15:01:02 -04:00
Hanker10
183b947655
Romans 16:20 add wording to show meaning
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Romans 16:20 add wording to show meaning
2016-07-09 14:47:31 -04:00
Hanker10
8287726878
Romans 16:19 change wording
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Romans 16:19 change wording to render original more closely
2016-07-09 14:44:14 -04:00
Hanker10
d06e3ba1b3
Romans 16:18 add wording to reflect original
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Romans 16:18 add wording to reflect original better
2016-07-09 14:40:58 -04:00
Hanker10
cf1275aec9
Romans 15:18-19 change wording
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Romans 15:18-19 change wording to reflect original
2016-07-09 14:28:14 -04:00
Hanker10
69004058c6
Romans 15:13 reword for the benediction idea
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Romans 15:13 reword for the benediction idea
2016-07-09 14:16:41 -04:00
Hanker10
af71ef028e
Romans 15:9 change wording for clarity
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Romans 15:9 change wording for clarity
2016-07-09 14:13:24 -04:00