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1702 Commits

Author SHA1 Message Date
Tom Warren 0941298eda oxen and fattened ... 2016-05-26 08:27:39 -04:00
Tom Warren 4ba4abafb9 Reworked 22:1
Redundant introduction of narrative is simplified.
2016-05-26 08:21:27 -04:00
Tom Warren cfebe926b6 21:43
removed unnecessary UC"The...", replaced with "the ...
2016-05-26 08:16:16 -04:00
Tom Warren 0ca912c6f3 Period at end of 14:3 2016-05-26 08:10:10 -04:00
pohlig 2148f5d075 Update 06.usfm 2016-05-25 18:16:31 -04:00
pohlig 0047112219 Update 06.usfm 2016-05-25 17:41:03 -04:00
pohlig 64faccc712 Update 06.usfm 2016-05-25 17:38:43 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel ceb4651890 V18-23 rewrite 2016-05-25 17:24:06 -04:00
pohlig f8ec9fc3b6 Update 06.usfm 2016-05-25 16:14:19 -04:00
Hanker10 651400d74c Hebrews 5:6 colon to comma
Hebrews 5:6  colon to comma
2016-05-25 16:02:53 -04:00
pohlig f8d1735d95 Update 06.usfm 2016-05-25 16:02:24 -04:00
Hanker10 4c6ea0134e Hebrews 5:5 semi-colon to comma
Hebrews 5:5  semi-colon to comma
2016-05-25 16:00:45 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 27f2320770 V15, 16 rewrite 2016-05-25 15:59:18 -04:00
Hanker10 07e826e8c3 Hebrews 4:3 change colon to comma
Hebrews 4:3 change colon to comma
2016-05-25 15:58:34 -04:00
Hanker10 ba93b9e61e Hebrews 3:10-11 second level quote change
Hebrews 3:10-11 second level quote change from the end of verse 11 to the end of verse 10
2016-05-25 15:57:27 -04:00
Hanker10 a16ae4099f Hebrews 3:7 change punctuation
Hebrews 3:7 change punctuation
2016-05-25 15:51:59 -04:00
Hanker10 1adcde5b78 Hebrews 2:16 change punctuation
Hebrews 2:16 change punctuation
2016-05-25 15:49:20 -04:00
Hanker10 94090499a7 Hebrews 2:12 change punctuation
Hebrews 2:12 change punctuation
2016-05-25 15:47:40 -04:00
Hanker10 1893e1cebc Hebrews 2:2-3 change sentence structure
Hebrews 2:2-3 change sentence structure to make conditional clause (verse 2) precede naturally the main one.
2016-05-25 15:45:20 -04:00
pohlig a9b86cdda7 Update 06.usfm 2016-05-25 15:42:27 -04:00
pohlig 8725d6a9a8 Update 06.usfm 2016-05-25 15:38:37 -04:00
Hanker10 f18a4f0a99 Hebrews 1:14 change wording
Hebrews 1:14 changed "sent out to worship me and to care" to "sent out to minister and to care" since the pronoun "me" is not in the Greek and confusingly refers to God IF he is still the speaker in verse 14 but the quotation marks indicate that now the writer is speaking.
2016-05-25 15:20:57 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 9461dbc12f Rewrite V13, 15 2016-05-25 15:15:55 -04:00
Hanker10 7ac6831325 Hebrews 1:10 semi-colon to period and new sentence
Hebrews 1:10 semi-colon to period and new sentence
2016-05-25 15:14:59 -04:00
Hanker10 59e7640236 Hebrews 1:9 semi-colon to comma
Hebrews 1:9 semi-colon to comma
2016-05-25 15:13:38 -04:00
Hanker10 5f0e04da34 Hebrews 1:8 semi-colon to period and new sentence
Hebrews 1:8 semi-colon to period and new sentence
2016-05-25 15:12:27 -04:00
Hanker10 b219692814 Hebrews 1:5 semi-colon to comma
Hebrews 1:5 semi-colon to comma
2016-05-25 15:11:17 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel cea9da7045 V8, 9 rewrite 2016-05-25 14:46:52 -04:00
Hanker10 97a5260ffa Hebrews 12:8 cut redundant word "children"
Hebrews 12:8 cut redundant word "children"
2016-05-25 14:43:19 -04:00
Hanker10 70f3d56c7f Hebrews 11:19 change wording
Hebrews 11:19 change wording to smooth it out and connect "from the dead" closer to Abraham's "receiving him back.
2016-05-25 14:40:54 -04:00
Hanker10 c75401e950 Hebrews 6:3 change wording number
Hebrews 6:3 change wording number from plural to singular "these things" to "this"
2016-05-25 14:29:25 -04:00
Hanker10 9bc5cb01bd James 1:17 change wording
James 1:17 change "He does not change like shifting shadows." to what you see because he does not change AT ALL.
2016-05-25 14:18:23 -04:00
Hanker10 811d6165c5 James 1:8 removed redundant "person"
James 1:8 removed redundant "person" after "double-minded" and "a" from before "double-minded"
2016-05-25 14:08:23 -04:00
Hanker10 323fb0b4e6 James 1:5 removed the word "it"
James 1:5 removed the word "it" from the second use "the one who gives IT generously" since the original shows God as giving EVERYTHING generously, not just "it" = wisdom.
2016-05-25 14:06:39 -04:00
Hanker10 23ce30a274 James 5:6 change wording
James 5:6 changed "the righteous man, the one who does not"  to what you see because the Greek does not put a word for "man" or "person" in that position.
2016-05-25 14:02:46 -04:00
Hanker10 17bb11d545 James 4:1 change wording
James 4:1 change "among your fellow believers" to "in your members" since this is more literal with the Greek and less interpretive which the UDB does adequately.
2016-05-25 13:58:10 -04:00
Tom Warren 3e304cce55 Corrected 2016-05-25 13:54:35 -04:00
Tom Warren 3f6b7f3fb5 Test 2016-05-25 13:53:22 -04:00
pohlig 17eb9f90e0 edit punctuation 2016-05-25 13:52:45 -04:00
pohlig 1b970877fe Update 08.usfm 2016-05-25 13:27:47 -04:00
pohlig 70e94e1c81 Update 07.usfm 2016-05-25 13:23:52 -04:00
pohlig c30c7c6cb3 Update 05.usfm 2016-05-25 13:14:31 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 9930343aaf V5 rewrite 2016-05-25 13:03:13 -04:00
pohlig cd4cad4bd9 Update 05.usfm 2016-05-25 13:00:19 -04:00
pohlig b42a60cf64 Update 05.usfm 2016-05-25 12:59:51 -04:00
pohlig 9d5c905e46 Update 05.usfm 2016-05-25 12:55:09 -04:00
pohlig 080a07c44e Update 05.usfm 2016-05-25 12:44:00 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel e9b20c195d Update 04.usfm 2016-05-25 12:42:45 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel c810742bae V1, 2 rewrite 2016-05-25 12:42:35 -04:00
pohlig 38fcd1d997 Update 05.usfm 2016-05-25 12:34:34 -04:00