en_tn_lite_do_not_use/luk/23/46.md

Crying with a loud voice

"Shouting loudly." It may be helpful to show how this is related to the events of the previous verses. AT: "When that happened, Jesus shouted loudly"

Father

This is an important title for God. (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/guidelines-sonofgodprinciples)

into your hands I commit my spirit

"The phrase "into your hands" refers to God's care. AT: "I entrust my spirit to your care" or "I give my spirit to you, knowing you will care for it" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy)

Having said this

"After Jesus said this"

he died

"Jesus died"