en_tn_lite_do_not_use/jer/18/16.md

will become a horror

The word "horror" may be translated with a verbal phrase. AT: "will become something that horrifies people" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-abstractnouns)

an object of everlasting hissing

The word "hissing" refers to a sound that shows strong disapproval and can be translated with a verbal phrase. AT: "an object at which people will always hiss"

passes by her

Here the word "her" refers to "Their land."