Through the fury of Yahweh of hosts the land is scorched

Translate "Yahweh of hosts" as in Isaiah 1:9. This can be stated in active form. AT: "Like fire that scorches the land, the Lord's intense anger will destroy the people of Israel" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive and rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor)

No man spares his brother

To "spare" someone means to save them from harm. AT: "No one does anything to help his own brother escape" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-idiom)