Updated story 09 notes to reflect new English.

content/09/01.md

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-# called the Israelites
+# They were called the Israelites
 
 The people group that descended from Jacob was called "Israel," which is the name that God gave to Jacob. The people from that group were called "Israelites."
 
+
 # translationWords
 
 * [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/names/josephot]]

content/09/02.md

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-# Pharaoh
+# Pharaoh 
 
 "Pharaoh" is an Egyptian word that refers to their king. This Pharaoh was probably the son of a former Pharaoh who had died, who may have been a descendant of the Pharaoh that Joseph knew.
 
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 That is, "forced the Israelites to do hard labor against their will and treated them very harshly."
 
+
 # translationWords
 
 * [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/kt/israel]]

content/09/03.md

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-# miserable
+# made their lives miserable 
 
 This means that they suffered terribly because of how harshly they were treated and how hard they were forced to work. They also felt very discouraged.
 
 # God blessed them
 
 God took care of them, helping them endure the severe treatment and even caused them to become more numerous by giving them children.
+	
 
 # translationWords
 

content/09/04.md

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-# saw
+# saw 
 
 Another way to say this would be, "realized" or, "knew."
 
+
 # translationWords
 
 * [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/names/pharaoh]]

content/09/05.md

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 They hid the baby from the Egyptians until it became too difficult to keep him safely hidden in their home.
 
+
 # translationWords
 
 * [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/kt/israel]]

content/09/06.md

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-There are no notes for this frame.
+
 
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content/09/07.md

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 Another way to say this would be, "to breastfeed him."
 
+
 # translationWords
 
 * [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/names/pharaoh]]

content/09/08.md

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-# grown up
+# had grown up
 
-Another way to say this would be, "grown into a man."
+Another way to say this would be, "had grown into a man."
 
-# fellow Israelite
+# his fellow Israelite
 
 This phrase refers to the Israelite slave. The word "fellow" here indicates that Moses was also an Israelite. Although the daughter of the Egyptian Pharaoh raised Moses, Moses remembered that he was really an Israelite.
 
+
 # translationWords
 
 * [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/names/moses]]

content/09/09.md

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-There are no notes for this frame.
+
 
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content/09/10.md

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-# wilderness
+# the wilderness
 
 The wilderness was a large area that was rocky and dry. The land there was not good for growing food and few people lived there.
 
+
 # translationWords
 
 * [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/names/pharaoh]]

content/09/11.md

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-# wilderness
+# the wilderness
+
+See how you translated this in [[:fr:obs:notes:frames:09-10|(09-10)]].
 
-See how you translated this in [09:10](09/10).
 
 # translationWords
 

content/09/12.md

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-# taking care of his sheep
+# taking care of his father-in-law's herd of sheep
 
-This means he was doing the work of a shepherd to guide the sheep to grass and water, and to protect them. It could be translated as, "tending the sheep."
+This means he was doing the work of a shepherd to guide the sheep to grass and water, and to protect them. It could be translated as, "tending the sheep that belonged to his father-in-law."
 
-# bush did not burn up
+# a bush on fire, burning without being destroyed
 
 God made the bush full of fire, but the fire did not damage the bush.
 
-# the voice of God said
+# God spoke to him
 
 This could be translated as, "God said out loud." Moses heard God speak, but he did not see God.
 
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 It was holy in the sense that God set it apart from the ordinary land and made it to be a special place where He would reveal Himself.
 
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 # translationWords
 
 * [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/names/moses]]

content/09/13.md

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-# suffering of my people
+# the suffering of my people
 
 This could be translated as, "the very harsh treatment that my people are experiencing. Some languages might translate this as, "how the Egyptians are giving my people terrible pain."
 
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 This refers to the Israelites. God had made a covenant with Abraham and his descendants that He would bless them and make them into a great nation. Through this covenant, the Israelites became God's own people.
 
-# bring … out of their slavery in Egypt
+# can bring … out of their slavery in Egypt
+
+This can be translated as, "can set them free from being slaves in Egypt" or, "can bring them out of Egypt where they are now slaves."
 
-This can be translated as, "set them free from being slaves in Egypt" or, "bring them out of Egypt where they are now slaves."
 
 # translationWords
 

content/09/14.md

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 # the people
 
-See "my people" in [09:13](09/13).
+See "my people" in [[:fr:obs:notes:frames:09-13|(09-13)]].
 
 # I AM WHO I AM
 
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 The name that God told Moses and all of Israel to use for him is "Yahweh," which is related to "I AM" and appears to mean, "HE IS."
 
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 # translationWords
 
 * [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/names/moses]]

content/09/15.md

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 Aaron was Moses's actual brother from his Israelite mother and father. Aaron would have been at least several years older than Moses.
 
-# stubborn
-
-This means the Pharaoh would refuse to obey God. You may also want to add, "stubborn and refuse to listen (or obey)."
-
 # A Bible story from
 
 These references may be slightly different in some Bible translations.
 
+
 # translationWords
 
 * [[rc://en/tw/dict/bible/names/moses]]