Tracy's edits to Deut through 6:15

Reviewed-on: https://git.door43.org/unfoldingWord/en_tn/pulls/3246

tn_DEU.tsv

@@ -785,13 +785,16 @@ front:intro	rm3n				0	# Introduction to Deuteronomy\n\n## Part 1: General Introd
 6:13	rn98		rc://*/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit	וּ⁠בִ⁠שְׁמ֖⁠וֹ תִּשָּׁבֵֽעַ	1	The implication is that, when the Israelites swear by Yahweh, that means they are asking Yahweh to take note of their promise and punish them if they do not fulfill their promise. Moses wants the Israelites to only invoke Yahweh’s name when making promises. You could include this information if that would be helpful to your readers. Alternate translation: “and you shall make strong promises using his name”
 6:13	ptbo		rc://*/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy	וּ⁠בִ⁠שְׁמ֖⁠וֹ תִּשָּׁבֵֽעַ	1	Here, **name** represents all of Yahweh: his power, presence, knowledge, and so on. If it would be helpful in your language, you could use an equivalent expression from your language or state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: “and swear by Yahweh”
 6:14	f1pd		rc://*/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor	לֹ֣א תֵֽלְכ֔וּ⁠ן אַחֲרֵ֖י	1	Here Moses is speaking of idols as if they were moving beings that one could physically **go after** and follow. If it would be helpful in your language, you could state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: “Do not worship”
+6:14	eu66		rc://*/ta/man/translate/figs-explicitinfo	אֱלֹהִ֣ים אֲחֵרִ֑ים מֵ⁠אֱלֹהֵי֙	1	The expression **other gods, the gods of** contains extra information that would be unnatural to express in some languages. If this is true of your language, you could shorten the expression. Alternate translation: “any other gods that are of”
 6:14	qenn		rc://*/ta/man/translate/figs-possession	מֵ⁠אֱלֹהֵי֙ הָֽ⁠עַמִּ֔ים אֲשֶׁ֖ר סְבִיבוֹתֵי⁠כֶֽם	1	Here, Moses is using the possessive form to describe **gods** that the other **peoples** of the land worship. If your language would not use the possessive form for this, you could use an expression that describes the same relationship. Alternate translation: “the gods whom the peoples who surround you worship”
-6:14	tdo5		rc://*/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit	הָֽ⁠עַמִּ֔ים אֲשֶׁ֖ר סְבִיבוֹתֵי⁠כֶֽם	1	The implication is that _____. You could include this information if that would be helpful to your readers. Alternate translation: “text”
+6:14	tdo5		rc://*/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit	הָֽ⁠עַמִּ֔ים אֲשֶׁ֖ר סְבִיבוֹתֵי⁠כֶֽם	1	Here the phrase **the peoples who surround you** refer to the people groups that live near the land that Yahweh is about to give to the Israelites. These people groups include the Canaanites, the Moabites, the Edomites, and other people groups. You could include this information if that would be helpful to your readers. Alternate translation: “the people groups who live near you”
+6:15	hntv		rc://*/ta/man/translate/translate-names	כִּ֣י	1	The word translated as **for** indicates that what follows is a reason for what came before. Use a connector in your language that makes it clear that what follows is a reason for what came before. Alternate translation: “and this is because”
 6:15	syl7		rc://*/ta/man/translate/figs-distinguish	בְּ⁠קִרְבֶּ֑⁠ךָ	1	This does not mean that Yahweh has a physically body that lives with the Israelites. As God, Yahweh is everywhere and cannot be confined to a single place. Moses means that Yahweh has a special relationship with the Israelites. Be sure that this distinction is clear in your translation. Alternate translation: “who watches over you”
-6:15	orgt		rc://*/ta/man/translate/figs-hypo	פֶּן	1	Moses is using the word **lest** to introduce a hypothetical condition as a warning for a negative consequence. Use a natural form in your language for introducing a situation that could happen. Alternate translation: “in case”
+6:15	orgt		rc://*/ta/man/translate/figs-hypo	פֶּן	1	Moses is using the word **lest** to introduce a hypothetical condition as a warning. Use a natural form in your language for introducing a situation that could happen. Alternate translation: “because if that happens, then this might happen:”
 6:15	hb7p		rc://*/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor	יֶ֠חֱרֶה אַף־יְהוָ֤ה אֱלֹהֶ֨י⁠ךָ֙ בָּ֔⁠ךְ וְ⁠הִשְׁמִ֣ידְ⁠ךָ֔	1	Moses is speaking as if Yahweh’s anger was a fire that **burns** and **destroys** things. Alternate translation: “Yahweh your God will kindle his anger”
 6:15	ft6b		rc://*/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy	אַף	1	Here, **nose** represents anger. If it would be helpful in your language, you could use a body part from your language that is associated with anger or state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: “the anger of”
-6:15	a26k			destroy you from	0	Alternate translation: “destroy you so that there is nothing left of you anywhere on”
+6:15	a26k		rc://*/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit	וְ⁠הִשְׁמִ֣ידְ⁠ךָ֔ מֵ⁠עַ֖ל פְּנֵ֥י הָ⁠אֲדָמָֽה	1	The implication is that, if the Israelites worship other gods, then Yahweh will **destroy** the Israelites so that none of them will be left on **the earth**. You could include this information if that would be helpful to your readers. Alternate translation: “and he destroys you so that you no longer exist on the face of the earth”
+6:15	mgd0		rc://*/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy	פְּנֵ֥י	1	Here, **face** represents the surface of the earth and everything that exists on it. If it would be helpful in your language, you could use an equivalent expression from your language or state the meaning plainly. Alternate translation: “existing on”
 6:16	bd27		rc://*/ta/man/translate/figs-you		0	# General Information:\n\nMoses continues to tell the people of Israel Yahweh’s words as if the Israelites are one person.
 6:16	dj8u			You will not test Yahweh	0	Here “test” means to challenge Yahweh and force him to prove himself.
 6:16	qk5b		rc://*/ta/man/translate/translate-names	Massah	0	This is the name of a place in the desert. The translator may add a footnote that says: “The name ‘Massah’ means ‘testing.’”