General Information:

The angel who appeared to Daniel in Daniel 10:5 continues speaking.

Michael, the great prince

Michael is an archangel. Here he is also given the title "great prince."

Here "rise up" is an idiom that means to appear. AT: "Michael ... will appear" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-idiom)

This can be stated in active form. You can also make it clear that God will save the people. AT: "God will save your people" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive and rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit)

This can be stated in active form. You can also make it clear that God writes names in the book. AT: "whose name God has written in the book" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive and rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit)

The phrase "sleep in the dust of the earth" is another way of referring to those who have died. Here "rise up" is an idiom that means to come back to life. AT: "those who have died will come back to life" (See: rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-euphemism and rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-idiom)