en_tn/ezr/01/02.md

all the kingdoms of the earth

Here "all" is an exaggeration, as there were kingdoms over which Cyrus did not rule. (See: rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-hyperbole)

for him a house in ... Judah

You may need to make explicit that the house was for people to worship Yahweh. Alternate translation: "a house in ... Judah where people can worship him" (See: rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-explicit)