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jdg/03/03.md

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-# the five kings
+# the five lords
 
-These five kings represent themselves and their people. Alternate translation: "the five kings and their people" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-synecdoche]])
+These five lords represent themselves and their people. Alternate translation: "the five lords and their people" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-synecdoche]])
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+# lords
+
+kings
 
 # Mount Baal Hermon
 

jdg/03/15.md

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 Here this means to shout or speak loudly to someone far away. It can also mean to ask someone for help, especially God.
 
-# raised up someone
+# raised up a deliverer
 
-Yahweh appointing someone to do a special service for him is spoken of as if he raised or lifted up the person. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])
+Yahweh appointing a deliverer to do a special service for him is spoken of as if he raised or lifted up the person. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])
 
 # Ehud ... Gera
 

jdg/03/16.md

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 If it is necessary to use a modern measurement of length, here are two ways of doing it. Alternate translation: "46 centimeters" or "about one half meter" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/translate-bdistance]])
 
-# he strapped it on under his clothing on his right thigh
-
-"he tied it to his right thigh under his clothing"
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 # thigh
 
 the part of the leg between the knee and the hip

jdg/04/23.md

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-# God defeated Jabin, the king of Canaan, before the people of Israel
+# God subdued Jabin, the king of Canaan, before the people of Israel
 
 God causing the Israelites to defeat Jabin and his army is spoken of as is God himself defeated Jabin as the people of Israel watched. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])