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1933 Commits

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pohlig a9b86cdda7 Update 06.usfm 2016-05-25 15:42:27 -04:00
pohlig 8725d6a9a8 Update 06.usfm 2016-05-25 15:38:37 -04:00
Hanker10 f18a4f0a99 Hebrews 1:14 change wording
Hebrews 1:14 changed "sent out to worship me and to care" to "sent out to minister and to care" since the pronoun "me" is not in the Greek and confusingly refers to God IF he is still the speaker in verse 14 but the quotation marks indicate that now the writer is speaking.
2016-05-25 15:20:57 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 9461dbc12f Rewrite V13, 15 2016-05-25 15:15:55 -04:00
Hanker10 7ac6831325 Hebrews 1:10 semi-colon to period and new sentence
Hebrews 1:10 semi-colon to period and new sentence
2016-05-25 15:14:59 -04:00
Hanker10 59e7640236 Hebrews 1:9 semi-colon to comma
Hebrews 1:9 semi-colon to comma
2016-05-25 15:13:38 -04:00
Hanker10 5f0e04da34 Hebrews 1:8 semi-colon to period and new sentence
Hebrews 1:8 semi-colon to period and new sentence
2016-05-25 15:12:27 -04:00
Hanker10 b219692814 Hebrews 1:5 semi-colon to comma
Hebrews 1:5 semi-colon to comma
2016-05-25 15:11:17 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel cea9da7045 V8, 9 rewrite 2016-05-25 14:46:52 -04:00
Hanker10 97a5260ffa Hebrews 12:8 cut redundant word "children"
Hebrews 12:8 cut redundant word "children"
2016-05-25 14:43:19 -04:00
Hanker10 70f3d56c7f Hebrews 11:19 change wording
Hebrews 11:19 change wording to smooth it out and connect "from the dead" closer to Abraham's "receiving him back.
2016-05-25 14:40:54 -04:00
Hanker10 c75401e950 Hebrews 6:3 change wording number
Hebrews 6:3 change wording number from plural to singular "these things" to "this"
2016-05-25 14:29:25 -04:00
Hanker10 9bc5cb01bd James 1:17 change wording
James 1:17 change "He does not change like shifting shadows." to what you see because he does not change AT ALL.
2016-05-25 14:18:23 -04:00
Hanker10 811d6165c5 James 1:8 removed redundant "person"
James 1:8 removed redundant "person" after "double-minded" and "a" from before "double-minded"
2016-05-25 14:08:23 -04:00
Hanker10 323fb0b4e6 James 1:5 removed the word "it"
James 1:5 removed the word "it" from the second use "the one who gives IT generously" since the original shows God as giving EVERYTHING generously, not just "it" = wisdom.
2016-05-25 14:06:39 -04:00
Hanker10 23ce30a274 James 5:6 change wording
James 5:6 changed "the righteous man, the one who does not"  to what you see because the Greek does not put a word for "man" or "person" in that position.
2016-05-25 14:02:46 -04:00
Hanker10 17bb11d545 James 4:1 change wording
James 4:1 change "among your fellow believers" to "in your members" since this is more literal with the Greek and less interpretive which the UDB does adequately.
2016-05-25 13:58:10 -04:00
Tom Warren 3e304cce55 Corrected 2016-05-25 13:54:35 -04:00
Tom Warren 3f6b7f3fb5 Test 2016-05-25 13:53:22 -04:00
pohlig 17eb9f90e0 edit punctuation 2016-05-25 13:52:45 -04:00
pohlig 1b970877fe Update 08.usfm 2016-05-25 13:27:47 -04:00
pohlig 70e94e1c81 Update 07.usfm 2016-05-25 13:23:52 -04:00
pohlig c30c7c6cb3 Update 05.usfm 2016-05-25 13:14:31 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 9930343aaf V5 rewrite 2016-05-25 13:03:13 -04:00
pohlig cd4cad4bd9 Update 05.usfm 2016-05-25 13:00:19 -04:00
pohlig b42a60cf64 Update 05.usfm 2016-05-25 12:59:51 -04:00
pohlig 9d5c905e46 Update 05.usfm 2016-05-25 12:55:09 -04:00
pohlig 080a07c44e Update 05.usfm 2016-05-25 12:44:00 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel e9b20c195d Update 04.usfm 2016-05-25 12:42:45 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel c810742bae V1, 2 rewrite 2016-05-25 12:42:35 -04:00
pohlig 38fcd1d997 Update 05.usfm 2016-05-25 12:34:34 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 3e5549ac1e V31, 32 rewrite 2016-05-25 11:44:42 -04:00
pohlig 4cbb823853 Update 05.usfm 2016-05-25 11:39:54 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 9534cf20a6 V28, 29 rewrite 2016-05-25 11:36:40 -04:00
pohlig f7cc689b1f Update 05.usfm 2016-05-25 11:35:35 -04:00
Tom Warren c42e2ee0f2 Greetings continuity 2016-05-25 11:22:21 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 3a69e56257 V27b rewrite 2016-05-25 11:13:52 -04:00
Hanker10 0df85c58a8 Colossians 2:15 change wording
Colossians 2:15 change wording from "led them in a victory procession" to what you see because "victory procession" is too interpretive. The Greek word only signifies "celebrate a triumph over"
2016-05-25 10:53:11 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel b34f2d22a8 V20 rewrite 2016-05-25 10:43:01 -04:00
pohlig f75981ee6e Update 01.usfm 2016-05-25 09:55:43 -04:00
pohlig e0657c5fb1 Update 01.usfm 2016-05-25 09:55:01 -04:00
pohlig 7d231ec928 Update 01.usfm 2016-05-25 09:54:31 -04:00
pohlig b18fa17234 Update 01.usfm 2016-05-25 09:53:49 -04:00
Hanker10 d1c7affe60 Colossians 1:24 change wording
Colossians 1:24 change "for his body's sake, which is the church." to "for the sake of his body, which is the church."
2016-05-24 21:54:36 -04:00
Hanker10 3a8c9ed2d6 Colossians 1:22 change wording
Colossians 1:22 change wording: "God has reconciled" to "he has reconciled" since "God" here is an interpretive insertion.
Also, "in the body of Christ's flesh" becomes "by his physical body,"
Also, "before himself. \v 23 This is providing that you" becomes as you see.
2016-05-24 21:48:21 -04:00
Hanker10 405b1b23e5 Colossians 1:18 change wording
Colossians 1:18 change wording from "He is the originating authority, the firstborn from of the dead ones, so he has first place among all things." to what you see now. This is closer to the Greek. The phrase "originating authority" is interpretive and not literal.
2016-05-24 21:17:44 -04:00
Hanker10 1a3eceba2a Colossians 1:18 change wording
Colossians 1:18 change wording from "head of the church, his body" to "head of the body, the church."
2016-05-24 21:10:47 -04:00
pohlig cd3daba668 Update 05.usfm 2016-05-24 20:33:27 -04:00
pohlig 300a478a64 Update 05.usfm 2016-05-24 20:30:38 -04:00
Hanker10 3207db79a4 Colossians 1:6 change sentence structure and comma
Colossians 1:6 change sentence structure and omit comma
2016-05-24 20:01:54 -04:00