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13-1CH/09.usfm

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 \v 17 The doorkeepers were Shallum, Akkub, Talmon, Ahiman, and their descendants. Shallum was their leader.
 \v 18 Previously they stood guard at the king's gate on the east side for the camp of Levi's descendants.
-\v 19 Shallum son of Kore son of Ebiasaph son of Korah, and his relatives from the house of his father, the Korahites, were in charge of the work of the service, they guarded the door to the tent, as their ancestors had guarded the camp of Yahweh, and they also had guarded the entrance.
+\v 19 Shallum son of Kore son of Ebiasaph, who as son of Korah, and his relatives from the house of his father, the Korahites, were in charge of the work of the service, they guarded the door to the tent, as their ancestors had guarded the camp of Yahweh, and they also had guarded the entrance.
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 \v 20 Phinehas son of Eleazar had been in charge of them in the past, and Yahweh had been with him.
 \v 21 Zechariah son of Meshelemiah was guard of the entrance to the temple, the "tent of meeting."

13-1CH/25.usfm

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 \v 6 All these were under the direction of their fathers. They were musicians in Yahweh's house, with cymbals and stringed instruments as they served in God's house. Asaph, Jeduthun, and Heman were under the king's supervision.
 \v 7 They and their brothers who were skilled and trained to make music to Yahweh numbered 288.
-\v 8 They threw lots for their duties, all alike, the young as well as the old, the teacher as the student.
+\v 8 They threw lots for their duties, all alike, the same for the young as well as the old, the teacher as well as the student.
 
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19-PSA/028.usfm

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 \v 3 Do not drag me away with the wicked, those who do iniquity,
 \q who speak peace with their neighbors but have evil in their hearts.
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-\v 4 Give them what their deeds deserve and repay them what their wickedness demands;
+\v 4 Give them what their deeds deserve and repay them what their wickedness demands,
-\q repay them for the work of their hands; render to them their due.
+\q repay them for the work of their hands and render to them their due.
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 \v 5 Because they do not understand the deeds of Yahweh or the work of his hands,
 \q he will tear them down and never rebuild them.

23-ISA/22.usfm

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 \v 15 The Lord, Yahweh of hosts, says this, "Go to this administrator, to Shebna, who is over the house, and say,
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-\v 16 'What do you have here, and who are you, that you have hewn out a grave?
+\v 16 'What are you doing here and who gave you permission to cut out a tomb for yourself,
-\q1 Hewing out a grave on the heights, carving out a resting place for yourself in the rock!'"
+\q1 hewing out a grave on the heights and carving out a resting place in the rock?'"
 
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