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Acts 11:5 & 6 simplify grammar and add period 

Acts 11:5 Original: four corners; it descended to me
Change: four corners. It descended to me.
I'm following the suggested rewording by Suze Lau, one of the readers for the text team.
I also changed the semi-colon to a period in verse 5 and then also in verse 6 and made these clauses independent sentences to simplify the grammar.
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Hanker10 2016-04-12 19:14:45 -04:00
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\s5
\v 4 But Peter started to explain the matter to them in detail; he said,
\v 5 I was praying in the city of Joppa, and in a trance I saw a vision of a container coming down, like a large sheet let down from heaven by its four corners; it descended to me
\v 6 I gazed at it and I thought about it; I saw the four-legged animals of earth, wild beasts, creeping animals, and birds of the sky.
\v 5 I was praying in the city of Joppa, and in a trance I saw a vision of a container coming down, like a large sheet let down from heaven by its four corners. It descended to me.
\v 6 I gazed at it and I thought about it. I saw the four-legged animals of earth, wild beasts, creeping animals, and birds of the sky.
\s5
\v 7 Then I heard a voice say to me, "Get up, Peter; kill and eat!"