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24-JER/22.usfm

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 \v 22 The wind will shepherd away all your shepherds, and your friends will go into captivity.
 \q Then you will certainly be ashamed and humiliated by all of your evil deeds.
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-\v 23 Those of you who live in 'Lebanon,' who are nestled in cedar buildings,
+\v 23 You who live in 'Lebanon,' who is nestled in cedar buildings,
 \q how you will be pitied when the labor pains come upon you, pain like that of a woman in labor!"
 
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24-JER/34.usfm

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 \v 12 So the word of Yahweh came to Jeremiah and said,
 \v 13 "Yahweh, God of Israel, says this, 'I myself made a covenant with your ancestors on the day that I brought them out from the land of Egypt, out from the house of slavery. That was when I said,
-\v 14 "At the end of every seven years, each man must send away his brother, his fellow Hebrew who had sold himself to you and served you for six years. Send him away in freedom." But your ancestors did not listen to me and or incline their ears to me.
+\v 14 "At the end of every seven years, each man must send away his brother, his fellow Hebrew who had sold himself to you and served you for six years. Send him away in freedom." But your ancestors did not listen to me or incline their ears to me.
 
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 \v 15 Now you yourselves repented and began to do what is right in my eyes. You proclaimed freedom, each man to his neighbor, and you made a covenant before me in the house that is called by my name.

24-JER/35.usfm

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 \v 14 The words of Jonadab son of Rechab that he gave to his sons as a command, not to drink any wine, have been observed to this very day. They have obeyed their ancestor's command. But as for me, I myself have been making persistent proclamations to you, but you do not listen to me.
 
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-\v 15 I sent out to you all my servants, the prophets. I was persistent in sending them to say, 'Let each person turn from his wicked way and do good deeds; let no one walk any longer walk after other gods and worship them. Instead, come back to the land that I gave to you and your ancestors.' Yet you will not listen to me or pay attention to me.
+\v 15 I sent out to you all my servants, the prophets. I was persistent in sending them to say, 'Let each person turn from his wicked way and do good deeds; let no one walk any longer after other gods and worship them. Instead, come back to the land that I gave to you and your ancestors.' Yet you will not listen to me or pay attention to me.
 \v 16 For the descendants of Jonadab son of Rechab have observed the commands of their ancestor that he gave them, but this people refuses to listen to me."'
 
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-\v 17 So Yahweh, God of hosts and God of Israel, says this, 'Look, all the disasters that I have proclaimed against them—I am about to bring these disasters on Judah and on all the inhabitants of
+\v 17 So Yahweh, God of hosts and God of Israel, says this, 'Look, I am bringing upon Judah and on everyone living in Jerusalem, all the disasters I pronounced against them. Because I spoke to them, but they did not listen; I called to them, but they did not answer.'"
-Jerusalem, because I have make proclamations to them, but they refused to listen. I called to them, but they did not answer.'"
 
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