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-\v 1 I looked and saw the Lamb standing there before me on Mount Zion. With him were 144,000 who had his name and his Father's name written on their foreheads.
+\v 1 I looked and saw the Lamb standing on Mount Zion. With him were 144,000 who had his name and his Father's name written on their foreheads.
 \v 2 I heard a voice from heaven sounding like a roar of many waters and loud thunder. The sound I heard was also like harpists playing their harps.
 
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-\v 3 They sang a new song before the throne and before the four living creatures and the elders. No one could learn the song except for the 144,000 who had been redeemed from the earth.
+\v 3 They sang a new song before the throne and before the four living creatures and the elders. No one could learn the song except for the 144,000 who had been bought from the earth.
-\v 4 These are the ones that have not defiled themselves with women, for they have kept themselves sexually pure. It is these who follow the Lamb wherever he goes. These were redeemed out of humanity as firstfruits to God and to the Lamb.
+\v 4 These are the ones that have not defiled themselves with women, for they have kept themselves sexually pure. It is these who follow the Lamb wherever he goes. These were bought out of mankind as firstfruits for God and for the Lamb.
 \v 5 No lie was found in their mouth; they are blameless.
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 \v 9 Another angel—a third angel— followed them, saying with a loud voice, "If anyone worships the beast and his image, and receives a mark on his forehead or on his hand,
-\v 10 he also will drink the wine of God's wrath, the wine that has been mixed full strength and poured into the cup of his anger. The person who drinks it will be tormented with fire and sulfur before his holy angels and before the Lamb.
+\v 10 he also will drink some of the wine of God's wrath, the wine that has been poured undiluted into the cup of his anger. The person who drinks it will be tormented with fire and sulfur before God's holy angels and before the Lamb.
 
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 \v 11 The smoke from their torment goes up forever and ever, and they have no rest day or night—these worshipers of the beast and his image, and everyone who receives the mark of his name.
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-\v 14 I looked and I saw there was a white cloud, and seated on the cloud was one like a Son of Man. He had a gold crown on his head and a sharp sickle in his hand.
+\v 14 I looked and I saw there was a white cloud, and seated on the cloud was one like a Son of Man. He had a golden crown on his head and a sharp sickle in his hand.
 \v 15 Then another angel came out of the temple and called with a loud voice to the one sitting on the cloud: "Take your sickle and start to reap. For the time to reap has come, since the harvest of the earth is ripe."
 \v 16 Then the one who was sitting on the cloud swung his sickle over the earth, and the earth was harvested.
 
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 \v 17 Another angel came out from the temple in heaven; he also had a sharp sickle.
-\v 18 Still another angel came out from the altar, an angel who had authority over the fire. He called out with a loud voice to the angel who had the sharp sickle, "Take your sharp sickle and gather in the clusters of grapes from the vines of the earth, for their grapes are now ripe."
+\v 18 Still another angel came out from the incense altar, who had authority over the fire. He called out with a loud voice to the one  who had the sharp sickle, "Take your sharp sickle and gather in the clusters of grapes from the vines of the earth, for their grapes are now ripe."
 
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-\v 19 The angel swung his sickle to the earth and gathered the grape harvest of the earth and threw it into the great wine vat of God's wrath.
+\v 19 The angel swung his sickle to the earth and gathered the grape harvest of the earth. He threw it into the great wine vat of God's wrath.
-\v 20 The winepress was stomped outside the city and blood poured out from it up to the height of a horse's bridle, for 1,600 stadia.
+\v 20 The winepress was stomped outside the city, and blood poured out from it up to the height of a horse's bridle, for 1,600 stadia.