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06-JOS/15.usfm

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 \v 5 The eastern boundary was the Salt Sea, at the mouth of the Jordan. The border on the north ran from the bay of the sea at the mouth of the Jordan.
-\v 6 It went up to Beth Hoglah and passed along north of Beth Arabah. Then it went up to the Stone of Bohan (Bohan was a son of Reuben).
+\v 6 It went up to Beth Hoglah and passed along north of Beth Arabah. Then it went up to the Stone of Bohan the son of Reuben).
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-\v 7 Then the border went up to Debir from the valley of Achor, and so northward, turning toward Gilgal, which is opposite the hill of Adummim, which is on the south side of the river. Then the border passed along to the springs of En Shemesh and went to En Rogel.
+\v 7 Then the border went up to Debir from the valley of Achor, and so northward, turning toward Gilgal, which is opposite the hill of Adummim, which is on the south side of the valley. Then the border passed along to the springs of En Shemesh and went to En Rogel.
-\v 8 Then the border went up the valley of Ben Hinnom to the south side of the Jebusites' city (that is, Jerusalem). Then it went up to the top of the hill that lies over the valley of Hinnom, on the west, which is at the northern end of the valley of Rephaim.
+\v 8 Then the border went up the valley of Ben Hinnom to the south side of the Jebusite city (that is, Jerusalem). Then it went up to the top of the hill that lies over the valley of Hinnom, on the west, which is at the northern end of the valley of Rephaim.
 
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-\v 9 Then the border extended from the top of the hills to the spring of Nephtoah, and went out from there to the cities of Mount Ephron. Then the border bent around to Baalah (the same as Kiriath Jearim).
+\v 9 Then the border extended from the top of the hills to the spring of Nephtoah, and went out from there to the cities of Mount Ephron. Then the border bends around to Baalah (the same as Kiriath Jearim).
-\v 10 Then the border circled around west of Baalah to Mount Seir, and passed along to the side of Mount Jearim on the north (the same as Kesalon), went down to Beth Shemesh, and passed along by Timnah.
+\v 10 Then the border circled around west of Baalah to Mount Seir, and passed along to the side of Mount Jearim on the north (the same as Kesalon), went down to Beth Shemesh, and crossed over to Timnah.
 
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-\v 11 The border went out beside the northern hill of Ekron, and then it bent around to Shikkeron and passed along to Mount Baalah, from where it went to Jabneel. The border ended at the sea.
+\v 11 The border went out beside the northern hill of Ekron, and then it bends around to Shikkeron and passed along to Mount Baalah, from there it went to Jabneel. The border ended at the sea.
-\v 12 The western boundary was the Great Sea and its coastline. This was the border around the tribe of Judah, clan by clan.
+\v 12 The western boundary was the Great Sea and its coastline. This is the border around the tribe of Judah, clan by clan.
 
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-\v 13 In keeping with the commandment of Yahweh to Joshua, Joshua gave Caleb son of Jephunneh an assignment of land among the tribe of Judah, Kiriath Arba, that is, Hebron. (Arba was the father of Anak.)
+\v 13 In keeping with the commandment of Yahweh to Joshua, Joshua gave Caleb son of Jephunneh an assignment of land among the tribe of Judah, Kiriath Arba, that is, Hebron (Arba was the father of Anak).
-\v 14 Caleb drove out from there the three tribes of descendants of Anak: Sheshai, Ahiman and Talmai, descendants of Anak.
+\v 14 Caleb drove out from there the three sons of Anak: Sheshai, Ahiman and Talmai, descendants of Anak.
-\v 15 He went up from there against the inhabitants of Debir (the name of Debir used to be called Kiriath Sepher).
+\v 15 He went up from there against the inhabitants of Debir (Debir used to be called Kiriath Sepher).
 
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-\v 16 Caleb said, "The man who attacks Kiriath Sepher and captures it, to him I will I give Achsah my daughter as a wife."
+\v 16 Caleb said, "The man who attacks Kiriath Sepher and captures it, to him I will give Achsah my daughter as a wife."
-\v 17 Othniel son of Kenaz, Caleb's brother, captured it. So Caleb gave him Achsah his daughter as a wife.
+\v 17 When Othniel son of Kenaz, Caleb's brother, captured it, Caleb gave him Achsah his daughter as a wife.
 
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 \v 18 It happened that when Achsah came to him, she urged him to ask her father for a field. And when she got off her donkey, Caleb said to her, "What do you want?"
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-\v 20 This was the inheritance of the tribe of the people of Judah, given to their clans.
+\v 20 This was the inheritance of the tribe of Judah, given to their clans.
 
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 \v 29 Baalah, Iyim, Ezem,
 \v 30 Eltolad, Chesil, Hormah,
 \v 31 Ziklag, Madmannah, Sansannah,
-\v 32 Lebaoth, Shilhim, Ain, and Rimmon. These were twenty-nine cities in all, not counting their villages.
+\v 32 Lebaoth, Shilhim, Ain, and Rimmon. These were twenty-nine cities in all, including their villages.
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 \v 33 In the lower hill country to the west, there were Eshtaol, Zorah, Ashnah,
 \v 34 Zanoah, En Gannim, Tappuah, Enam,
 \v 35 Jarmuth, Adullam, Socoh, Azekah,
-\v 36 Shaaraim, Adithaim, and Gederah (that is, Gederothaim). These were fourteen cities in number, not counting their villages.
+\v 36 Shaaraim, Adithaim, and Gederah (that is, Gederothaim). These were fourteen cities in number, including their villages.
 
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 \v 40 Cabbon, Lahmam, Chitlish,
-\v 41 Gederoth, Beth Dagon, Naamah, Makkedah. These were sixteen cities in number, not counting their villages.
+\v 41 Gederoth, Beth Dagon, Naamah, Makkedah. These were sixteen cities in number, including their villages.
 
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 \v 42 Libnah, Ether, Ashan,
 \v 43 Iphtah, Ashnah, Nezib,
-\v 44 Keilah, Achzib, Mareshah. These were nine cities, not counting their villages.
+\v 44 Keilah, Achzib, Mareshah. These were nine cities, including their villages.
 
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 \v 48 In the hill country, Shamir, Jattir, Socoh,
 \v 49 Dannah, Kiriath Sannah (that is, Debir),
 \v 50 Anab, Eshtemoh, Anim,
-\v 51 Goshen, Holon, and Giloh. These were eleven cities, not counting their villages.
+\v 51 Goshen, Holon, and Giloh. These were eleven cities, including their villages.
 
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 \v 52 Arab, Dumah, Eshan,
 \v 53 Janim, Beth Tappuah, Aphekah,
-\v 54 Humtah, Kiriath Arba (that is, Hebron), and Zior. These were nine cities, not counting their villages.
+\v 54 Humtah, Kiriath Arba (that is, Hebron), and Zior. These were nine cities, including their villages.
 
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 \v 55 Maon, Carmel, Ziph, Juttah,
 \v 56 Jezreel, Jokdeam, Zanoah,
-\v 57 Kain, Gibeah, and Timnah. These were ten cities, not counting their villages.
+\v 57 Kain, Gibeah, and Timnah. These were ten cities, including their villages.
 
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 \v 58 Halhul, Beth Zur, Gedor,
-\v 59 Maarath, Beth Anoth, and Eltekon. These were six cities, not counting their villages.
+\v 59 Maarath, Beth Anoth, and Eltekon. These were six cities, including their villages.
 
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-\v 60 Kiriath Baal (that is, Kiriath Jearim), and Rabbah. These were two cities, not counting their villages.
+\v 60 Kiriath Baal (that is, Kiriath Jearim), and Rabbah. These were two cities, including their villages.
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 \v 61 In the wilderness, there were Beth Arabah, Middin, Secacah,
-\v 62 Nibshan, the City of Salt, and En Gedi. These were six cities, not counting their villages.
+\v 62 Nibshan, the City of Salt, and En Gedi. These were six cities, including their villages.
 
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06-JOS/18.usfm

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 \v 21 Now the cities of the tribe of Benjamin according to their clans were Jericho, Beth Hoglah, Emek Keziz,
 \v 22 Beth Arabah, Zemaraim, Bethel,
 \v 23 Avvim, Parah, Ophrah,
-\v 24 Kephar Ammoni, Ophni, and Geba. There were twelve cities, not counting their villages.
+\v 24 Kephar Ammoni, Ophni, and Geba. There were twelve cities, including their villages.
 
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 \v 25 There were also the cities of Gibeon, Ramah, Beeroth,
 \v 26 Mizpeh, Kephirah, Mozah,
 \v 27 Rekem, Irpeel, Taralah,
-\v 28 Zelah, Haeleph, Jebus (the same as Jerusalem), Gibeah, and Kiriath. There were fourteen cities, not counting their villages. This was the inheritance of Benjamin for their clans.
+\v 28 Zelah, Haeleph, Jebus (the same as Jerusalem), Gibeah, and Kiriath. There were fourteen cities, including their villages. This was the inheritance of Benjamin for their clans.
 
 
 

06-JOS/19.usfm

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 \v 5 Simeon also had Ziklag, Beth Marcaboth, Hazar Susah,
-\v 6 Beth Lebaoth, and Sharuhen. These were thirteen cities, not counting their villages.
+\v 6 Beth Lebaoth, and Sharuhen. These were thirteen cities, including their villages.
-\v 7 Simeon also had Ain, Rimmon, Ether, and Ashan. These were four cities, not counting their villages.
+\v 7 Simeon also had Ain, Rimmon, Ether, and Ashan. These were four cities, including their villages.
 
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 \v 8 These were together with the villages around these cities as far as Baalath Beer (the same as Ramah in the Negev). This was the inheritance of the tribe of Simeon, given to their clans.
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 \v 14 The border made a turn to the north to Hannathon and ended at the valley of Iphtah El.
-\v 15 This region included the cities of Kattath, Nahalal, Shimron, Idalah, and Bethlehem. There were twelve cities, not counting their villages.
+\v 15 This region included the cities of Kattath, Nahalal, Shimron, Idalah, and Bethlehem. There were twelve cities, including their villages.
 \v 16 This was the inheritance of the tribe of Zebulun, that was given to their clans—the cities, including their villages.
 
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 \v 20 It also included Rabbith, Kishion, Ebez,
 \v 21 Remeth, Engannim, Enhaddah, and Bethpazzez.
-\v 22 Their border also touched Tabor, Shahazumah, and Beth Shemesh, and ended at the Jordan. There were sixteen cities, not counting their villages.
+\v 22 Their border also touched Tabor, Shahazumah, and Beth Shemesh, and ended at the Jordan. There were sixteen cities, including their villages.
 
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 \v 23 This was the inheritance of the tribe of Issachar, and it was given to their clans—the cities, including their villages.
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 \v 29 The border turned back to Ramah, and then to the fortified city of Tyre. Then the border turned to Hosah and ended at the sea, in the region of Achzib,
-\v 30 Ummah, Aphek, and Rehob. There were twenty-two cities, not counting their villages.
+\v 30 Ummah, Aphek, and Rehob. There were twenty-two cities, including their villages.
 
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 \v 31 This was the inheritance of the tribe of Asher, and it was given to their clans—the cities, including their villages.
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 \v 37 Kedesh, Edrei, and En Hazor.
 
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-\v 38 There were also Yiron, Migdalel, Horem, Beth Anath, and Beth Shemesh. There were nineteen cities, not counting their villages.
+\v 38 There were also Yiron, Migdalel, Horem, Beth Anath, and Beth Shemesh. There were nineteen cities, including their villages.
 \v 39 This was the inheritance of the tribe of Naphtali, and it was given to their clans—the cities, including their villages.
 
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06-JOS/22.usfm

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 \v 3 You have not deserted your brothers these many days, down to this present day. And you have fulfilled the duties required by the commandments of Yahweh your God.
 
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-\v 4 Now Yahweh your God has given rest to your brothers, just as he promised them. Therefore turn and go to your tents in the land you own, which Moses the servant of Yahweh gave you on the other side the Jordan.
+\v 4 Now Yahweh your God has given rest to your brothers, just as he promised them. Therefore turn and go to your tents in the land you own, which Moses the servant of Yahweh gave you on the other side of the Jordan.
 \v 5 Just be very careful to observe the commandments and the law that Moses the servant of Yahweh commanded you, to love Yahweh your God, to walk in all his ways, to keep his commandments, and to cling to him and worship him with all your heart and with all your soul."
 \v 6 So Joshua blessed them and sent them away, and they went back to their tents.