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01-GEN/29.usfm

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-\v 31 Yahweh saw that Leah was not loved, so he caused her to become pregnant, but Rachel was childless.
+\v 31 Yahweh saw that Leah was not loved, so he opened her womb, but Rachel was childless.
 \v 32 Leah conceived and bore a son, and she called his name Reuben. For she said, "Because Yahweh has looked upon my affliction; for now my husband will love me."
 
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01-GEN/45.usfm

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 \v 6 For these two years the famine has been in the land, and there are still five years in which there will be neither plowing nor harvest.
 
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-\v 7 God sent me ahead of you to preserve you as a remnant in the earth, and to keep you alive for you many survivors.
+\v 7 God sent me ahead of you to preserve you as a remnant in the earth, and to keep you alive by a great deliverance.
 \v 8 So now it was not you who sent me here but God, and he has made me a father to Pharaoh, master of all his house, and ruler over all the land of Egypt.
 
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01-GEN/46.usfm

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 \v 11 the sons of Levi Gershon, Kohath, and Merari;
 
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-\v 12 the sons of Judah: Er, Onan, Shelah, Perez, and Zerah, (but Er and Onan died in the land of Canaan. And the sons of Perez were Hezron and Hamul);
+\v 12 the sons of Judah: Er, Onan, Shelah, Perez, and Zerah, (but Er and Onan had died in the land of Canaan). And the sons of Perez were Hezron and Hamul.
-\v 13 the sons of Issachar: Tola, Puvah, Lob, and Shimron;
+\v 13 The sons of Issachar were Tola, Puvah, Lob, and Shimron;
-\v 14 The sons of Zebulun: Sered, Elon, and Jahleel
+\v 14 The sons of Zebulun were Sered, Elon, and Jahleel
-\v 15 (these were the sons of Leah whom she bore to Jacob in Paddan Aram, with his daughter Dinah. His sons and his daughters numbered  thirty-three);
+\v 15 These were the sons of Leah whom she bore to Jacob in Paddan Aram, with his daughter Dinah. His sons and his daughters numbered thirty-three.
 
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-\v 16 the sons of Gad Ziphion and Haggi, Shuni and Ezbon, Er, Arodi, and Areli;
+\v 16 The sons of Gad were Ziphion, Haggi, Shuni, Ezbon, Er, Arodi, and Areli.
-\v 17 the sons of Asher Imnah and Ishvah, Ishvi, and Beriah, and Serah their sister; and the sons of Beriah Heber and Malchiel
+\v 17 The sons of Asher were Imnah, Ishvah, Ishvi, and Beriah. And Serah was their sister. And the sons of Beriah were Heber and Malchiel
-\v 18 (these were the sons of Zilpah, whom Laban gave to Leah his daughter. These she bore to Jacob, sixteen persons);
+\v 18 These were the sons of Zilpah, whom Laban had given to Leah his daughter. These she bore to Jacob—sixteen in all.
 
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-\v 19 the sons of Rachel, Jacob's wife—Joseph and Benjamin;
+\v 19 The sons of Jacob's wife Rachel were Joseph and Benjamin.
-\v 20 (to Joseph in the land of Egypt were born Manasseh and Ephraim, whom Asenath, the daughter of Potiphera priest of On, bore to him);
+\v 20 In Egypt Manasseh and Ephraim were born to Joseph by Asenath, the daughter of Potiphera priest of On. 
-\v 21 the sons of Benjamin Bela, Becher, Ashbel, Gera, Naaman, Ehi, Rosh, Muppim, Huppim, and Ard
+\v 21 The sons of Benjamin were Bela, Becher, Ashbel, Gera, Naaman, Ehi, Rosh, Muppim, Huppim, and Ard.
-\v 22 (these were the sons of Rachel who were born to Jacob. All these persons were fourteen in number);
+\v 22 These were the sons of Rachel who were born to Jacob—fourteen in all.
 
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-\v 23 the  son of Dan Hushim;
+\v 23 The son of Dan was Hushim.
-\v 24 the  sons of Naphtali Jahzeel, Guni, Jezer, and Shillem
+\v 24 The sons of Naphtali were Jahzeel, Guni, Jezer, and Shillem.
-\v 25 (these were the sons of Bilhah, whom Laban gave to Rachel his daughter. These she bore to Jacob. All these persons were seven in number).
+\v 25 These were the sons born to Jacob by Bilhah, whom Laban gave to Rachel his daughter—seven in all.
 
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-\v 26 All the persons who came with Jacob into Egypt, who were his descendants, besides Jacob's sons' wives—all these persons were sixty-six in number.
+\v 26 All the persons who came with Jacob into Egypt, who were his descendants, besides Jacob's sons' wives were sixty-six in all.
-\v 27 The sons of Joseph who were born to him in Egypt were two in number. All the persons of the house of Jacob who came into Egypt were seventy.
+\v 27 With the two sons of Joseph who were born to him in Egypt, the members of his family who went to Egypt were seventy in all.
 
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45-ACT/08.usfm

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 \v 20 But Peter said to him, "May your silver perish along with you, because you thought to obtain the gift of God with money.
 \v 21 You have no part or share in this matter, because your heart is not right with God.
-\v 22 Therefore repent of this wickedness of yours, and pray to the Lord, so that he might perhaps forgive you for what you desired.
+\v 22 Therefore repent of this wickedness of yours, and pray to the Lord, so that he might perhaps forgive you for the intention of your heart.
 \v 23 For I see that you are in the poison of bitterness and in the bonds of sin."
 
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61-1PE/01.usfm

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 \v 18 You know that it was not with perishable silver or gold that you have been redeemed from the foolish behavior that you learned from your fathers,
-\v 19 but with the precious blood of Christ, who is like a lamb without blemish and without spot.
+\v 19 but with the precious blood of Christ—like a lamb without blemish and without spot.
 
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 \v 20 Christ was chosen before the foundation of the world, but now he has been revealed to you in these last times.