From 0be4e24ec53fd178bc51c881e46a804e678ea041 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Mon, 3 Apr 2017 12:05:09 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] From Aaron Fenlason --- 35-HAB/01.usfm | 4 ++-- 35-HAB/02.usfm | 11 +++++++---- 35-HAB/03.usfm | 14 ++++++++------ 3 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-) diff --git a/35-HAB/01.usfm b/35-HAB/01.usfm index e847b5ca..3e48cd74 100644 --- a/35-HAB/01.usfm +++ b/35-HAB/01.usfm @@ -66,8 +66,8 @@ \v 15 They bring up all of them with fishhooks; they drag men away in fishnets \q and gather them in their net. This is why they rejoice and shout exuberantly. \q -\v 16 Therefore they sacrifice to their fishing nets and burn incense to their net, -\q for fattened beasts are their portion, and the fatty meat is their food. +\v 16 Therefore he offers sacrifice to his net and burns incense to his dragnet, +\q for by his net he lives in luxury, and his food is the richest kind. \q \v 17 Will they therefore empty their fishing nets and continue to slaughter the nations, feeling no compassion?" diff --git a/35-HAB/02.usfm b/35-HAB/02.usfm index 661797cd..4adcc12e 100644 --- a/35-HAB/02.usfm +++ b/35-HAB/02.usfm @@ -56,11 +56,14 @@ \s5 \q -\v 15 'Woe to the one making his neighbor drink, you who add your poison until you make them drunk -\q2 so you can look on their nakedness.' +\v 15 'Woe to the one who forces his neighbors to drink— +\q you express your anger and you make them drunk +\q so you can look at their nakedness.' \q2 -\v 16 You will be gorged with shame rather than glory. Drink of it also, and reveal your own nakedness. -\q2 The cup of Yahweh's right hand will come in its turn to you, and disgrace will cover your honor. +\v 16 You will be filled with shame instead of glory. +\q Now it is your turn! Drink, and you will expose your mark of circumcision. +\q2 The cup in Yahweh's right hand is coming around to you, +\q2 and disgrace will cover your glory. \s5 \q2 diff --git a/35-HAB/03.usfm b/35-HAB/03.usfm index e17398c4..b5599851 100644 --- a/35-HAB/03.usfm +++ b/35-HAB/03.usfm @@ -17,10 +17,11 @@ \s5 \q -\v 4 The two rays of his hand were as bright as lightning, -\q where his strength was hidden. +\v 4 With brightness like the light, two-pronged rays flash from his hand; +\q and there he hid his power. \q -\v 5 Deadly disease went before him, and plague went after his feet. +\v 5 Deadly disease went before him, +\q and the plague followed him. \s5 \q @@ -47,8 +48,9 @@ \q It lifted up its waves. \s5 \q -\v 11 The sun and moon stood still above in their high places -\q at the light of your arrows and they flew, at the brightness of the lightning flash of your spear. +\v 11 The sun and moon stood still in their high places +\q at the flash of your arrows as they fly, +\q at the lightning of your flashing spear. \q \v 12 You have marched over the earth with indignation. In wrath you have threshed the nations. @@ -74,7 +76,7 @@ \q2 \v 17 Though the fig tree does not bud and there is no produce from the vines; \q2 and though the produce of the olive tree disappoints and the fields yield no food; -\q2 and thought the flock is cut off from the fold and there is no cattle in the stalls, this is what I will do. +\q2 and thought the flock is cut off from the fold and there are no cattle in the stalls, this is what I will do. \s5 \q \v 18 Still, I will rejoice in Yahweh. I will be joyful because of the God of my salvation.