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1771 Commits

Author SHA1 Message Date
pohlig cb46d47a57 Update 01.usfm 2016-05-26 10:50:45 -04:00
Tom Warren 5096f8cf25 reworked some sections end of chapt 2016-05-26 10:40:41 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 7c989ca168 V24 rewrite 2016-05-26 10:34:52 -04:00
Tom Warren c39abb9852 Clothes we will wear 2016-05-26 10:34:25 -04:00
Tom Warren 5b7eb91bd5 more valuable 2016-05-26 10:31:42 -04:00
Tom Warren 0e52207200 punctuation 2016-05-26 10:29:27 -04:00
Tom Warren 159a38dceb consume
to "destroy"
2016-05-26 10:26:36 -04:00
hharrissWA 96059c55a6 Changed period to an exclamation mark in v. 9 2016-05-29 09:24:08 -05:00
hharrissWA 7373f6383a changed a period to an exclamation mark 2016-05-29 09:24:08 -05:00
Tom Warren ea4de1c307 private to secret 2016-05-26 10:21:42 -04:00
Tom Warren 12b6b193ca Closer to the Greek 2016-05-26 10:19:03 -04:00
Tom Warren 4c88befe53 Straightened out Lord's Prayer 2016-05-26 10:14:42 -04:00
Tom Warren f2f071ac60 Vs 4, 6
recompense changed to "reward"
2016-05-26 10:11:38 -04:00
Tom Warren 94bb3d1e30 Condition 2016-05-26 10:09:17 -04:00
Tom Warren e6823e56e2 Various tweeks 2016-05-26 09:59:31 -04:00
Tom Warren a15df6137a Various edits 2016-05-26 09:45:07 -04:00
hharrissWA 5683d633d5 added "From" to v. 1; and in v. 3 removed the comma after "us,"
"From" helps explain the "to" of this letter:
From ____, To ____
Comma seems to not be needed; unnecessarily interrupts the flow of the
first clause
2016-05-29 08:28:13 -05:00
Tom Warren 7315a37291 Sabbath 2016-05-26 09:03:01 -04:00
Tom Warren d7caa84be7 Sabbath 2016-05-26 09:01:01 -04:00
Tom Warren 0941298eda oxen and fattened ... 2016-05-26 08:27:39 -04:00
Tom Warren 4ba4abafb9 Reworked 22:1
Redundant introduction of narrative is simplified.
2016-05-26 08:21:27 -04:00
Tom Warren cfebe926b6 21:43
removed unnecessary UC"The...", replaced with "the ...
2016-05-26 08:16:16 -04:00
Tom Warren 0ca912c6f3 Period at end of 14:3 2016-05-26 08:10:10 -04:00
pohlig 2148f5d075 Update 06.usfm 2016-05-25 18:16:31 -04:00
pohlig 0047112219 Update 06.usfm 2016-05-25 17:41:03 -04:00
pohlig 64faccc712 Update 06.usfm 2016-05-25 17:38:43 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel ceb4651890 V18-23 rewrite 2016-05-25 17:24:06 -04:00
pohlig f8ec9fc3b6 Update 06.usfm 2016-05-25 16:14:19 -04:00
Hanker10 651400d74c Hebrews 5:6 colon to comma
Hebrews 5:6  colon to comma
2016-05-25 16:02:53 -04:00
pohlig f8d1735d95 Update 06.usfm 2016-05-25 16:02:24 -04:00
Hanker10 4c6ea0134e Hebrews 5:5 semi-colon to comma
Hebrews 5:5  semi-colon to comma
2016-05-25 16:00:45 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 27f2320770 V15, 16 rewrite 2016-05-25 15:59:18 -04:00
Hanker10 07e826e8c3 Hebrews 4:3 change colon to comma
Hebrews 4:3 change colon to comma
2016-05-25 15:58:34 -04:00
Hanker10 ba93b9e61e Hebrews 3:10-11 second level quote change
Hebrews 3:10-11 second level quote change from the end of verse 11 to the end of verse 10
2016-05-25 15:57:27 -04:00
Hanker10 a16ae4099f Hebrews 3:7 change punctuation
Hebrews 3:7 change punctuation
2016-05-25 15:51:59 -04:00
Hanker10 1adcde5b78 Hebrews 2:16 change punctuation
Hebrews 2:16 change punctuation
2016-05-25 15:49:20 -04:00
Hanker10 94090499a7 Hebrews 2:12 change punctuation
Hebrews 2:12 change punctuation
2016-05-25 15:47:40 -04:00
Hanker10 1893e1cebc Hebrews 2:2-3 change sentence structure
Hebrews 2:2-3 change sentence structure to make conditional clause (verse 2) precede naturally the main one.
2016-05-25 15:45:20 -04:00
pohlig a9b86cdda7 Update 06.usfm 2016-05-25 15:42:27 -04:00
pohlig 8725d6a9a8 Update 06.usfm 2016-05-25 15:38:37 -04:00
Hanker10 f18a4f0a99 Hebrews 1:14 change wording
Hebrews 1:14 changed "sent out to worship me and to care" to "sent out to minister and to care" since the pronoun "me" is not in the Greek and confusingly refers to God IF he is still the speaker in verse 14 but the quotation marks indicate that now the writer is speaking.
2016-05-25 15:20:57 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel 9461dbc12f Rewrite V13, 15 2016-05-25 15:15:55 -04:00
Hanker10 7ac6831325 Hebrews 1:10 semi-colon to period and new sentence
Hebrews 1:10 semi-colon to period and new sentence
2016-05-25 15:14:59 -04:00
Hanker10 59e7640236 Hebrews 1:9 semi-colon to comma
Hebrews 1:9 semi-colon to comma
2016-05-25 15:13:38 -04:00
Hanker10 5f0e04da34 Hebrews 1:8 semi-colon to period and new sentence
Hebrews 1:8 semi-colon to period and new sentence
2016-05-25 15:12:27 -04:00
Hanker10 b219692814 Hebrews 1:5 semi-colon to comma
Hebrews 1:5 semi-colon to comma
2016-05-25 15:11:17 -04:00
BramvandenHeuvel cea9da7045 V8, 9 rewrite 2016-05-25 14:46:52 -04:00
Hanker10 97a5260ffa Hebrews 12:8 cut redundant word "children"
Hebrews 12:8 cut redundant word "children"
2016-05-25 14:43:19 -04:00
Hanker10 70f3d56c7f Hebrews 11:19 change wording
Hebrews 11:19 change wording to smooth it out and connect "from the dead" closer to Abraham's "receiving him back.
2016-05-25 14:40:54 -04:00
Hanker10 c75401e950 Hebrews 6:3 change wording number
Hebrews 6:3 change wording number from plural to singular "these things" to "this"
2016-05-25 14:29:25 -04:00