From 6f1d8c2498b097ffa43e2b0bfc0042393a87c786 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pjoakes Date: Fri, 16 Dec 2016 12:04:07 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 01/17] "should" to "must" --- 43-LUK/03.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/43-LUK/03.usfm b/43-LUK/03.usfm index 0bc991ce..c3d98522 100644 --- a/43-LUK/03.usfm +++ b/43-LUK/03.usfm @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ \v 10 Then the crowds kept asking him, saying, "What then are we to do?" \v 11 He answered and said to them, "If someone has two tunics, he should share it with a person who has none, and the one having food should do the same." \s5 -\v 12 Tax collectors also came to be baptized, and they said to him, "Teacher, what should we do?" +\v 12 Tax collectors also came to be baptized, and they said to him, "Teacher, what must we do?" \v 13 He said to them, "Do not collect more money than you have been ordered to collect." \s5 From 55ee5964797cae7a97b23c245298c68c7db5d3e2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 16 Dec 2016 16:02:56 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 02/17] Update 07.usfm --- 20-PRO/07.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/07.usfm b/20-PRO/07.usfm index 276aa922..d6dfc28e 100644 --- a/20-PRO/07.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/07.usfm @@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ \v 4 Say to wisdom, "You are my sister," \q and call understanding your kinsman, \q -\v 5 in order to keep you from the seductive woman, +\v 5 in order to keep you from the unlawful woman, \q from the adulteress with her smooth words. \s5 From cb7e1ee474a27fb843ac8a758b273c784b69ca8a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 16 Dec 2016 16:42:25 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 03/17] Update 07.usfm --- 20-PRO/07.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/07.usfm b/20-PRO/07.usfm index d6dfc28e..536f86d6 100644 --- a/20-PRO/07.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/07.usfm @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ \c 7 \q \v 1 My son, keep my words -\q and store up my commands within you. +\q and store up my commands within yourselves. \q \v 2 Keep my commands and live \q and keep my instruction as the apple of your eye. From 80fa2af4bf528a76029d69ce7dc0c58424c7d4d4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 16 Dec 2016 18:34:48 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 04/17] Update 07.usfm --- 20-PRO/07.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/07.usfm b/20-PRO/07.usfm index 536f86d6..f4788e67 100644 --- a/20-PRO/07.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/07.usfm @@ -17,8 +17,8 @@ \v 4 Say to wisdom, "You are my sister," \q and call understanding your kinsman, \q -\v 5 in order to keep you from the unlawful woman, -\q from the adulteress with her smooth words. +\v 5 in order to keep yourself from the unlawful woman, +\q from the female stranger with her smooth words. \s5 \q From ddb59a235de5b815f41f46d3813e1a7128af026a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Sat, 17 Dec 2016 10:00:35 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 05/17] Update 07.usfm --- 20-PRO/07.usfm | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/07.usfm b/20-PRO/07.usfm index f4788e67..961bf4f2 100644 --- a/20-PRO/07.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/07.usfm @@ -23,11 +23,11 @@ \s5 \q \v 6 At the window of my house -\q I looked out through the lattice +\q I was looking out through the lattice. \q -\v 7 and I saw among the simple, -\q I noticed among the youths -\q a young man who had no sense. +\v 7 I looked at the uneducated people, +\q and I noticed among the young men +\q a youth who had no sense. \s5 \q From 33fe077de8ab889ca48bac8bcdba1150e8d75664 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Sat, 17 Dec 2016 10:03:03 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 06/17] Update 07.usfm --- 20-PRO/07.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/07.usfm b/20-PRO/07.usfm index 961bf4f2..ee03377e 100644 --- a/20-PRO/07.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/07.usfm @@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ \v 6 At the window of my house \q I was looking out through the lattice. \q -\v 7 I looked at the uneducated people, +\v 7 I looked at the inexperienced people, \q and I noticed among the young men \q a youth who had no sense. From 6c0080b7adcd0183543500c5e0ff0507b4ca519b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Sat, 17 Dec 2016 10:07:33 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 07/17] Update 07.usfm --- 20-PRO/07.usfm | 12 ++++++------ 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/07.usfm b/20-PRO/07.usfm index ee03377e..34c0d612 100644 --- a/20-PRO/07.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/07.usfm @@ -31,16 +31,16 @@ \s5 \q -\v 8 That young man passed through the street near her corner -\q and he went toward her house— +\v 8 That young man passed down the street near her corner, +\q and he went toward her house. \q -\v 9 it was twilight, in the evening of the day, -\q at the time of the night and darkness. +\v 9 It was twilight, in the evening of the day, +\q at the time of night and darkness. \s5 \q -\v 10 And there a woman met him, -\q dressed like a prostitute, and she knew why she was there. +\v 10 There a woman met him, +\q dressed like a prostitute; she knew why she was there. \q \v 11 She is loud and wayward, \q her feet do not stay at home— From 43c97a6bb36bac4d025c650719d6d1acd0fbeff2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Mon, 19 Dec 2016 10:47:28 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 08/17] pro 22:17 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit de-UDB’d --- 20-PRO/22.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/22.usfm b/20-PRO/22.usfm index d0604cce..263b5689 100644 --- a/20-PRO/22.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/22.usfm @@ -63,10 +63,10 @@ \q \v 16 The one who oppresses poor people to increase his wealth, \q or gives to rich people, will come to poverty. - + \s5 \q -\v 17 Pay attention and hear the words of the wise +\v 17 Incline your ear and listen to the words of the wise \q and apply your heart to my knowledge, \q \v 18 for it will be pleasant for you if you keep them within you, From 7df4f645944f880008fc55ec6cde07b62f99de9b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Chris Jarka Date: Mon, 19 Dec 2016 11:15:39 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 09/17] Update 10.usfm --- 06-JOS/10.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/06-JOS/10.usfm b/06-JOS/10.usfm index 1b646b34..46422bca 100644 --- a/06-JOS/10.usfm +++ b/06-JOS/10.usfm @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ \s5 -\c 10 +\c 10 \p \v 1 Now Adonizedek, king of Jerusalem, heard that Joshua had captured Ai and had completely destroyed it, just as he had done to Jericho and its king. And he heard how the people of Gibeon had made peace with Israel and were living among them. \v 2 The people of Jerusalem were very afraid because Gibeon was a large city, like one of the royal cities. It was larger than Ai, and all its men were mighty warriors. From dab2848b37b6daee011d83af04b154bc97be7769 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Mon, 19 Dec 2016 13:13:37 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 10/17] Pro 22:22-23 errant comma, awkward wording --- 20-PRO/22.usfm | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/22.usfm b/20-PRO/22.usfm index 263b5689..6e25204d 100644 --- a/20-PRO/22.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/22.usfm @@ -82,14 +82,14 @@ \q \v 21 to teach you truth in these trustworthy words, \q so you may give trustworthy answers to those who sent you? - + \s5 \q -\v 22 Do not rob the poor person, because he is poor, +\v 22 Do not rob the poor person because he is poor, \q or crush the needy person at the gate, \q -\v 23 for Yahweh will plead their case -\q and he will rob those of life who robbed them. +\v 23 for Yahweh will plead their case, +\q and he will rob of life those who robbed them. \s5 \q \v 24 Do not make a friend of someone who is ruled by anger From 393543348b34ad894c22c6f66434cc75cc8f6ef4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Mon, 19 Dec 2016 13:24:48 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 11/17] Pro 22:22 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit de-UDB’d --- 20-PRO/22.usfm | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/22.usfm b/20-PRO/22.usfm index 6e25204d..6b95dba7 100644 --- a/20-PRO/22.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/22.usfm @@ -82,11 +82,11 @@ \q \v 21 to teach you truth in these trustworthy words, \q so you may give trustworthy answers to those who sent you? - + \s5 \q -\v 22 Do not rob the poor person because he is poor, -\q or crush the needy person at the gate, +\v 22 Do not rob the poor because he is poor, +\q or crush the needy at the gate, \q \v 23 for Yahweh will plead their case, \q and he will rob of life those who robbed them. From f52cbd286311a643e129ac6da7ac1ca8005489bb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Mon, 19 Dec 2016 14:26:10 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 12/17] Pro 22:25 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit de UDB’d --- 20-PRO/22.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/22.usfm b/20-PRO/22.usfm index 6b95dba7..d081f452 100644 --- a/20-PRO/22.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/22.usfm @@ -96,8 +96,8 @@ \q and you must not go with one who rages, \q \v 25 or you will learn his ways -\q and you will entangle yourself in a snare. - +\q and you will take bait for your soul. + \s5 \q \v 26 Do not be one who gives binding pledges regarding money From c8f05e7533717d93fcd9c524665861e01d5533e5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Mon, 19 Dec 2016 14:27:03 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 13/17] magic --- 20-PRO/22.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/22.usfm b/20-PRO/22.usfm index d081f452..444a0f06 100644 --- a/20-PRO/22.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/22.usfm @@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ \q \v 25 or you will learn his ways \q and you will take bait for your soul. - + \s5 \q \v 26 Do not be one who gives binding pledges regarding money From 630780d37115729e76d28fd79d0119d6d8646228 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Mon, 19 Dec 2016 14:40:27 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 14/17] Pro 22:26 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit de-UDB’d --- 20-PRO/22.usfm | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/22.usfm b/20-PRO/22.usfm index 444a0f06..2756846e 100644 --- a/20-PRO/22.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/22.usfm @@ -97,11 +97,11 @@ \q \v 25 or you will learn his ways \q and you will take bait for your soul. - + \s5 \q -\v 26 Do not be one who gives binding pledges regarding money -\q and do not give a guarantee for the debts of others. +\v 26 Do not among those who strike hands, +\q who pledge debts. \q \v 27 If you lack the means to pay, \q what could stop someone from taking away your bed from under you? From 66d5afdd779b69eefb27460a5881d5e779a17835 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Mon, 19 Dec 2016 14:41:30 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 15/17] magic --- 20-PRO/22.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/22.usfm b/20-PRO/22.usfm index 2756846e..e9e9a289 100644 --- a/20-PRO/22.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/22.usfm @@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ \q \v 25 or you will learn his ways \q and you will take bait for your soul. - + \s5 \q \v 26 Do not among those who strike hands, From 792a389c1df3c5dcd17f3190d170467e2654466a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Mon, 19 Dec 2016 15:23:24 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 16/17] Update 07.usfm --- 20-PRO/07.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/07.usfm b/20-PRO/07.usfm index 34c0d612..b50e506e 100644 --- a/20-PRO/07.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/07.usfm @@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ \s5 \q \v 10 There a woman met him, -\q dressed like a prostitute; she knew why she was there. +\q dressed like a prostitute, with a false heart. \q \v 11 She is loud and wayward, \q her feet do not stay at home— From 98b73d296fe14207dfed82b0038da39d208bcebd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Mon, 19 Dec 2016 15:49:56 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 17/17] Pro 23:4-5 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit de-UDB’d --- 20-PRO/23.usfm | 11 ++++++----- 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/20-PRO/23.usfm b/20-PRO/23.usfm index c522891a..430ab5ed 100644 --- a/20-PRO/23.usfm +++ b/20-PRO/23.usfm @@ -14,13 +14,14 @@ \s5 \q -\v 4 Do not work too hard so you can become rich; +\v 4 Do not work too hard to gain wealth; \q be wise enough to know when to stop. \q -\v 5 When your eyes light upon the money, it is gone, -\q and suddenly it takes up wings -\q and flies off to the sky like an eagle. - +\v 5 Will you let your eyes light upon it? +\q It will be gone, +\q for it will surely take up wings like an eagle +\q and fly off to the sky. + \s5 \q \v 6 Do not eat the food of an evil man—someone who looks too long at your food—