From 6040f828abd2e9b8b549a8107d13fab4496d49cc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: aaronfenlason Date: Thu, 1 Sep 2016 13:57:40 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 01/45] "disquieted" to "worried" to match 42:5 & 11 --- 19-PSA/043.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/043.usfm b/19-PSA/043.usfm index ede640f4..7168a9ed 100644 --- a/19-PSA/043.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/043.usfm @@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ \s5 \q \v 5 Why are you bowed down, my soul? -\q Why are you disquieted within me? +\q Why are you worried within me? \q Hope in God; for I will yet praise him, \q who is my help and my God. From f1c16490a557349783e51269871caa3f502a0d19 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Thu, 1 Sep 2016 15:20:55 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 02/45] Update 08.usfm --- 16-NEH/08.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/16-NEH/08.usfm b/16-NEH/08.usfm index e81acf89..a92715d8 100644 --- a/16-NEH/08.usfm +++ b/16-NEH/08.usfm @@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ \v 6 Ezra gave thanks to Yahweh, the great God, and all the people lifted up their hands and answered, "Amen! Amen!" Then they bowed their heads and worshiped Yahweh with their faces to the ground. \v 7 Also Jeshua, Bani, Sherebiah, Jamin, Akkub, Shabbethai, Hodiah, Maaseiah, Kelita, Azariah, Jozabad, Hanan, Pelaiah—the Levites—helped the people understand the law, while the people remained in their place. \f + \ft Most modern versions, including the ULB and UDB, translate so as to identify as Levites all the persons named in this verse. However, some modern versions translate so as to put \fqa the Levites \fqb in the same list as the individuals first named. \f* -\v 8 And they read in the book, the law of God, making it clear with interpretation and giving the meaning so they understood the reading. +\v 8 They read in the book, the law of God, making it clear with interpretation and giving the meaning so they understood the reading. \s5 \p From 7fc40dc978ec6d05e7ffb3ce6a35eee5167f034b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Thu, 1 Sep 2016 15:21:53 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 03/45] Update 08.usfm --- 16-NEH/08.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/16-NEH/08.usfm b/16-NEH/08.usfm index a92715d8..0c10d6d4 100644 --- a/16-NEH/08.usfm +++ b/16-NEH/08.usfm @@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ \v 6 Ezra gave thanks to Yahweh, the great God, and all the people lifted up their hands and answered, "Amen! Amen!" Then they bowed their heads and worshiped Yahweh with their faces to the ground. \v 7 Also Jeshua, Bani, Sherebiah, Jamin, Akkub, Shabbethai, Hodiah, Maaseiah, Kelita, Azariah, Jozabad, Hanan, Pelaiah—the Levites—helped the people understand the law, while the people remained in their place. \f + \ft Most modern versions, including the ULB and UDB, translate so as to identify as Levites all the persons named in this verse. However, some modern versions translate so as to put \fqa the Levites \fqb in the same list as the individuals first named. \f* -\v 8 They read in the book, the law of God, making it clear with interpretation and giving the meaning so they understood the reading. +\v 8 They read in the book, the law of God, making it clear with interpretation and giving the meaning so the people understood the reading. \s5 \p From f3fe794345e53992117a7e7414f4b2df3e930201 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Thu, 1 Sep 2016 15:39:09 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 04/45] Update 11.usfm --- 16-NEH/11.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/16-NEH/11.usfm b/16-NEH/11.usfm index 71082828..c23db3f6 100644 --- a/16-NEH/11.usfm +++ b/16-NEH/11.usfm @@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ The people from Judah included: Athaiah son of Uzziah son of Zechariah son of Am \v 16 and Shabbethai and Jozabad, who were from the leaders of the Levites and were in charge of the outside work of the house of God. \s5 -\v 17 There was Mattaniah son of Mica son of Zabdi, a descendant of Asaph, who was the director who led the thanksgiving in prayer, and Bakbukiah, the second among his associates, and Abda son of Shammua son of Galal son of Jeduthun. +\v 17 There was Mattaniah son of Mica son of Zabdi, a descendant of Asaph, who was the director who began the thanksgiving in prayer, and Bakbukiah, the second among his associates, and Abda son of Shammua son of Galal son of Jeduthun. \v 18 In all the holy city were 284 Levites. \s5 From 1c1ac4285f213f28643102fb8e7234e73a1baf68 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 10:25:50 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 05/45] Update 12.usfm --- 16-NEH/12.usfm | 3 ++- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/16-NEH/12.usfm b/16-NEH/12.usfm index 2c94736b..d13f7550 100644 --- a/16-NEH/12.usfm +++ b/16-NEH/12.usfm @@ -24,7 +24,8 @@ \p \v 12 In the days of Joiakim these were the priests, the heads of fathers' families: Meraiah was leader of Seraiah, Hananiah was leader of Jeremiah, \v 13 Meshullam was leader of Ezra, Jehohanan was leader of Amariah, -\v 14 Jonathan was leader of Malluchi, and Joseph was leader of Shebaniah. +\v 14 Jonathan was leader of Malluch, and Joseph was leader of Shebaniah. +\f + \ft Many modern versions, including the ULB and UDB, have \fqa Malluch \fqb as a correction for \fqa Malluchi \fqb in the Hebrew text. The correct form of this name appears in Neh. 12:2. \f* \s5 \v 15 To continue, Adna was leader of Harim, Helkai leader of Meraioth, From 0a46d0330d675295dffcd683304182c329594ac7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 10:47:29 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 06/45] Update 12.usfm --- 16-NEH/12.usfm | 26 +++++++++++++------------- 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-) diff --git a/16-NEH/12.usfm b/16-NEH/12.usfm index d13f7550..752894ea 100644 --- a/16-NEH/12.usfm +++ b/16-NEH/12.usfm @@ -1,12 +1,12 @@ \c 12 \s5 \p -\v 1 These are the priests and Levites who came up with Zerubbabel son of Shealtiel and with Jeshua: Seraiah, Jeremiah, Ezra, +\v 1 These were the priests and Levites who came up with Zerubbabel son of Shealtiel and with Jeshua: Seraiah, Jeremiah, Ezra, \v 2 Amariah, Malluch, Hattush, \v 3 Shecaniah, Rehum, and Meremoth. \s5 -\v 4 There was Iddo, Ginnethoi, Abijah, +\v 4 There were Iddo, Ginnethoi, Abijah, \v 5 Mijamin, Maadiah, Bilgah, \v 6 Shemaiah, and Joiarib, Jedaiah. \v 7 Sallu, Amok, Hilkiah, and Jedaiah. These were the leaders of the priests and their associates in the days of Jeshua. @@ -22,19 +22,19 @@ \s5 \p -\v 12 In the days of Joiakim these were the priests, the heads of fathers' families: Meraiah was leader of Seraiah, Hananiah was leader of Jeremiah, -\v 13 Meshullam was leader of Ezra, Jehohanan was leader of Amariah, -\v 14 Jonathan was leader of Malluch, and Joseph was leader of Shebaniah. +\v 12 In the days of Joiakim these were the priests, the leaders of the fathers' families: Meraiah was the leader of Seraiah, Hananiah was the leader of Jeremiah, +\v 13 Meshullam was the leader of Ezra, Jehohanan was the leader of Amariah, +\v 14 Jonathan was the leader of Malluch, and Joseph was the leader of Shebaniah. \f + \ft Many modern versions, including the ULB and UDB, have \fqa Malluch \fqb as a correction for \fqa Malluchi \fqb in the Hebrew text. The correct form of this name appears in Neh. 12:2. \f* \s5 -\v 15 To continue, Adna was leader of Harim, Helkai leader of Meraioth, -\v 16 Zechariah was leader of Iddo, Meshullam was leader of Ginnethon, and -\v 17 Zichri was leader of Abijah. There was also a leader of Miniamin. Piltai was leader of Moadiah. -\v 18 Shammua was leader of Bilgah, Jehonathan was leader of Shemaiah, -\v 19 Mattenai was leader of Joiarib, Uzzi was leader of Jedaiah, -\v 20 Kallai was leader of Sallai, Eber was leader of Amok, -\v 21 Hashabiah was leader of Hilkiah, and Nethanel was leader of Jedaiah. +\v 15 To continue, Adna was the leader of Harim, Helkai the leader of Meraioth, +\v 16 Zechariah was the leader of Iddo, Meshullam was the leader of Ginnethon, and +\v 17 Zichri was the leader of Abijah. There was also a leader of Miniamin. Piltai was the leader of Moadiah. +\v 18 Shammua was the leader of Bilgah, Jehonathan was the leader of Shemaiah, +\v 19 Mattenai was the leader of Joiarib, Uzzi was the leader of Jedaiah, +\v 20 Kallai was the leader of Sallai, Eber was the leader of Amok, +\v 21 Hashabiah was the leader of Hilkiah, and Nethanel was the leader of Jedaiah. \s5 \p @@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ \v 23 The descendants of Levi and their leaders of families were recorded in The Book of the Annals up to the days of Johanan son of Eliashib. \s5 -\v 24 And the leaders of the Levites were Hashabiah, Sherebiah, and Jeshua son of Kadmiel, with their associates who stood opposite them to give praise and to give thanks, responding section by section, in obedience to the command of David, the man of God. +\v 24 The leaders of the Levites were Hashabiah, Sherebiah, and Jeshua son of Kadmiel, with their associates, who stood opposite them to give praise and to give thanks, responding section by section, in obedience to the command of David, the man of God. \v 25 Mattaniah, Bakbukiah, Obadiah, Meshullam, Talmon, and Akkub were gatekeepers standing guard at the storerooms of the gates. \v 26 They served in the days of Joiakim son of Jeshua son of Jozadak, and in the days of Nehemiah the governor and of Ezra the priest and scribe. From 5f442038bd2e8e820b42ca5351363a5bfa4d9700 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 10:54:41 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 07/45] Update 12.usfm --- 16-NEH/12.usfm | 5 +++-- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/16-NEH/12.usfm b/16-NEH/12.usfm index 752894ea..40096dff 100644 --- a/16-NEH/12.usfm +++ b/16-NEH/12.usfm @@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ \s5 \p -\v 12 In the days of Joiakim these were the priests, the leaders of the fathers' families: Meraiah was the leader of Seraiah, Hananiah was the leader of Jeremiah, +\v 12 In the days of Joiakim these were the priests, the leaders of the families: Meraiah was the leader of Seraiah, Hananiah was the leader of Jeremiah, \v 13 Meshullam was the leader of Ezra, Jehohanan was the leader of Amariah, \v 14 Jonathan was the leader of Malluch, and Joseph was the leader of Shebaniah. \f + \ft Many modern versions, including the ULB and UDB, have \fqa Malluch \fqb as a correction for \fqa Malluchi \fqb in the Hebrew text. The correct form of this name appears in Neh. 12:2. \f* @@ -30,7 +30,8 @@ \s5 \v 15 To continue, Adna was the leader of Harim, Helkai the leader of Meraioth, \v 16 Zechariah was the leader of Iddo, Meshullam was the leader of Ginnethon, and -\v 17 Zichri was the leader of Abijah. There was also a leader of Miniamin. Piltai was the leader of Moadiah. +\v 17 Zichri was the leader of Abijah. ... of Miniamin. Piltai was the leader of Moadiah. +\f + \ft The expression \fqa ... of Miniamin \fqb is incomplete, because no leader of the family is given in the Hebrew text. \f* \v 18 Shammua was the leader of Bilgah, Jehonathan was the leader of Shemaiah, \v 19 Mattenai was the leader of Joiarib, Uzzi was the leader of Jedaiah, \v 20 Kallai was the leader of Sallai, Eber was the leader of Amok, From 2b59849a0fbcd1af078388d6d861a0257f2c0086 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 10:55:58 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 08/45] Update 12.usfm --- 16-NEH/12.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/16-NEH/12.usfm b/16-NEH/12.usfm index 40096dff..283325e2 100644 --- a/16-NEH/12.usfm +++ b/16-NEH/12.usfm @@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ \v 15 To continue, Adna was the leader of Harim, Helkai the leader of Meraioth, \v 16 Zechariah was the leader of Iddo, Meshullam was the leader of Ginnethon, and \v 17 Zichri was the leader of Abijah. ... of Miniamin. Piltai was the leader of Moadiah. -\f + \ft The expression \fqa ... of Miniamin \fqb is incomplete, because no leader of the family is given in the Hebrew text. \f* +\f + \ft The expression \fqa ... of Miniamin \fqb is incomplete, because no leader of that family is named in the Hebrew text. \f* \v 18 Shammua was the leader of Bilgah, Jehonathan was the leader of Shemaiah, \v 19 Mattenai was the leader of Joiarib, Uzzi was the leader of Jedaiah, \v 20 Kallai was the leader of Sallai, Eber was the leader of Amok, From 4fdfb7fb6b6fab4e3701b3971c83be18e37e59f5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 11:07:28 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 09/45] Update 12.usfm --- 16-NEH/12.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/16-NEH/12.usfm b/16-NEH/12.usfm index 283325e2..6d0a5fab 100644 --- a/16-NEH/12.usfm +++ b/16-NEH/12.usfm @@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ \s5 \v 24 The leaders of the Levites were Hashabiah, Sherebiah, and Jeshua son of Kadmiel, with their associates, who stood opposite them to give praise and to give thanks, responding section by section, in obedience to the command of David, the man of God. -\v 25 Mattaniah, Bakbukiah, Obadiah, Meshullam, Talmon, and Akkub were gatekeepers standing guard at the storerooms of the gates. +\v 25 Mattaniah, Bakbukiah, Obadiah, Meshullam, Talmon, and Akkub were gatekeepers standing guard at the storerooms by the gates. \v 26 They served in the days of Joiakim son of Jeshua son of Jozadak, and in the days of Nehemiah the governor and of Ezra the priest and scribe. \s5 From 89ceae7c7bc9cdf2433f0e5de27a1d5daa03a500 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 11:10:47 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 10/45] Update 07.usfm --- 16-NEH/07.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/16-NEH/07.usfm b/16-NEH/07.usfm index c1bf8208..a0965439 100644 --- a/16-NEH/07.usfm +++ b/16-NEH/07.usfm @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ \s5 \c 7 \p -\v 1 When the wall was finished and I had set up the doors in place, and the gatekeepers and singers and Levites were appointed, +\v 1 When the wall was finished and I had set up the doors in place, and the gatekeepers and singers and Levites had been appointed, \v 2 I gave my brother Hanani charge over Jerusalem, along with Hananiah who had oversight of the citadel, for he was a faithful man and feared God more than many. \s5 From 2e7e09f375bb480e834a79e434e07461b2103c1e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 12:39:49 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 11/45] Update 15.usfm --- 18-JOB/15.usfm | 1 + 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+) diff --git a/18-JOB/15.usfm b/18-JOB/15.usfm index f0f5fe8c..1aafee9f 100644 --- a/18-JOB/15.usfm +++ b/18-JOB/15.usfm @@ -115,6 +115,7 @@ \q not even his shadow will last on the earth. \q \v 30 He will not depart out of darkness; +\f + \ft Several modern versions leave out \fqa He will not depart out of darkness \fqb , because they believe that this expression was mistakenly copied from 15:22. \f* \q a flame will dry up his branches; \q at the breath of God's mouth he will go away. From 109fbdf911a75955304bc02c493939a94c4ef674 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 12:41:47 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 12/45] Update 14.usfm --- 18-JOB/14.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/18-JOB/14.usfm b/18-JOB/14.usfm index 90a35eaa..f79406fe 100644 --- a/18-JOB/14.usfm +++ b/18-JOB/14.usfm @@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ \q \v 7 There can be hope for a tree; \q if it is cut down, it might sprout again, -\q that its tender branch will not cease. +\q so that its tender branch does not disappear. \q \v 8 Though its root grows old in the earth, \q and its stump dies in the ground, From c49c01dc977b9c72ad56c7c546eb07d5b81c437e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 12:44:02 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 13/45] Update 14.usfm --- 18-JOB/14.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/18-JOB/14.usfm b/18-JOB/14.usfm index f79406fe..9de904f2 100644 --- a/18-JOB/14.usfm +++ b/18-JOB/14.usfm @@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ \q \v 7 There can be hope for a tree; \q if it is cut down, it might sprout again, -\q so that its tender branch does not disappear. +\q so that its tender stalk does not disappear. \q \v 8 Though its root grows old in the earth, \q and its stump dies in the ground, From 91d56871090421e831eac5f0e4a1b5075b5bf4b7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 12:45:58 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 14/45] Update 15.usfm --- 18-JOB/15.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/18-JOB/15.usfm b/18-JOB/15.usfm index 1aafee9f..a4d545cb 100644 --- a/18-JOB/15.usfm +++ b/18-JOB/15.usfm @@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ \q \v 30 He will not depart out of darkness; \f + \ft Several modern versions leave out \fqa He will not depart out of darkness \fqb , because they believe that this expression was mistakenly copied from 15:22. \f* -\q a flame will dry up his branches; +\q a flame will dry up his stalks; \q at the breath of God's mouth he will go away. \s5 From 15a64b417abf48c34f767cfce7aa75f387581b19 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Hanker10 Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 12:56:04 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 15/45] Ezekiel 32:27 change rhetorical question Ezekiel 32:27 change rhetorical question so negative to follow suggestions in the discussion, fit the context meaning better and comply with most translations consulted. --- 26-EZK/32.usfm | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/26-EZK/32.usfm b/26-EZK/32.usfm index 146e3285..46581fb6 100644 --- a/26-EZK/32.usfm +++ b/26-EZK/32.usfm @@ -96,9 +96,9 @@ \v 26 Meshech, Tubal, and all their servants are there! Their graves surround them! \q All of them are uncircumcised, killed by the sword, because they had brought their terrors on the land of the living! \q -\v 27 Do they not lie with the fallen warriors of the uncircumcised who have gone down to sheol -\q with all their weapons of war, and with their swords placed under their heads? -\q Their shields were placed over their bones. For they were the terror of warriors in the land of the living! +\v 27 They do not lie with the fallen warriors of the uncircumcised who have gone down to sheol +\q with all their weapons of war, and with their swords placed under their heads +\q and their shields placed over their bones. For they were the terror of warriors in the land of the living! \s5 \q From 5e46e9c266b92f405d59e7b88b2c20eb6f20b125 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 13:08:44 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 16/45] Psa 71:8 ULB was easily misread. --- 19-PSA/071.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/071.usfm b/19-PSA/071.usfm index 4583e26a..215e135f 100644 --- a/19-PSA/071.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/071.usfm @@ -33,8 +33,8 @@ \s5 \q -\v 8 My mouth will be filled with your praise -\q and with your honor all the day. +\v 8 My mouth will be filled with your praise, +\q all the day with your honor. \q \v 9 Do not throw me away in my time of old age; \q do not abandon me when my strength fails. From 6e7b6c11e6873a45f37f37409015afd0f5464f75 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 13:29:58 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 17/45] Update 15.usfm --- 18-JOB/15.usfm | 1 + 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+) diff --git a/18-JOB/15.usfm b/18-JOB/15.usfm index a4d545cb..81759212 100644 --- a/18-JOB/15.usfm +++ b/18-JOB/15.usfm @@ -118,6 +118,7 @@ \f + \ft Several modern versions leave out \fqa He will not depart out of darkness \fqb , because they believe that this expression was mistakenly copied from 15:22. \f* \q a flame will dry up his stalks; \q at the breath of God's mouth he will go away. +\f + \ft The Hebrew text has \fqa He will go away by the breath of his mouth \fqb , which some modern versions, including the ULB and UDB, interpret as meaning the breath of God's mouth. However, other modern versions follow an ancient Greek reading, \fqa his flower will fall with the wind \fqb . \f* \s5 \q From ffc866778a0974298daf3a3f8cbcbe8fec02d8dc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 14:02:12 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 18/45] Update 17.usfm --- 18-JOB/17.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/18-JOB/17.usfm b/18-JOB/17.usfm index aceba5a0..cad171f3 100644 --- a/18-JOB/17.usfm +++ b/18-JOB/17.usfm @@ -43,8 +43,8 @@ \s5 \q -\v 11 My days are past, my plans are over, -\q even the wishes of my heart. +\v 11 My days are past; my plans are over. +\q As for the wishes of my heart ... \q \v 12 These people, these mockers, change the night into day; \q the light, they say, is near to the darkness. From e95c65e9f89da8672422dd108c1061a8923c34e7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 14:06:56 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 19/45] Update 17.usfm --- 18-JOB/17.usfm | 1 + 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+) diff --git a/18-JOB/17.usfm b/18-JOB/17.usfm index cad171f3..ca399c40 100644 --- a/18-JOB/17.usfm +++ b/18-JOB/17.usfm @@ -45,6 +45,7 @@ \q \v 11 My days are past; my plans are over. \q As for the wishes of my heart ... +\f + \ft Some modern versions have \fqa My days are past, as are my plans. The wishes of my heart are finished \fqb . Others have \fqa My days are past; my plans are over, as are the wishes of my heart \fqb \f* \q \v 12 These people, these mockers, change the night into day; \q the light, they say, is near to the darkness. From 157e1785d121278173ce39860196de0560c2119a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 14:07:55 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 20/45] Update 17.usfm --- 18-JOB/17.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/18-JOB/17.usfm b/18-JOB/17.usfm index ca399c40..2ead4af5 100644 --- a/18-JOB/17.usfm +++ b/18-JOB/17.usfm @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ \q \v 11 My days are past; my plans are over. \q As for the wishes of my heart ... -\f + \ft Some modern versions have \fqa My days are past, as are my plans. The wishes of my heart are finished \fqb . Others have \fqa My days are past; my plans are over, as are the wishes of my heart \fqb \f* +\f + \ft Some modern versions have \fqa My days are past, as are my plans. The wishes of my heart are finished \fqb or \fqa ... the strings of my heart have been broken \fqb . Others have \fqa My days are past; my plans are over, as are the wishes of my heart \fqb \f* \q \v 12 These people, these mockers, change the night into day; \q the light, they say, is near to the darkness. From b919f4badbd867649540387026d34cf063c5268d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 14:08:59 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 21/45] Psa 71:13 Consume has a component of eating that is metaphorical at best here. Destroy is clearer. --- 19-PSA/071.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/071.usfm b/19-PSA/071.usfm index 215e135f..3afe15e9 100644 --- a/19-PSA/071.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/071.usfm @@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ \v 12 God, do not be far from me; \q my God, hurry to help me. \q -\v 13 Let them be put to shame and consumed, those who are hostile to my life; +\v 13 Let them be put to shame and destroyed, those who are hostile to my life; \q let them be covered with rebuke and dishonor, those who seek my hurt. \s5 From 654c271206bd49ef832c1efe881cc8f2099bc770 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 14:21:17 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 22/45] Update 17.usfm --- 18-JOB/17.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/18-JOB/17.usfm b/18-JOB/17.usfm index 2ead4af5..9550bc39 100644 --- a/18-JOB/17.usfm +++ b/18-JOB/17.usfm @@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ \f + \ft Some modern versions have \fqa My days are past, as are my plans. The wishes of my heart are finished \fqb or \fqa ... the strings of my heart have been broken \fqb . Others have \fqa My days are past; my plans are over, as are the wishes of my heart \fqb \f* \q \v 12 These people, these mockers, change the night into day; -\q the light, they say, is near to the darkness. +\q light is near to darkness. \s5 \q From 9d3108bed1fc7afcf1c087cfe75c6888286a6787 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 15:04:49 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 23/45] Update 30.usfm --- 18-JOB/30.usfm | 3 ++- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/18-JOB/30.usfm b/18-JOB/30.usfm index 031b3223..739fc5b1 100644 --- a/18-JOB/30.usfm +++ b/18-JOB/30.usfm @@ -91,7 +91,8 @@ \s5 \q \v 22 You lift me up to the wind and cause it to drive me along; -\q you melt me in the storm. +\q you throw me back and forth in a storm. +\f + \ft Some modern versions have \fqa you dissolve me in a storm \fqb . \f* \q \v 23 For I know that you will bring me to death, \q to the house destined for all living things. From d49aaa92e6a85fbc15d0b00f713b53a6082c8611 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 15:27:28 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 24/45] Update 36.usfm --- 18-JOB/36.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/18-JOB/36.usfm b/18-JOB/36.usfm index 462aa5eb..ecfc3ed4 100644 --- a/18-JOB/36.usfm +++ b/18-JOB/36.usfm @@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ \s5 \q \v 27 For he draws up the drops of water -\q that distill as rain from his vapor, +\q that he distills as rain from his vapor, \q \v 28 which the clouds pour down \q and drop in abundance on mankind. From 8b979fe85967e728c3afa6aaf8cee537f36ce673 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 15:29:53 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 25/45] Psa 7:16 Alternative meanings more easily explained in notes if "more literal" form followed here. --- 19-PSA/071.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/071.usfm b/19-PSA/071.usfm index 3afe15e9..34649942 100644 --- a/19-PSA/071.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/071.usfm @@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ \q and your salvation all the day, \q although I cannot understand it. \q -\v 16 I will go to them with the mighty acts of the Lord Yahweh; +\v 16 I will come with the mighty acts of the Lord Yahweh; \q I will make mention of your righteousness, yours alone. \s5 From 71ac36ff5171c3ea2ac58371edeaf22034fa6ce4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 15:34:15 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 26/45] Update 36.usfm --- 18-JOB/36.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/18-JOB/36.usfm b/18-JOB/36.usfm index ecfc3ed4..09ab7cbc 100644 --- a/18-JOB/36.usfm +++ b/18-JOB/36.usfm @@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ \q and drop in abundance on mankind. \q \v 29 Indeed, can anyone understand the extensive spread of the clouds -\q and the thunder from his tent? +\q and the thunder from his hut? \s5 \q From 3326e8c8d142e4055de904b247ade1cc92f3ae85 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 15:43:25 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 27/45] Update 36.usfm --- 18-JOB/36.usfm | 1 + 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+) diff --git a/18-JOB/36.usfm b/18-JOB/36.usfm index 09ab7cbc..3ab75db7 100644 --- a/18-JOB/36.usfm +++ b/18-JOB/36.usfm @@ -111,6 +111,7 @@ \q \v 27 For he draws up the drops of water \q that he distills as rain from his vapor, +\f + \ft Some modern versions have \fqa that distill as rain from his vapor \fqb . \f* \q \v 28 which the clouds pour down \q and drop in abundance on mankind. From cfb7b832b403494844405a2a5cd9b4ba6c8e3a4f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 15:54:48 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 28/45] Update 42.usfm --- 18-JOB/42.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/18-JOB/42.usfm b/18-JOB/42.usfm index 173c69d1..f3b664a9 100644 --- a/18-JOB/42.usfm +++ b/18-JOB/42.usfm @@ -8,8 +8,8 @@ \v 2 "I know that you can do all things, \q that no purpose of yours can be stopped. \q -\v 3 You asked me, 'Who is this without knowledge who brings darkness to my plans?' -\q Therefore I have spoken things that I did not understand, +\v 3 'Who is this who without knowledge conceals plans?' +\q Indeed, I have spoken things that I did not understand, \q things too difficult for me to understand, which I did not know about. \s5 From 1a96dfdbefb22d7ad132821868b4f6526d59a214 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 16:36:41 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 29/45] Update 38.usfm --- 18-JOB/38.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/18-JOB/38.usfm b/18-JOB/38.usfm index 446f75a2..5478722f 100644 --- a/18-JOB/38.usfm +++ b/18-JOB/38.usfm @@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ \p \v 1 Then Yahweh called to Job out of a fierce storm and said, \q -\v 2 "Who is this who brings darkness to my plans +\v 2 "Who is this who brings darkness to plans \q by means of words without knowledge? \q \v 3 Now gird up your loins like a man From 78588695c0770111bf2b44613846b5e9384ea0c1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Hanker10 Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 16:44:41 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 30/45] Ezekiel 36:31 change wording Ezekiel 36:31 change wording to comply with 6:9 and the recurring phrase "show loathing on your face" which is very close to the Hebrew wording, graphically representing self-hatred and embarrassment. --- 26-EZK/36.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/26-EZK/36.usfm b/26-EZK/36.usfm index 5b1ed426..b98562c6 100644 --- a/26-EZK/36.usfm +++ b/26-EZK/36.usfm @@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ \s5 \v 29 For I will save you from all of your uncleanness. I will summon the grain and multiply it. I will no longer put famine upon you. \v 30 I will multiply the fruit of the tree and the produce of the field so that you will no longer bear the shame of famine among the nations. -\v 31 Then you will think of your wicked ways and your deeds that were not good, and you will hate yourselves because of your own sins and your disgusting deeds. +\v 31 Then you will think of your wicked ways and your deeds that were not good, and you will show loathing on your faces because of your own sins and your disgusting deeds. \s5 \p From 9beee85c3a58a3734f009c012a17a6f7f5547fc4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Hanker10 Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 16:53:50 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 31/45] Ezekiel 36:35 change wording Ezekiel 36:35 change wording to comply with the Hebrew. --- 26-EZK/36.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/26-EZK/36.usfm b/26-EZK/36.usfm index b98562c6..95acb426 100644 --- a/26-EZK/36.usfm +++ b/26-EZK/36.usfm @@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ \v 34 For you will plow the ruined land until it is no longer a ruin before the eyes of all who pass by. \s5 -\v 35 Then they will say, "This land was desolate, but it has become like the garden of Eden; the desolate cities and the uninhabited ruins that were inaccessible are now inhabited." +\v 35 Then they will say, "This land was desolate, but it has become like the garden of Eden; the desolate cities and the uninhabited ruins that were torn down are now fortified and inhabited." \v 36 Then the other nations around you will know that I am Yahweh, that I built up the ruins and replanted the abandoned places. I am Yahweh. I have declared it and I will do it. \s5 From 05bc82096c2bb0be2c69e8c1dd894d18fc9efd6f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Hanker10 Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 17:16:00 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 32/45] Ezekiel 40:7-36 change "niches" to "guard chambers Ezekiel 40:7-36 change "niches" to "guard chambers" for better connotation of a room of that size --- 26-EZK/40.usfm | 16 ++++++++-------- 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/26-EZK/40.usfm b/26-EZK/40.usfm index ccabddd9..1a6241d3 100644 --- a/26-EZK/40.usfm +++ b/26-EZK/40.usfm @@ -13,22 +13,22 @@ \p \v 5 There was a wall surrounding the temple complex, and there was a measuring stick in the man's hand, six cubits in length—each "long" cubit equaling a cubit and a handbreadth. The man measured the width of the wall—one stick—and the height—one stick. \v 6 Then he went to the temple gate that faced east and up its steps. He measured the threshold of the gate—one stick in depth. -\v 7 The guards' niches were each one stick long and one stick wide; there were five cubits between any two of the niches, and the threshold of the temple gate by the temple portico was one stick deep. +\v 7 The guard chambers were each one stick long and one stick wide; there were five cubits between any two of the chambers, and the threshold of the temple gate by the temple portico was one stick deep. \s5 \v 8 He measured the portico of the gate; it was one stick long. \v 9 He measured the portico of the gate; it was one stick deep. And the doorposts were two cubits wide. This was the portico of the gate facing the temple. -\v 10 The guards' niches at the gate were three in number on either side of the gate, and they all measured the same, and the wall separating them all from each other measured the same, also. +\v 10 The guard chambers at the gate were three in number on either side of the gate, and they all measured the same, and the wall separating them all from each other measured the same, also. \s5 \v 11 Then the man measured the width of the gateway entrance—ten cubits; and he measured the length of the gateway entrance—thirteen cubits. -\v 12 He measured the wall that was bordering the front of the niches—one cubit high. And the niches—six cubits on every side. -\v 13 Then he measured the gateway from the roof of one niche to that of the next niche—twenty-five cubits, from the entrance of the first niche to that of the second. +\v 12 He measured the wall that was bordering the front of the chambers—one cubit high. And the chambers—six cubits on every side. +\v 13 Then he measured the gateway from the roof of one chamber to that of the next chamber—twenty-five cubits, from the entrance of the first chamber to that of the second. \s5 -\v 14 Then he measured the wall that went between the guard's niches—sixty cubits long; he measured as far as the gate's portico. +\v 14 Then he measured the wall that went between the guard chambers—sixty cubits long; he measured as far as the gate's portico. \v 15 The entrance from the front of the gate to the other end of the gate's portico was fifty cubits. -\v 16 There were narrow windows in the niches, and in the walls that separated them all around; it was the same for the portico, and all the windows were on the inner side. There were carvings of palm trees on the walls. +\v 16 There were narrow windows in the chambers, and in the walls that separated them all around; it was the same for the portico, and all the windows were on the inner side. There were carvings of palm trees on the walls. \s5 \p @@ -39,10 +39,10 @@ \s5 \p \v 20 Then he measured the length and width of the gate that was at the north of the outer court. -\v 21 There were three niches on either side of that gate, and the gate and its portico measured the same as the main gate—fifty cubits in total length and twenty-five cubits in width. +\v 21 There were three chambers on either side of that gate, and the gate and its portico measured the same as the main gate—fifty cubits in total length and twenty-five cubits in width. \s5 -\v 22 Its windows, portico, niches, and its palm trees corresponded to the gate that faced east. Seven steps went up to it and to its portico. +\v 22 Its windows, portico, chambers, and its palm trees corresponded to the gate that faced east. Seven steps went up to it and to its portico. \v 23 There was a gate to the inner courtyard in front of the gate facing north, just as also there was a gate to the east; the man measured from one gate to the other gate—one hundred cubits in distance. \s5 From e07c13e30c423c1f163d684599d31136c6474ca4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Hanker10 Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 17:17:47 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 33/45] Update 40.usfm --- 26-EZK/40.usfm | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/26-EZK/40.usfm b/26-EZK/40.usfm index 1a6241d3..d35a960b 100644 --- a/26-EZK/40.usfm +++ b/26-EZK/40.usfm @@ -57,20 +57,20 @@ \s5 \p \v 28 Then the man brought me to the inner courtyard by way of its southern gate, which had the same measurements as the other gates. -\v 29 Its niches, walls, and porticos measured the same as the other gates; there were windows all around in the portico. The inner gate and its portico measured fifty cubits long and twenty-five cubits wide. +\v 29 Its chambers, walls, and porticos measured the same as the other gates; there were windows all around in the portico. The inner gate and its portico measured fifty cubits long and twenty-five cubits wide. \v 30 There were also porticos all around the inner wall; these were twenty-five cubits long and five cubits wide. \v 31 This portico faced the outer courtyard with carved palm trees on its walls and eight steps going up to it. \s5 \p \v 32 Then the man brought me to the inner courtyard by the eastern way and measured the gate, which had the same measurements as the other gates. -\v 33 Its niches, walls, and portico measured the same as the other gates, and there were windows all around. The inner gate and its portico measured fifty cubits long and twenty-five cubits wide. +\v 33 Its chambers, walls, and portico measured the same as the other gates, and there were windows all around. The inner gate and its portico measured fifty cubits long and twenty-five cubits wide. \v 34 Its portico faced the outer courtyard; it had palm trees on either side of it and eight steps going up it. \s5 \p \v 35 Next the man brought me to the northern gate and measured it; it measured the same as the other gates. -\v 36 Its niches, walls, and portico measured the same as the other gates, and there were windows all around. The gateway and its portico measured fifty cubits long and twenty-five cubits wide. +\v 36 Its chambers, walls, and portico measured the same as the other gates, and there were windows all around. The gateway and its portico measured fifty cubits long and twenty-five cubits wide. \v 37 Its portico faced the outer courtyard; it had palm trees on either side of it and eight steps going up it. \s5 From c128d4f1b4c341ccf33e28d63f0c1dedeaa199fe Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 17:40:42 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 34/45] Update 018.usfm --- 19-PSA/018.usfm | 3 ++- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/018.usfm b/19-PSA/018.usfm index fdc26af9..e835d3a4 100644 --- a/19-PSA/018.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/018.usfm @@ -48,7 +48,8 @@ the day that Yahweh rescued him from the hand of all his enemies and from the ha \s5 \q -\v 13 Yahweh thundered in the heavens! The Most High shouted and sent hailstones and lightning. +\v 13 Yahweh thundered in the heavens! The Most High shouted: hailstones and lightning. +\f + \ft Many modern versions leave out \fqa hailstones and lightning \fqa, believing this expression to be an accidental repetition from the previous verse. \f* \q \v 14 He shot his arrows and scattered his enemies; many lightning bolts dispersed them. From b67baabac61dd5cd59220bf7289a9719a53c09f7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 17:44:37 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 35/45] Update 018.usfm --- 19-PSA/018.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/018.usfm b/19-PSA/018.usfm index e835d3a4..abbced13 100644 --- a/19-PSA/018.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/018.usfm @@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ the day that Yahweh rescued him from the hand of all his enemies and from the ha \s5 \q -\v 13 Yahweh thundered in the heavens! The Most High shouted: hailstones and lightning. +\v 13 Yahweh thundered in the heavens! The Most High gave forth his voice, hailstones and lightning. \f + \ft Many modern versions leave out \fqa hailstones and lightning \fqa, believing this expression to be an accidental repetition from the previous verse. \f* \q \v 14 He shot his arrows and scattered his enemies; many lightning bolts dispersed them. From 5933bcfe8f5908e46614c6a5285130d7fc5f150c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 18:37:31 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 36/45] Update 060.usfm --- 19-PSA/060.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/060.usfm b/19-PSA/060.usfm index 66960144..715c638c 100644 --- a/19-PSA/060.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/060.usfm @@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ \d For the chief musician; set to Shushan Eduth. A michtam of David, for teaching. When he fought with Aram Naharaim and with Aram Zobah, and Joab returned and killed twelve thousand Edomites in the valley of Salt. \b \q -\v 1 God, you have cast us off; you have broken us down; +\v 1 God, you have cast us off; you have broken through our defenses; \q you have been angry; restore us again. \s5 From 287efea7c284cbe0b94f066e9d17004337bf3a4f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 16:09:28 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 37/45] assorted fixes --- 19-PSA/055.usfm | 12 ++++++------ 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/055.usfm b/19-PSA/055.usfm index 94a923a4..c724fbd5 100644 --- a/19-PSA/055.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/055.usfm @@ -38,8 +38,8 @@ \v 8 I would hurry to a shelter \q from the stormy wind and tempest." \q -\v 9 Destroy them, Lord, and confuse their languages, -\q for I have seen violence and strife in the city. +\v 9 Devour them, Lord, confuse their language! +\q For I have seen violence and strife in the city. \s5 \q @@ -81,11 +81,11 @@ \s5 \q -\v 19 God, he who remains from ancient times, -\q will hear and respond to them. +\v 19 God, the one who ruled from eternity, +\q will hear them and humiliate them. \qs Selah\qs* -\q Those men do not change; -\q they do not fear God. +\q They never change, +\q and they do not fear God. \s5 \q From 5d26d77c84696b94454751b8113d4e740bce76fb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 19:07:08 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 38/45] fix past to present continuous --- 19-PSA/055.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/055.usfm b/19-PSA/055.usfm index c724fbd5..299946ee 100644 --- a/19-PSA/055.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/055.usfm @@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ \s5 \q -\v 19 God, the one who ruled from eternity, +\v 19 God, the one who rules from eternity, \q will hear them and humiliate them. \qs Selah\qs* \q They never change, From 263f16561df62a78f2fa29334ba84bf77044f4f4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Fri, 2 Sep 2016 19:35:28 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 39/45] it and its --- 19-PSA/055.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/055.usfm b/19-PSA/055.usfm index 299946ee..d4f73b20 100644 --- a/19-PSA/055.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/055.usfm @@ -43,8 +43,8 @@ \s5 \q -\v 10 Day and night they go about on her walls; -\q iniquity and mischief are in the middle of her. +\v 10 Day and night they go about on its walls; +\q iniquity and mischief are in the middle of it. \q \v 11 Wickedness is in the middle of it; \q oppression and deceit do not leave its streets. From ad067c24bb1ecf458b9e2bab0dc41e9ac1d6de6c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Sat, 3 Sep 2016 17:37:57 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 40/45] Psa 71:23 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit de-UDB’d --- 19-PSA/071.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/071.usfm b/19-PSA/071.usfm index 34649942..90c83774 100644 --- a/19-PSA/071.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/071.usfm @@ -98,7 +98,7 @@ \s5 \q \v 23 My lips will shout for joy when I sing praises to you— -\q even I whom you have redeemed. +\q even my soul, which you have redeemed. \q \v 24 My tongue will also talk about your righteousness all day long; \q for they have been put to shame and are confused, those who sought my hurt. From a612f8112b4b795b830142c9fe9792efcf9d7cd2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Sat, 3 Sep 2016 18:26:23 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 41/45] Ps 72:15, 17 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Immediate precedent is "the king’s son," who may or may not be "the king." --- 19-PSA/072.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/072.usfm b/19-PSA/072.usfm index 02ddd6c1..a4d68d68 100644 --- a/19-PSA/072.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/072.usfm @@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ \s5 \q -\v 15 May the king live! May the gold of Sheba be given to him. +\v 15 May he live! May the gold of Sheba be given to him. \q May people always pray for him; \q may God bless him all day long. \q @@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ \s5 \q -\v 17 May the king's name endure forever; +\v 17 May his name endure forever; \q may his name continue as long as the sun; \q may people be blessed in him; \q may all nations call him blessed. From a7c23db3872892d47a55aed6e59ee13b28ee7a8a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Sun, 4 Sep 2016 08:51:39 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 42/45] 4:12 rework --- 51-PHP/04.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/51-PHP/04.usfm b/51-PHP/04.usfm index b2e2c8ab..43724ceb 100644 --- a/51-PHP/04.usfm +++ b/51-PHP/04.usfm @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ \p \v 10 I greatly rejoice in the Lord because now at last you have renewed your concern for me. You had indeed been concerned for me before, but there was no opportunity for you to help. \v 11 It is not for my needs that I am saying this. For I have learned to be content in all circumstances. -\v 12 I know how to be needy, and I also know how to have abundance. In every way and in all things I have learned the secret how both to eat plenty and to be hungry, how both to abound and to be needy. +\v 12 I know what it is to be poor and I also know what it is to have plenty. In every way and in all things I have learned the secret of how to be well-fed or to be hungry, and how to have an abundance or to be in need. \v 13 I can do all things through him who strengthens me. \s5 From f41c7864071c2d4f1c7fab81f4b029d4bab01889 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Sun, 4 Sep 2016 08:58:57 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 43/45] edit --- 51-PHP/04.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/51-PHP/04.usfm b/51-PHP/04.usfm index 43724ceb..9bf9180a 100644 --- a/51-PHP/04.usfm +++ b/51-PHP/04.usfm @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ \p \v 10 I greatly rejoice in the Lord because now at last you have renewed your concern for me. You had indeed been concerned for me before, but there was no opportunity for you to help. \v 11 It is not for my needs that I am saying this. For I have learned to be content in all circumstances. -\v 12 I know what it is to be poor and I also know what it is to have plenty. In every way and in all things I have learned the secret of how to be well-fed or to be hungry, and how to have an abundance or to be in need. +\v 12 I know what it is to be poor, and I also know what it is to have plenty. In every way and in all things I have learned the secret of how to be well-fed or to be hungry, and how to have an abundance or to be in need. \v 13 I can do all things through him who strengthens me. \s5 From f49f805ca38c0767e5d1afa3ecee26b91d680d0b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Sun, 4 Sep 2016 09:02:38 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 44/45] Vs 12 --- 51-PHP/04.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/51-PHP/04.usfm b/51-PHP/04.usfm index 9bf9180a..6051953a 100644 --- a/51-PHP/04.usfm +++ b/51-PHP/04.usfm @@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ \s5 \p \v 10 I greatly rejoice in the Lord because now at last you have renewed your concern for me. You had indeed been concerned for me before, but there was no opportunity for you to help. -\v 11 It is not for my needs that I am saying this. For I have learned to be content in all circumstances. +\v 11 I am not saying this because I am in need. For I have learned to be content in all circumstances. \v 12 I know what it is to be poor, and I also know what it is to have plenty. In every way and in all things I have learned the secret of how to be well-fed or to be hungry, and how to have an abundance or to be in need. \v 13 I can do all things through him who strengthens me. From 7ea0abb32a759a856acf1f49668d7fa226a59c79 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Mon, 5 Sep 2016 15:04:23 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 45/45] Psa 72: 16 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit "In the earth on the mountaintops" didn’t make sense. Re-divided to four clauses to match ESV, NIV, NET. --- 19-PSA/072.usfm | 7 ++++--- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/19-PSA/072.usfm b/19-PSA/072.usfm index a4d68d68..4541a500 100644 --- a/19-PSA/072.usfm +++ b/19-PSA/072.usfm @@ -63,9 +63,10 @@ \q May people always pray for him; \q may God bless him all day long. \q -\v 16 May there be abundance of grain in the earth on the mountaintops; -\q may their crops wave in the breeze like the trees of Lebanon, -\q and the people in the cities flourish like grass on the earth. +\v 16 May there be abundance of grain in the land; +\q on the mountaintops may their crops wave; +\q may they be like Lebanon; +\q may the people in the cities flourish like grass on the earth. \s5 \q