reworded to avoid confusion, and replace semicolon with a colon

"those are" sounds like a reference to "the ones sown among the thorns,"
but that is not correct; this is a new category
colon introduces a listing
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\v 18 And others are the ones sown among the thorns. They hear the word, \v 18 And others are the ones sown among the thorns. They hear the word,
\v 19 but the cares of the world, the deceitfulness of riches, and the desires of other things, enter in and choke the word, and it becomes unfruitful. \v 19 but the cares of the world, the deceitfulness of riches, and the desires of other things, enter in and choke the word, and it becomes unfruitful.
\v 20 And those are the ones sown in the good soil. Who hear the word and receive it and produce fruit; some thirty, and some sixty, and some a hundred." \v 20 Then there are those who are the ones sown in the good soil. They hear the word and receive it and produce fruit: some thirty, and some sixty, and some a hundred."
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