From 3bf27705fb5546b188169002375ce1d4faf817fd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Mon, 6 Jun 2016 06:52:28 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 001/150] reworded to avoid confusion, and replace semicolon with a colon "those are" sounds like a reference to "the ones sown among the thorns," but that is not correct; this is a new category colon introduces a listing --- 42-MRK/04.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/04.usfm b/42-MRK/04.usfm index c56de75f..256c8ced 100644 --- a/42-MRK/04.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/04.usfm @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ \s5 \v 18 And others are the ones sown among the thorns. They hear the word, \v 19 but the cares of the world, the deceitfulness of riches, and the desires of other things, enter in and choke the word, and it becomes unfruitful. -\v 20 And those are the ones sown in the good soil. Who hear the word and receive it and produce fruit; some thirty, and some sixty, and some a hundred." +\v 20 Then there are those who are the ones sown in the good soil. They hear the word and receive it and produce fruit: some thirty, and some sixty, and some a hundred." \s5 \p From 250337a553d36ff6988cddf34a2bc61f4f5a7021 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Mon, 6 Jun 2016 07:27:17 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 002/150] colon introduces a list --- 42-MRK/04.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/04.usfm b/42-MRK/04.usfm index 256c8ced..fc204220 100644 --- a/42-MRK/04.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/04.usfm @@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ \p \v 26 And he said, "The kingdom of God is like a man who sows his seed on the ground. \v 27 He sleeps at night and gets up by day, and the seed sprouts and grows, though he does not know how. -\v 28 The earth bears grain by itself; first the blade, then the ear, then the mature grain in the ear. +\v 28 The earth bears grain by itself: first the blade, then the ear, then the mature grain in the ear. \v 29 And when the grain is ripe he immediately sends out the sickle, because the harvest has come." \s5 From 3e928d608db3167f33f1b6dda45590b8c3fcf068 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Mon, 6 Jun 2016 09:00:42 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 003/150] " --- 42-MRK/08.usfm | 7 +------ 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/08.usfm b/42-MRK/08.usfm index 38e7ab6a..a18cf82f 100644 --- a/42-MRK/08.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/08.usfm @@ -1,5 +1,3 @@ - - \s5 \c 8 \p @@ -54,7 +52,7 @@ \s5 \p \v 27 Jesus went out with his disciples into the villages of Caesarea Philippi. On the way he asked his disciples, "Who do the people say that I am?" -\v 28 They answered him and said, "John the Baptist. Others say, 'Elijah,' and others, 'One of the prophets.' +\v 28 They answered him and said, "John the Baptist. Others say, 'Elijah,' and others, 'One of the prophets.'" \s5 \v 29 He asked them, "But who do you say that I am?" Peter said to him, "You are the Christ." @@ -76,6 +74,3 @@ \s5 \v 38 Whoever is ashamed of me and my words in this adulterous and sinful generation, the Son of Man will be ashamed of him when he comes in the glory of his Father with the holy angels." - - - From fae0966320e0b6b08a2d0ed9ea70d80efa83027f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Mon, 6 Jun 2016 11:33:58 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 004/150] Update 03.usfm --- 10-2SA/03.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/10-2SA/03.usfm b/10-2SA/03.usfm index 4b0a994c..6a90fce2 100644 --- a/10-2SA/03.usfm +++ b/10-2SA/03.usfm @@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ \s5 \p \v 6 It came about during the war between the house of Saul and the house of David that Abner made himself strong in the house of Saul. -\v 7 Saul had a concubine whose name was Rizpah, the daughter of Aiah. Ishbosheth said to Abner, "Why have you had slept with my father's concubine?" +\v 7 Saul had a concubine whose name was Rizpah, the daughter of Aiah. Ishbosheth said to Abner, "Why have you slept with my father's concubine?" \s5 \v 8 Then Abner was very angry at the words of Ishbosheth and said, "Am I a dog's head that belongs to Judah? Today I am showing faithfulness to the house of Saul, your father, to his brothers, and to his friends, by not handing you over into the hand of David. And yet you accuse me about this woman today? From 13c525f406195aebf8dfa21fbdc56eff067dd381 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Mon, 6 Jun 2016 11:41:30 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 005/150] Update 02.usfm --- 55-1TI/02.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/55-1TI/02.usfm b/55-1TI/02.usfm index 00e7f0f8..b8e78434 100644 --- a/55-1TI/02.usfm +++ b/55-1TI/02.usfm @@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ \s5 \v 5 For there is one God, and there is one mediator for God and man, the man Christ Jesus. \v 6 He gave himself as a ransom for all, as the testimony at the right time. -\v 7 For this purpose, I, myself, was made a herald and an apostle. I speak truth. I do not lie. I am a teacher of the Gentiles in faith and truth. +\v 7 For this purpose, I, myself, was made a herald and an apostle. I am telling the truth. I am not lying. I am a teacher of the Gentiles in faith and truth. \s5 \p From 138b8a958f7dbb66e5bdacf976db13cb5eb1825a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Mon, 6 Jun 2016 12:08:17 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 006/150] Update 03.usfm --- 55-1TI/03.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/55-1TI/03.usfm b/55-1TI/03.usfm index 7c626cee..6918e33f 100644 --- a/55-1TI/03.usfm +++ b/55-1TI/03.usfm @@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ \s5 \v 8 Deacons, likewise, should be dignified, not double-talkers. They should not drink too much wine or be greedy. \v 9 They should keep the revealed truth of the faith with a clean conscience. -\v 10 They should also be approved first, then they should serve because they are above reproach. +\v 10 They should also be approved first, then they should serve because they are blameless. \s5 \v 11 Women in the same way should be dignified. They should not be slanderers. They should be moderate and faithful in all things. From a030e2f1944963ec650c50e6b37b846a2474ac1c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Mon, 6 Jun 2016 12:17:06 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 007/150] Update 04.usfm --- 55-1TI/04.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/55-1TI/04.usfm b/55-1TI/04.usfm index f0231f3e..a75ddbd7 100644 --- a/55-1TI/04.usfm +++ b/55-1TI/04.usfm @@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ \s5 \v 11 Proclaim and teach these things. -\v 12 Let no one despise your youth. Instead, set an example for those who believe, in speech, conduct, love, faithfulness, and purity. +\v 12 Let no one despise your youth. Instead, be an example for those who believe, in speech, conduct, love, faithfulness, and purity. \v 13 Until I come, attend to the reading, to the exhortation, and to the teaching. \s5 From e66a443ef1c360eb71516a1e0c1d16a44b1a671c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Mon, 6 Jun 2016 12:21:12 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 008/150] V6 rewrite --- 42-MRK/08.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/08.usfm b/42-MRK/08.usfm index a18cf82f..fcfbc68b 100644 --- a/42-MRK/08.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/08.usfm @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ \s5 \v 5 He asked them, "How many loaves do you have?" They said, "Seven." -\v 6 He commanded the crowd to sit down on the ground. He took the seven loaves, and after he gave thanks, he broke the loaves and gave them to his disciples to serve. So they served the crowd. +\v 6 He commanded the crowd to sit down on the ground. He took the seven loaves, gave thanks, and broke them. He gave them to his disciples to set before them, and they set them before the crowd. \s5 \v 7 They also had a few small fish, and after he gave thanks for them, he commanded the disciples to serve these as well. From 072056a02c0ca58ef562dabd1dc1c153c6ca71b9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Mon, 6 Jun 2016 12:30:35 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 009/150] V8,9 rewrite --- 42-MRK/08.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/08.usfm b/42-MRK/08.usfm index fcfbc68b..770104ee 100644 --- a/42-MRK/08.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/08.usfm @@ -12,8 +12,8 @@ \s5 \v 7 They also had a few small fish, and after he gave thanks for them, he commanded the disciples to serve these as well. -\v 8 They ate and were satisfied. And they gathered up the food that remained over from the broken pieces, seven baskets full. -\v 9 They were about four thousand men there. Jesus sent them away. +\v 8 They ate and were satisfied. And they picked up the remaining broken pieces; seven large baskets. +\v 9 There were about four thousand people. And he sent them away. \v 10 Immediately he got into the boat with his disciples, and they went into the region of Dalmanutha. \s5 From 2321082837cc29abed75c675b18401f2e1b8a318 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Mon, 6 Jun 2016 12:51:37 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 010/150] V13 rewrite --- 42-MRK/08.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/08.usfm b/42-MRK/08.usfm index 770104ee..0679aa80 100644 --- a/42-MRK/08.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/08.usfm @@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ \p \v 11 Then the Pharisees came out and began to argue with him. They sought from him a sign from heaven, to test him. \v 12 He sighed deeply in his spirit and said, "Why does this generation seek for a sign? Truly I say to you, no sign will be given to this generation." -\v 13 Then he left them, entered again into the boat, and departed to the other side of the lake. +\v 13 Then he left them, got into a boat again, and went away to the other side. \s5 \p From 54f83ba54255a44ff823c5eebc712631724e3691 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Mon, 6 Jun 2016 13:42:23 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 011/150] V24, 31, 34 rewrite --- 42-MRK/08.usfm | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/08.usfm b/42-MRK/08.usfm index 0679aa80..1142c50d 100644 --- a/42-MRK/08.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/08.usfm @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ \v 23 Jesus took hold of the blind man by the hand, and led him out of the village. When he had spat on his eyes and laid his hands upon him, he asked him, "Do you see anything?" \s5 -\v 24 He looked up, and said, "I see men. But they look like walking trees." +\v 24 He looked up, and said, "I see men who look like walking trees." \v 25 Then he again laid his hands upon his eyes, and the man opened his eyes, his sight was restored, and he saw all things clearly. \v 26 Jesus sent him away to his home and said, "Do not enter the town." @@ -60,12 +60,12 @@ \s5 \p -\v 31 He began to teach them that the Son of Man must suffer many things, be rejected by the elders and the chief priests and the scribes, be killed, and be raised back to life after three days. +\v 31 And he began to teach them that the Son of Man must suffer many things, and would be rejected by the elders and the chief priests and the scribes, and would be killed, and after three days rise up. \v 32 He said this clearly. Then Peter took him aside and began to rebuke him. \s5 \v 33 But Jesus turned and looked at his disciples and then he rebuked Peter and said, "Get behind me Satan! You do not care for the things of God, but for the things of people." -\v 34 Then he called the crowd and his disciples together, and he said, "If anyone wants to follow me, he must deny himself, take up his cross, and follow me. +\v 34 Then he called the crowd and his disciples together, and he said to them, "If anyone wants to follow me, he must deny himself, take up his cross, and follow me. \s5 \v 35 For whoever wants to save his life will lose it, and whoever loses his life for my sake and for the gospel, will save it. From 375553047148b4447160e3edf373039809b8354d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Mon, 6 Jun 2016 15:02:01 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 012/150] V1, 2 rewrite --- 42-MRK/09.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/09.usfm b/42-MRK/09.usfm index 33a83bd0..0ec47279 100644 --- a/42-MRK/09.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/09.usfm @@ -2,8 +2,8 @@ \s5 \c 9 \p -\v 1 Jesus said to them, "Truly I say to you, there are some of you who are standing here who will not taste death before they see the kingdom of God come with power." -\v 2 Six days later, Jesus took with him Peter, James, and John and brought them up a high mountain by themselves. Then he was transfigured before them. +\v 1 And he said to them, "Truly I say to you, there are some of you who are standing here who will not taste death before they see the kingdom of God come with power." +\v 2 And six days later, Jesus took Peter and James and John with him up a high mountain, alone by themselves. Then he was transfigured before them. \v 3 His garments became radiantly brilliant, extremely white, whiter than any bleacher on earth could bleach them. \s5 From e1079992368dbf65853757f9bf0af90b41286a0d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Mon, 6 Jun 2016 15:02:27 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 013/150] Update 09.usfm --- 42-MRK/09.usfm | 4 ---- 1 file changed, 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/09.usfm b/42-MRK/09.usfm index 0ec47279..2990578e 100644 --- a/42-MRK/09.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/09.usfm @@ -1,4 +1,3 @@ - \s5 \c 9 \p @@ -94,6 +93,3 @@ \s5 \v 49 For everyone will be salted with fire. \v 50 Salt is good, but if the salt has lost its saltiness, how can you make it salty again? Have salt among yourselves, and be at peace with one another." - - - From 7ba3ad26061a5af75aed09ae96de70d50fd81c96 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Mon, 6 Jun 2016 15:28:48 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 014/150] V3, 4 rewrite --- 49-GAL/01.usfm | 5 ++--- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/49-GAL/01.usfm b/49-GAL/01.usfm index de1baee2..9c78f089 100644 --- a/49-GAL/01.usfm +++ b/49-GAL/01.usfm @@ -1,4 +1,3 @@ - \s5 \c 1 \p @@ -6,8 +5,8 @@ \v 2 With all the brothers with me, I am writing to the churches of Galatia. \s5 -\v 3 May grace be to you and peace from God our Father and the Lord Jesus Christ. -\v 4 For he gave himself for our sins so that he might deliver us from this present evil age, according to the will of our God and Father. +\v 3 Grace to you and peace from God our Father and the Lord Jesus Christ, +\v 4 who gave himself for our sins so that he might deliver us from this present evil age, according to the will of our God and Father. \v 5 To him be the glory for ever and ever. \b From 8717a452e4d7b56e74c43f26e9d46ae7c0848f5a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: lrsallee Date: Mon, 6 Jun 2016 15:31:21 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 015/150] Heb 12:6 ULB - removed mid-sentence double space --- 59-HEB/12.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/59-HEB/12.usfm b/59-HEB/12.usfm index dd29c59f..05043bcf 100644 --- a/59-HEB/12.usfm +++ b/59-HEB/12.usfm @@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ point of losing blood. \q "My son, do not lightly regard the discipline of the Lord, \q nor lose heart when you are corrected by him." \q -\v 6 For the Lord disciplines anyone whom he loves, +\v 6 For the Lord disciplines anyone whom he loves, \q and he punishes every son whom he receives. \s5 From dabacf487ce90e9e4e775731dee90dbf8e526d98 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Mon, 6 Jun 2016 15:31:54 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 016/150] V16-17 one sentence --- 49-GAL/01.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/49-GAL/01.usfm b/49-GAL/01.usfm index 9c78f089..84e2d8fa 100644 --- a/49-GAL/01.usfm +++ b/49-GAL/01.usfm @@ -31,8 +31,8 @@ \s5 \v 15 But God was pleased to choose me from my mother's womb. He called me through his grace -\v 16 to reveal his Son in me, so that I would proclaim him among the Gentiles. I did not immediately consult with flesh and blood. -\v 17 And I did not go up to Jerusalem to those who had become apostles before me. Instead I went to Arabia and then returned to Damascus. +\v 16 to reveal his Son in me, so that I would proclaim him among the Gentiles. I did not immediately consult with flesh and blood +\v 17 and I did not go up to Jerusalem to those who had become apostles before me. Instead I went to Arabia and then returned to Damascus. \s5 \p From 6374011888d1e30d60fcd94426365e4db39336d8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Mon, 6 Jun 2016 15:05:28 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 017/150] comma to set off a descriptive phrase --- 42-MRK/05.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/05.usfm b/42-MRK/05.usfm index 4e1513af..fea29cfd 100644 --- a/42-MRK/05.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/05.usfm @@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ \s5 \v 36 But when Jesus overheard what they said, he said to the leader of the synagogue, "Do not be afraid. Just believe." \v 37 He did not permit anyone to accompany him, except Peter, James, and John, the brother of James. -\v 38 They came to the house of the leader of the synagogue and he saw a commotion; a lot of weeping and wailing. +\v 38 They came to the house of the leader of the synagogue and he saw a commotion, a lot of weeping and wailing. \s5 \v 39 When he entered the house, he said to them, "Why are you upset and why do you weep? The child is not dead but sleeps." From e59ab1c4ec037d968f1a3c03f2bdc8f97398b8ce Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Mon, 6 Jun 2016 16:11:19 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 018/150] Update 01.usfm --- 56-2TI/01.usfm | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/56-2TI/01.usfm b/56-2TI/01.usfm index 171c9ad6..8e8f13bf 100644 --- a/56-2TI/01.usfm +++ b/56-2TI/01.usfm @@ -13,23 +13,23 @@ \v 5 I have been reminded of your genuine faith, which lived first in your grandmother Lois and your mother Eunice. And I am convinced that it lives in you also. \s5 -\v 6 This is the reason I remind you to rekindle the gift of God in you through the laying on of my hands. +\v 6 This is the reason I am reminding you to rekindle the gift of God in you through the laying on of my hands. \v 7 For God did not give us a spirit of fear, but of power and love and discipline. \s5 -\v 8 Then do not be ashamed of the testimony about our Lord, nor of me, Paul, his prisoner. Instead, share in suffering for the gospel according to the power of God. +\v 8 So do not be ashamed of the testimony about our Lord, nor of me, Paul, his prisoner. Instead, share in suffering for the gospel according to the power of God. \v 9 It is God saved us and called us with a holy calling. He did this, not according to our works, but according to his own plan and grace. He gave us these things in Christ Jesus before times ever began. \v 10 But now God's salvation has been revealed by the appearing of our Savior Christ Jesus. It is Christ who put an end to death and brought life that never ends to light through the gospel. \v 11 Because of this, I was appointed a preacher, an apostle, and a teacher. \s5 -\v 12 For this cause I also suffer these things, but I am not ashamed. For I know him whom I have believed. I am persuaded that he is able to keep that which I have entrusted to him until that day. +\v 12 For this cause I also suffer these things. But I am not ashamed, for I know him whom I have believed. I am persuaded that he is able to keep that which I have entrusted to him until that day. \v 13 Keep the example of faithful messages that you heard from me, with the faith and love that are in Christ Jesus. \v 14 The good thing that God committed to you, guard it through the Holy Spirit, who lives in us. \s5 \p -\v 15 This you know, that all who live in Asia turned away from me. In this group are Phygelus and Hermogenes. +\v 15 You know this, that all who live in Asia turned away from me. In this group are Phygelus and Hermogenes. \v 16 May the Lord grant mercy to the household of Onesiphorus, for he often refreshed me and was not ashamed of my chain. \v 17 Instead, when he was in Rome, he sought me diligently, and he found me. \v 18 May the Lord grant to him to find mercy from him on that day. And all the ways he helped me in Ephesus, you know very well. From d633c3bbdc5b576129795abd0192452cae25a214 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Mon, 6 Jun 2016 16:20:16 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 019/150] Update 02.usfm --- 56-2TI/02.usfm | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/56-2TI/02.usfm b/56-2TI/02.usfm index aa87d2a5..120bb605 100644 --- a/56-2TI/02.usfm +++ b/56-2TI/02.usfm @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ \c 2 \p \v 1 You therefore, my child, be strengthened in the grace that is in Christ Jesus. -\v 2 And the things you heard from me among many witnesses, entrust to faithful people who will be able to teach others also. +\v 2 And the things you heard from me among many witnesses, entrust them to faithful people who will be able to teach others also. \s5 \v 3 Suffer hardship with me, as a good soldier of Christ Jesus. @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ \v 5 Also, if someone competes as an athlete, he is not crowned unless he competes by the rules. \s5 -\v 6 The hardworking farmer must receive his share of the crops first. +\v 6 It is necessary that the hardworking farmer receive his share of the crops first. \v 7 Think about what I am saying, for the Lord will give you understanding in everything. \s5 @@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ for he cannot deny himself." \s5 \p \v 14 Keep reminding them of these things. Warn them before God not to quarrel about words. Because of this there is nothing useful. Because of this there is destruction for those who listen. -\v 15 Do your best to present yourself approved to God as a workman without shame. Correctly handle the word of truth. +\v 15 Do your best to present yourself approved to God as a workman without shame. Handle the word of truth correctly. \s5 \v 16 Avoid profane talk, which leads to more and more godlessness. From 028859120ec7d0b00f962b083e536a792bee959d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Mon, 6 Jun 2016 16:29:44 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 020/150] Update 02.usfm --- 56-2TI/02.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/56-2TI/02.usfm b/56-2TI/02.usfm index 120bb605..429cb960 100644 --- a/56-2TI/02.usfm +++ b/56-2TI/02.usfm @@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ for he cannot deny himself." \s5 \v 16 Avoid profane talk, which leads to more and more godlessness. -\v 17 Their word will spread like gangrene, among whom are Hymenaeus and Philetus. +\v 17 Their talk will spread like gangrene. Among whom are Hymenaeus and Philetus. \v 18 These are men who have missed the truth. They say that the resurrection has already happened. They overturn the faith of some. \s5 From aecb1a9fe3f2c49c550fd0357dde3e4d12391bab Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Mon, 6 Jun 2016 16:35:35 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 021/150] Update 03.usfm --- 56-2TI/03.usfm | 12 ++++++------ 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/56-2TI/03.usfm b/56-2TI/03.usfm index a0215121..f5b818b5 100644 --- a/56-2TI/03.usfm +++ b/56-2TI/03.usfm @@ -4,22 +4,22 @@ \c 3 \p \v 1 But know this: in the last days there will be difficult times. -\v 2 For people will be lovers of themselves, lovers of money, boastful, haughty, blasphemers, disobedient to parents, unthankful, unholy, -\v 3 without natural affection, implacable, slanderers, without self-control, violent, not lovers of good, -\v 4 betrayers, headstrong, conceited, lovers of pleasure rather than lovers of God. +\v 2 For people will be lovers of themselves, lovers of money, boastful, haughty, blasphemers, disobedient to parents, unthankful, and unholy. +\v 3 They will be without natural affection, implacable, slanderers, without self-control, violent, not lovers of good. +\v 4 The will be betrayers, headstrong, conceited, lovers of pleasure rather than lovers of God. \s5 \v 5 They will have an appearance of godliness, but they will deny its power. Turn away from these people. \v 6 For some of them are men who enter into households and captivate foolish women. These are women who are heaped up with sins and are led away by various desires. -\v 7 These women are always learning new things. But they are never able to come to the knowledge of the truth. +\v 7 These women are always learning, but they are never able to come to the knowledge of the truth. \s5 -\v 8 In the same way that Jannes and Jambres stood against Moses, so these false teachers also stand against the truth. They are men destroyed in mind, unapproved regarding the faith. +\v 8 In the same way that Jannes and Jambres stood against Moses. In this way these false teachers also stand against the truth. They are men destroyed in mind, unapproved regarding the faith. \v 9 But they will not advance very far. For their foolishness will be obvious to all, just like that of those men. \s5 \v 10 But as for you, you have followed my teaching, conduct, purpose, faith, longsuffering, love, patience, -\v 11 persecutions, sufferings, and what happened to me at Antioch, at Iconium, and at Lystra. I endured such persecutions. Out of them all, the Lord rescued me. +\v 11 persecutions, sufferings, and what happened to me at Antioch, at Iconium, and at Lystra. I endured persecutions. Out of them all, the Lord rescued me. \v 12 All those who want to live in a godly manner in Christ Jesus will be persecuted. \v 13 Evil people and impostors will go to even worse. They will lead others astray. They themselves are being led astray. From 370d0413e1ccfeecb837e76d1e0140233d535ba8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Mon, 6 Jun 2016 16:43:23 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 022/150] V22-23 bridge --- 49-GAL/01.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/49-GAL/01.usfm b/49-GAL/01.usfm index 84e2d8fa..9198b165 100644 --- a/49-GAL/01.usfm +++ b/49-GAL/01.usfm @@ -42,6 +42,6 @@ \s5 \v 21 Then I went to the regions of Syria and Cilicia. -\v 22 I was still not known by sight to the churches of Judea that were in Christ. -\v 23 But they were only hearing, "He who once was persecuting us now proclaims the faith that he had been destroying." +\v 22 I was still not known by sight to the churches of Judea that were in Christ, +\v 23 but they were only hearing, "He who once was persecuting us now proclaims the faith that he had been destroying." \v 24 They were glorifying God because of me. From d0f9fa7395cd8329134ce360e1422cd5b28c949d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Mon, 6 Jun 2016 16:55:48 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 023/150] V21 comma --- 49-GAL/02.usfm | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/49-GAL/02.usfm b/49-GAL/02.usfm index 50098a16..b1158b18 100644 --- a/49-GAL/02.usfm +++ b/49-GAL/02.usfm @@ -1,4 +1,3 @@ - \s5 \c 2 \p @@ -39,4 +38,4 @@ \s5 \v 20 I have been crucified with Christ. It is no longer I who live, but Christ lives in me. The life I now live in the flesh I live by faith in the Son of God, who loved me and gave himself for me. -\v 21 I do not negate the grace of God. For if righteousness existed through the law, then Christ would have died for nothing. +\v 21 I do not negate the grace of God, for if righteousness existed through the law, then Christ would have died for nothing. From 91212e7620cfb3347f6ce0e33c20f9b0c0c77c68 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: lrsallee Date: Mon, 6 Jun 2016 17:07:15 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 024/150] Luk 12:19 ULB - added missing space "for many years.Rest was" --- 43-LUK/12.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/43-LUK/12.usfm b/43-LUK/12.usfm index 7625c928..2ba1ea9f 100644 --- a/43-LUK/12.usfm +++ b/43-LUK/12.usfm @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ \v 16 Then Jesus told them a parable, saying, "The field of a rich man yielded abundantly, \v 17 and he reasoned with himself, saying, 'What will I do, because I do not have a place to store my crops?' \v 18 He said, 'This is what I will do. I will pull down my barns and build bigger ones, and there I will store all of my grain and other goods. -\v 19 I will say to my soul, "Soul, you have many goods stored up for many years.Rest easy, eat, drink, be merry."' +\v 19 I will say to my soul, "Soul, you have many goods stored up for many years. Rest easy, eat, drink, be merry."' \s5 \v 20 But God said to him, 'Foolish man, tonight your soul is required of you, and the things you have prepared, whose will they be?' From 1b4bdfae76357edcf319774905c0d0ab2de8db72 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Mon, 6 Jun 2016 17:10:04 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 025/150] V18 update --- 49-GAL/03.usfm | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/49-GAL/03.usfm b/49-GAL/03.usfm index 1931b7e2..bbd75248 100644 --- a/49-GAL/03.usfm +++ b/49-GAL/03.usfm @@ -1,4 +1,3 @@ - \s5 \c 3 \p @@ -32,7 +31,7 @@ \s5 \v 17 Now I say this. The law, which came 430 years later, does not void the covenant previously established by God. -\v 18 For if the inheritance had come by means of the law, it would no longer have come by means of the promise. But God freely gave the inheritance to Abraham through a promise. +\v 18 For if the inheritance had come by means of the law, then it would no longer have come by means of the promise. But God freely gave it to Abraham through a promise. \s5 \v 19 Why then was the law given? It was added because of transgressions, until the descendant of Abraham would come to those to whom he had been promised. The law was put into force through angels by the hand of a mediator. From b470ebdc62ea4e65c1ff6c95a031db6ca8b4649c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Mon, 6 Jun 2016 17:11:51 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 026/150] Update 02.usfm --- 56-2TI/02.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/56-2TI/02.usfm b/56-2TI/02.usfm index 429cb960..61016996 100644 --- a/56-2TI/02.usfm +++ b/56-2TI/02.usfm @@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ \s5 \v 8 Remember Jesus Christ, from David's seed, who was raised from the dead. This is according to my gospel message, -\v 9 by which I suffer to the point of being chained as a criminal. But the word of God is not chained. +\v 9 for which I am suffering to the point of being chained as a criminal. But the word of God is not chained. \v 10 Therefore I endure all things for those who are chosen, so that they also may obtain the salvation that is in Christ Jesus, with eternal glory. \s5 From e2c385d600c037cedeaaf998bf9b42b1095ed591 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Mon, 6 Jun 2016 17:31:08 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 027/150] Update 03.usfm --- 49-GAL/03.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/49-GAL/03.usfm b/49-GAL/03.usfm index bbd75248..4479c81e 100644 --- a/49-GAL/03.usfm +++ b/49-GAL/03.usfm @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ \v 20 Now a mediator implies more than one person, yet God is only one. \s5 -\v 21 So is the law against the promises of God? Absolutely not! For if a law had been given that was able to give life, righteousness would certainly have come by that law. +\v 21 So is the law against the promises of God? Absolutely not! For if a law had been given that was able to give life, then righteousness would certainly have come by that law. \v 22 But instead, scripture imprisoned all things under sin. God did this so that his promise to save us by faith in Jesus Christ might be given to those who believe. \s5 From 8e7a8de0c025e80128a44dfff5e6be5dfdaa676f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Mon, 6 Jun 2016 17:35:12 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 028/150] V5, 6 rewrite --- 42-MRK/09.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/09.usfm b/42-MRK/09.usfm index 2990578e..98095efe 100644 --- a/42-MRK/09.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/09.usfm @@ -7,8 +7,8 @@ \s5 \v 4 Then Elijah with Moses appeared to them, and they were talking with Jesus. -\v 5 Peter answered and said to Jesus, "Rabbi, it is good for us to be here and we should make three shelters. Let us make one for you, one for Moses, and one for Elijah." -\v 6 (For Peter did not know what to say. The disciples were all terrified.) +\v 5 Peter answered and said to Jesus, "Rabbi, it is good for us to be here and so let us make three shelters; one for you, one for Moses, and one for Elijah." +\v 6 (For he did not now what to say, for they were terrified.) \s5 \v 7 A cloud came and overshadowed them. Then a voice came out of the cloud, "This is my beloved Son. Listen to him." From 4c9b872d75def1e6484b17958cc32f53e2f1dc5a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Mon, 6 Jun 2016 18:15:33 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 029/150] Update 02.usfm --- 56-2TI/02.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/56-2TI/02.usfm b/56-2TI/02.usfm index 61016996..d7e1c261 100644 --- a/56-2TI/02.usfm +++ b/56-2TI/02.usfm @@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ for he cannot deny himself." \s5 \v 24 The Lord's servant must not quarrel. Instead he must be gentle toward all, able to teach, and patient. \v 25 He must in meekness educate those who oppose him. God may perhaps give them repentance for the knowledge of the truth. -\v 26 They may regain their senses out of the trap of the devil, after they have been captured by him for his will. +\v 26 They may become sober again and leave the devil's trap, after they have been captured by him for his will. From eb545802505408d66663e2e9756a9b68977ece30 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Mon, 6 Jun 2016 18:24:33 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 030/150] Update 03.usfm --- 56-2TI/03.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/56-2TI/03.usfm b/56-2TI/03.usfm index f5b818b5..d2c9ece3 100644 --- a/56-2TI/03.usfm +++ b/56-2TI/03.usfm @@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ \v 4 The will be betrayers, headstrong, conceited, lovers of pleasure rather than lovers of God. \s5 -\v 5 They will have an appearance of godliness, but they will deny its power. Turn away from these people. +\v 5 They will have a shape of godliness, but they will deny its power. Turn away from these people. \v 6 For some of them are men who enter into households and captivate foolish women. These are women who are heaped up with sins and are led away by various desires. \v 7 These women are always learning, but they are never able to come to the knowledge of the truth. From d5dce79faccd09705ea632c51e04735d33df4369 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Mon, 6 Jun 2016 20:35:14 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 031/150] colon before a listing --- 42-MRK/06.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/06.usfm b/42-MRK/06.usfm index df50bce1..4f7599f1 100644 --- a/42-MRK/06.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/06.usfm @@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ \s5 \p \v 7 And he called the Twelve and began to send them out, two by two, and he gave them authority over the unclean spirits, -\v 8 and he instructed them to take nothing for their journey, except for only a staff; no bread, no bag, and no money in their belt, +\v 8 and he instructed them to take nothing for their journey, except for only a staff: no bread, no bag, and no money in their belt, \v 9 but to wear sandals, and not to wear two tunics. \s5 From 9a2404e2af619e7b481a54770a1acf14ebd918bb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Tue, 7 Jun 2016 05:13:37 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 032/150] comma removed --- 42-MRK/07.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/07.usfm b/42-MRK/07.usfm index a3e5f005..b3a717ba 100644 --- a/42-MRK/07.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/07.usfm @@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ \s5 \v 8 You abandon the commandment of God and hold fast to the tradition of men." \v 9 And he said to them, "You conveniently reject the commandment of God so you may keep your tradition! -\v 10 For Moses said, 'Honor your father and your mother,' and, 'He who speaks evil of his father or mother, will surely die.' +\v 10 For Moses said, 'Honor your father and your mother,' and, 'He who speaks evil of his father or mother will surely die.' \s5 \v 11 But you say, 'If a man says to his father or mother, "Whatever help you would have received from me is Corban,"' (that is to say, 'Given to God')— From 90b2de19ef69fb86f1fb05305a733f24a1caff7f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Tue, 7 Jun 2016 07:42:11 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 033/150] connecting word edit for smoothness of reading --- 42-MRK/07.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/07.usfm b/42-MRK/07.usfm index b3a717ba..093c6b3a 100644 --- a/42-MRK/07.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/07.usfm @@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ \s5 \p -\v 31 And he went out again from the region of Tyre, went through Sidon to the Sea of Galilee up into the region of the Decapolis. +\v 31 Then he went out again from the region of Tyre, and went through Sidon to the Sea of Galilee up into the region of the Decapolis. \v 32 And they brought to him someone who was deaf and had difficulty speaking, and they begged him to lay his hand on him. \s5 From a30de62a0c740f79629a53b639844611e465a301 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Tue, 7 Jun 2016 09:07:04 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 034/150] Back to descendants --- 45-ACT/02.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/45-ACT/02.usfm b/45-ACT/02.usfm index e730ff69..7c9509cb 100644 --- a/45-ACT/02.usfm +++ b/45-ACT/02.usfm @@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ \s5 \v 29 Brothers, I can speak to you confidently about the patriarch David: he both died and was buried, and his tomb is with us to this day. -\v 30 Therefore, he was a prophet and knew that God had sworn with an oath to him, that he would set one of the fruit of his genitals upon his throne. +\v 30 Therefore, he was a prophet and knew that God had sworn with an oath to him, that he would set one of his descendants upon his throne. \v 31 He foresaw this and spoke about the resurrection of the Christ, \q 'He was neither abandoned to hades, nor did his flesh see decay.' \m From 949d36d68c31d8453a25cfc028012c3c8ab066f0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Tue, 7 Jun 2016 08:11:54 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 035/150] comma for semicolon --- 42-MRK/08.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/08.usfm b/42-MRK/08.usfm index 1142c50d..51c7907b 100644 --- a/42-MRK/08.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/08.usfm @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ \s5 \v 7 They also had a few small fish, and after he gave thanks for them, he commanded the disciples to serve these as well. -\v 8 They ate and were satisfied. And they picked up the remaining broken pieces; seven large baskets. +\v 8 They ate and were satisfied. And they picked up the remaining broken pieces, seven large baskets. \v 9 There were about four thousand people. And he sent them away. \v 10 Immediately he got into the boat with his disciples, and they went into the region of Dalmanutha. From 992bca33614a5805db6e388cc971a298e7bb02ba Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Tue, 7 Jun 2016 09:24:34 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 036/150] deleted then V18, 21 --- 49-GAL/03.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/49-GAL/03.usfm b/49-GAL/03.usfm index 4479c81e..50e91c03 100644 --- a/49-GAL/03.usfm +++ b/49-GAL/03.usfm @@ -31,14 +31,14 @@ \s5 \v 17 Now I say this. The law, which came 430 years later, does not void the covenant previously established by God. -\v 18 For if the inheritance had come by means of the law, then it would no longer have come by means of the promise. But God freely gave it to Abraham through a promise. +\v 18 For if the inheritance had come by means of the law, it would no longer have come by means of the promise. But God freely gave it to Abraham through a promise. \s5 \v 19 Why then was the law given? It was added because of transgressions, until the descendant of Abraham would come to those to whom he had been promised. The law was put into force through angels by the hand of a mediator. \v 20 Now a mediator implies more than one person, yet God is only one. \s5 -\v 21 So is the law against the promises of God? Absolutely not! For if a law had been given that was able to give life, then righteousness would certainly have come by that law. +\v 21 So is the law against the promises of God? Absolutely not! For if a law had been given that was able to give life, righteousness would certainly have come by that law. \v 22 But instead, scripture imprisoned all things under sin. God did this so that his promise to save us by faith in Jesus Christ might be given to those who believe. \s5 From bebedf1f9c4ef1b7a1454e5b8fc0c76e97861c86 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Tue, 7 Jun 2016 09:36:52 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 037/150] Update 04.usfm --- 49-GAL/04.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/49-GAL/04.usfm b/49-GAL/04.usfm index 7007918e..ffc9c342 100644 --- a/49-GAL/04.usfm +++ b/49-GAL/04.usfm @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ \p \v 21 Tell me, you who desire to be under the law, do you not hear what the law says? \v 22 For it is written that Abraham had two sons, one by the slave woman and one by the free woman. -\v 23 However, the one by the slave was born only by the flesh. But the one by the free woman was born by a promise. +\v 23 However, the one by the slave was born only by the flesh, but the one by the free woman was born by a promise. \s5 \v 24 These things can be explained using an allegory, for these women are like two covenants. One of them is from Mount Sinai. She gives birth to children who are slaves. This is Hagar. From 9a256bbeb17cf856b84523fa4f3b11261889f046 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Tue, 7 Jun 2016 10:19:15 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 038/150] smart quote removed --- 42-MRK/05.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/05.usfm b/42-MRK/05.usfm index fea29cfd..5e6f228e 100644 --- a/42-MRK/05.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/05.usfm @@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ \s5 \p -\v 25 Now there was a woman who’s blood had flowed for twelve years. +\v 25 Now there was a woman who's blood had flowed for twelve years. \v 26 She had suffered a lot under many doctors and had spent everything that she had. Yet she was helped by nothing, but instead got worse. \v 27 She had heard reports about Jesus. So she came up behind him when he was walking in the crowd, and she touched his cloak. From abf566bdff03dbc16c4939a939980f916fa17b82 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Tue, 7 Jun 2016 10:21:09 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 039/150] smart quote removed --- 42-MRK/06.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/06.usfm b/42-MRK/06.usfm index 4f7599f1..59249638 100644 --- a/42-MRK/06.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/06.usfm @@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ \s5 \v 16 But when Herod heard this he said, "John, whom I beheaded, has been raised." -\v 17 For Herod himself had sent for the arrest of John and he had tied him up in prison because of Herodias (his brother Philip’s wife) because he had married her. +\v 17 For Herod himself had sent for the arrest of John and he had tied him up in prison because of Herodias (his brother Philip's wife) because he had married her. \s5 \v 18 For John told Herod, "It is not lawful for you to have your brother's wife." From a7ee377f767577b32aa52209f302b91ce9d5d8bf Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Tue, 7 Jun 2016 10:25:59 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 040/150] Update 05.usfm --- 49-GAL/05.usfm | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/49-GAL/05.usfm b/49-GAL/05.usfm index ca507fb7..ed6ff9ae 100644 --- a/49-GAL/05.usfm +++ b/49-GAL/05.usfm @@ -1,4 +1,3 @@ - \s5 \c 5 \p @@ -27,7 +26,7 @@ \s5 \p \v 13 For God has called you, brothers, to freedom. Only do not use your freedom as an opportunity for the flesh. Instead through love serve one another. -\v 14 For the whole law is fulfilled in one commandment, in "You must love your neighbor as yourself." +\v 14 For the whole law is fulfilled in one commandment; in "You must love your neighbor as yourself." \v 15 But if you bite and devour one another, watch out that you are not destroyed by one another. \s5 From b86c03656fd3258c91265b0f62260ea6fbc874c8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Tue, 7 Jun 2016 10:38:33 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 041/150] V8, 9 rewrite --- 49-GAL/06.usfm | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/49-GAL/06.usfm b/49-GAL/06.usfm index 9b940ec7..47bbf968 100644 --- a/49-GAL/06.usfm +++ b/49-GAL/06.usfm @@ -1,4 +1,3 @@ - \s5 \c 6 \p @@ -14,7 +13,7 @@ \p \v 6 The one who is taught the word must share all good things with the teacher. \v 7 Do not be deceived. God is not mocked. Whatever a man plants, that is what he will also harvest. -\v 8 For he who sows seed to his own sinful nature will gather a harvest of destruction. But he who sows seed to the Spirit, from the Spirit will gather a harvest of eternal life. +\v 8 For he who sows seed to his own sinful nature will harvest destruction, but he who sows seed to the Spirit, will harvest eternal life from the Spirit. \s5 \v 9 We should not become weary of doing good. For at the right time we will reap a harvest if we do not give up. From 87c623ad5135631920e0c30f6dd8ba836009fcee Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Tue, 7 Jun 2016 10:38:48 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 042/150] Update 06.usfm --- 49-GAL/06.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/49-GAL/06.usfm b/49-GAL/06.usfm index 47bbf968..28045380 100644 --- a/49-GAL/06.usfm +++ b/49-GAL/06.usfm @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ \v 8 For he who sows seed to his own sinful nature will harvest destruction, but he who sows seed to the Spirit, will harvest eternal life from the Spirit. \s5 -\v 9 We should not become weary of doing good. For at the right time we will reap a harvest if we do not give up. +\v 9 We should not become weary of doing good, for at the right time we will reap a harvest if we do not give up. \v 10 So then, when we have the opportunity, let us do good to everyone. Let us especially do good to those of the household of the faith. \b From 37b61747f2a4979ca77a9b1e1522e152b5e5f4df Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Tue, 7 Jun 2016 11:03:52 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 043/150] V12 rewrite --- 42-MRK/09.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/09.usfm b/42-MRK/09.usfm index 98095efe..5d3c0f63 100644 --- a/42-MRK/09.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/09.usfm @@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ \s5 \v 11 They asked him, "Why do the scribes say that Elijah must come first?" -\v 12 He said to them, "Elijah does indeed come first so he can restore all things. Then why is it written that Son of Man must suffer many things and that people will hate him? +\v 12 He said to them, "Elijah does indeed come furst to restore all things. Then why is it written that the Son of Man must suffer many things and will be hated? \v 13 But I say to you that Elijah has come, and they did whatever they wanted to him, just as scripture says about him." \s5 From c1304605b0dc5cc5c6e04ad8d3f7715995b0508d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Tue, 7 Jun 2016 11:25:21 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 044/150] v 14, 15 rewrite --- 42-MRK/09.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/09.usfm b/42-MRK/09.usfm index 5d3c0f63..afae6498 100644 --- a/42-MRK/09.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/09.usfm @@ -26,8 +26,8 @@ \s5 \p -\v 14 When they came back to where the other disciples were, they saw a great crowd around them, and the scribes were arguing with them. -\v 15 When they saw Jesus, the whole crowd was greatly amazed; they ran up to him and gave him a warm welcome. +\v 14 And when they came back to the disciples, they saw a great crowd around them and scribes were arguing with them. +\v 15 And immediately when they saw him, the whole crowd was amazed and ran up to him to greet him. \v 16 He asked his disciples, "What are you arguing with them about?" \s5 From ddc4a0cfb9a0887fbf143a4b7b6874751285706e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Tue, 7 Jun 2016 16:45:46 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 045/150] V17 rewrite --- 42-MRK/09.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/09.usfm b/42-MRK/09.usfm index afae6498..e093a4bc 100644 --- a/42-MRK/09.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/09.usfm @@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ \v 16 He asked his disciples, "What are you arguing with them about?" \s5 -\v 17 One of the crowd answered him, "Teacher, I brought you my son; he has a spirit that makes him unable to speak, +\v 17 Someone in the crowd answered him, "Teacher, I brought my son to you; he has a spirit that makes him unable to speak, \v 18 and it causes him to have convulsions and throws him down; he foams at the mouth, grinds his teeth, and becomes rigid. I asked your disciples to drive it out of him, but they could not." \v 19 He answered them, "Unbelieving generation, how long will I have to stay with you? How long will I bear with you? Bring him to me." From a04b83ecee2bbde9e838a5916949841e36ef6544 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Tue, 7 Jun 2016 16:51:43 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 046/150] V26 rewrite --- 42-MRK/09.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/09.usfm b/42-MRK/09.usfm index e093a4bc..23d564d8 100644 --- a/42-MRK/09.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/09.usfm @@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ \v 25 When Jesus saw the crowd running to them, he rebuked the unclean spirit and said, "You mute and deaf spirit, I command you, come out of him, and never enter into him again." \s5 -\v 26 It cried out and convulsed the boy greatly and then came out. The boy looked like one who was dead, so much so that most of the people said, "He is dead." +\v 26 It cried out and convulsed the boy greatly and then came out. The boy looked like one who was dead, so that many said, "He is dead." \v 27 But Jesus took him by the hand and lifted him up, and the boy stood up. \s5 From 43572e8a9e92f521311ca21a1a24ac4fea416299 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Tue, 7 Jun 2016 17:04:01 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 047/150] V30 update --- 42-MRK/09.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/09.usfm b/42-MRK/09.usfm index 23d564d8..6806a344 100644 --- a/42-MRK/09.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/09.usfm @@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ \s5 \p -\v 30 They went out from there and passed through Galilee. Jesus did not want anyone to know where they were, +\v 30 They went out from there and passed through Galilee. He did not want anyone to know where they were, \v 31 for he was teaching his disciples. He said to them, "The Son of Man will be delivered over into the hands of men, and they will put him to death. When he has been put to death, after three days he will rise again." \v 32 But they did not understand this statement, and they were afraid to ask him. From 392bda32eadf7d9dddc6546afc7722d6e085457a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Tue, 7 Jun 2016 17:53:09 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 048/150] V33, 35 rewrite --- 42-MRK/09.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/09.usfm b/42-MRK/09.usfm index 6806a344..d0bd4e9b 100644 --- a/42-MRK/09.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/09.usfm @@ -61,9 +61,9 @@ \s5 \p -\v 33 They came to Capernaum. When he was in the house he asked his disciples, "What were you discussing along the way?" +\v 33 And they came to Capernaum. And when he was in the house he asked them, "What were you discussing along the way?" \v 34 But they were silent. For they had been arguing with one with another along the way about who was the greatest. -\v 35 He sat down and called the Twelve together. He said to them, "If anyone wants to be first, he must be last of all and servant of all." +\v 35 He sat down and called the Twelve together, and he said to them, "If anyone wants to be first, he must be last of all and servant of all." \s5 \v 36 He took a little child and placed him in their midst. He took the child in his arms and said to them, From 927dfe940287db79e1130a50c293b1b97c3a6854 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Tue, 7 Jun 2016 18:37:28 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 049/150] V36-37 review --- 42-MRK/09.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/09.usfm b/42-MRK/09.usfm index d0bd4e9b..3497a7ae 100644 --- a/42-MRK/09.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/09.usfm @@ -66,8 +66,8 @@ \v 35 He sat down and called the Twelve together, and he said to them, "If anyone wants to be first, he must be last of all and servant of all." \s5 -\v 36 He took a little child and placed him in their midst. He took the child in his arms and said to them, -\v 37 "Whoever receives such a child in my name, he also is receiving me, and if someone receives me, he does not receive me alone, but also the one who sent me." +\v 36 He took a little child and placed him in their midst. He took him in his arms and said to them, +\v 37 "Whoever receives such a child in my name, also receives me, and if someone receives me, he does not receive me alone, but also the one who sent me." \s5 \v 38 John said to him, "Teacher, we saw someone driving out demons in your name and we stopped him, because he does not follow us." From c9540c005540434d9ca007e5cf2de59e9b04db24 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Tue, 7 Jun 2016 20:25:28 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 050/150] Update 01.usfm --- 57-TIT/01.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/57-TIT/01.usfm b/57-TIT/01.usfm index a2d73fad..e4e4c721 100644 --- a/57-TIT/01.usfm +++ b/57-TIT/01.usfm @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ \s5 \c 1 \p -\v 1 Paul, a servant of God and an apostle of Jesus Christ, to make firm both the faith of God's chosen people and the knowledge of the truth that agrees with godliness, +\v 1 Paul, a servant of God and an apostle of Jesus Christ, for the faith of God's chosen people and the knowledge of the truth that is according to godliness, \v 2 in the confidence of everlasting life that God, who is without lies, promised before all the ages of time. \v 3 At the right time, he made his word evident by the message that he trusted me to deliver, according to the command of God our savior. From 919fd67c1860ec74e01b80eef7292dcca8b6db2d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Tue, 7 Jun 2016 21:10:50 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 051/150] Update 01.usfm --- 57-TIT/01.usfm | 10 +++++----- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/57-TIT/01.usfm b/57-TIT/01.usfm index e4e4c721..8a2a246f 100644 --- a/57-TIT/01.usfm +++ b/57-TIT/01.usfm @@ -1,9 +1,9 @@ \s5 \c 1 \p -\v 1 Paul, a servant of God and an apostle of Jesus Christ, for the faith of God's chosen people and the knowledge of the truth that is according to godliness, -\v 2 in the confidence of everlasting life that God, who is without lies, promised before all the ages of time. -\v 3 At the right time, he made his word evident by the message that he trusted me to deliver, according to the command of God our savior. +\v 1 Paul, a servant of God and an apostle of Jesus Christ, for the faith of God's chosen people and the knowledge of the truth. +\v 2 These are in the confidence of everlasting life that God, who is without lies, promised before all the ages of time. +\v 3 At the right time, he made his word evident by the message that he trusted me to deliver. I was to do this by the command of God our savior. \s5 \v 4 To Titus, a true son in our common faith. Grace, mercy, and peace from God the Father and Christ Jesus our savior. @@ -11,8 +11,8 @@ \v 5 For this purpose I left you in Crete, that you might set in order things not yet complete and ordain elders in every city as I directed you. \s5 -\v 6 An elder must be without blame, the husband of one wife, with faithful children not categorized as wicked or undisciplined. -\v 7 It is necessary for the overseer, as God's household manager, to be blameless, not loud nor unrestrained, not wrathful, not addicted to wine, not a brawler, and not a greedy man. +\v 6 An elder must be without blame, the husband of one wife, with faithful children not accused of being wicked or undisciplined. +\v 7 It is necessary for the overseer, as God's household manager, to be blameless. He must not be loud or unrestrained. He must not be easily angered, not addicted to wine, not a brawler, and not a greedy man. \s5 \v 8 Instead, he should be hospitable, a friend of what is good. He must be sensible, righteous, godly, and self-controlled. From 51b65e50e2339b434de9bce02abef765a3a8680c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Tue, 7 Jun 2016 21:13:32 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 052/150] Update 01.usfm --- 57-TIT/01.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/57-TIT/01.usfm b/57-TIT/01.usfm index 8a2a246f..0dc1b249 100644 --- a/57-TIT/01.usfm +++ b/57-TIT/01.usfm @@ -31,5 +31,5 @@ \v 14 Do not waste time on Jewish myths and the commandments of men who turn away from the truth. \s5 -\v 15 To those who are pure, all is pure, but to those who are polluted and unbelieving, nothing is pure, for their minds and consciences have been corrupted. -\v 16 They profess to know God, but what they do denies him. They are detestable and disobedient and prove to be unfit for any good work. +\v 15 To those who are pure, all is pure. But to those who are polluted and unbelieving, nothing is pure, for their minds and consciences have been defiled. +\v 16 They profess to know God, but what they do denies him. They are detestable and disobedient. They prove to be unfit for any good work. From 08ba16471129e9e207f402c96b5aeb746acecd49 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Wed, 8 Jun 2016 07:48:15 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 053/150] Update 01.usfm --- 57-TIT/01.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/57-TIT/01.usfm b/57-TIT/01.usfm index 0dc1b249..1ec1d539 100644 --- a/57-TIT/01.usfm +++ b/57-TIT/01.usfm @@ -32,4 +32,4 @@ \s5 \v 15 To those who are pure, all is pure. But to those who are polluted and unbelieving, nothing is pure, for their minds and consciences have been defiled. -\v 16 They profess to know God, but what they do denies him. They are detestable and disobedient. They prove to be unfit for any good work. +\v 16 They profess to know God, but what they do denies him. They are detestable and disobedient. They prove to be unfit for any good deed. From b2a9b7898e66c6be4b81104312c99faa7f0d8146 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Wed, 8 Jun 2016 08:04:36 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 054/150] Update 01.usfm --- 57-TIT/01.usfm | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/57-TIT/01.usfm b/57-TIT/01.usfm index 1ec1d539..950bfb85 100644 --- a/57-TIT/01.usfm +++ b/57-TIT/01.usfm @@ -25,11 +25,11 @@ \s5 \v 12 One of them, a wise man of theirs, said, "Cretans are unceasing liars, bad and dangerous animals, lazy bellies." -\v 13 This statement is true, so sharply correct them that they may be sound in the faith. +\v 13 This statement is true, so correct them severely so that they may be sound in the faith. \s5 -\v 14 Do not waste time on Jewish myths and the commandments of men who turn away from the truth. +\v 14 Do not pay any attention to Jewish myths or to the commandments of men who turn back the truth. \s5 -\v 15 To those who are pure, all is pure. But to those who are polluted and unbelieving, nothing is pure, for their minds and consciences have been defiled. -\v 16 They profess to know God, but what they do denies him. They are detestable and disobedient. They prove to be unfit for any good deed. +\v 15 To those who are pure, all things are pure. But to those who are stained and unbelieving, nothing is pure. For their minds and consciences have been stained. +\v 16 They profess to know God, but they deny him by their deeds. They are detestable and disobedient. They are unapproved for any good deed. From 057ffe92d90d64d381c17cfd8619b623f7c4041d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Wed, 8 Jun 2016 10:08:19 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 055/150] V39 rewrite --- 42-MRK/09.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/09.usfm b/42-MRK/09.usfm index 3497a7ae..4ef983fa 100644 --- a/42-MRK/09.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/09.usfm @@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ \s5 \v 38 John said to him, "Teacher, we saw someone driving out demons in your name and we stopped him, because he does not follow us." -\v 39 But Jesus said, "Do not stop him. For no one able to do a mighty work in my name will soon be able to say anything bad about me. +\v 39 But Jesus said, "Do not stop him, for there is no one who will do a mighty work in my name and can soon afterwards say anything bad about me. \s5 \v 40 Whoever is not against us is for us. From 6a8944139681089436c1871b7efa69b0946999ce Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Wed, 8 Jun 2016 12:24:24 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 056/150] V2, 13, 14 rewrite --- 42-MRK/10.usfm | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/10.usfm b/42-MRK/10.usfm index bfc00517..5d93a974 100644 --- a/42-MRK/10.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/10.usfm @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ \c 10 \p \v 1 Jesus left that place and went to the region of Judea and to the area beyond the Jordan River, and the crowds came to him again. He was teaching them again, as he was accustomed to do. -\v 2 Pharisees came to him and asked, "Is it lawful for a husband to divorce his wife?" This question was to test him. +\v 2 And Pharisees came to him and asked, "Is it lawful for a husband to divorce his wife?" to test him. \v 3 He answered, "What did Moses command you?" \v 4 They said, "Moses allowed a man to write a certificate of divorce and then to send her away." @@ -25,8 +25,8 @@ \s5 \p -\v 13 People brought their little children to him so that he might touch them, but the disciples rebuked them. -\v 14 When Jesus saw it, he was angry with them, and said to them, "Permit the little children come to me, and do not forbid them, for the kingdom of God belongs to such ones. +\v 13 And they brought their little children to him so that he might touch them, but the disciples rebuked them. +\v 14 But when Jesus noticed it, he was very displeased and said to them, "Permit the little children to come to me, and do not forbid them, because to such ones belongs the kingdom of God." \s5 \v 15 Truly I say to you, whoever will not receive the kingdom of God as a little child will definitely not enter it." From e79de8542f3f350512727d4fb2d4507ee84ecab7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Wed, 8 Jun 2016 13:18:39 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 057/150] V17 rewrite --- 42-MRK/10.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/10.usfm b/42-MRK/10.usfm index 5d93a974..4834ff33 100644 --- a/42-MRK/10.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/10.usfm @@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ \s5 \p -\v 17 As he began his journey, a man ran up to him and knelt before him, and asked, "Good Teacher, what must I do to inherit eternal life?" +\v 17 And when he began his journey, a man ran up to him and knelt before him, and asked, "Good Teacher, what must I do to inherit eternal life?" \v 18 And Jesus said, "Why do you call me good? No one is good, except God alone. \v 19 You know the commandments: Do not kill, do not commit adultery, do not steal, do not testify falsely, do not defraud, honor your father and mother.'" From 0db5e77b88f8dc09b9ab3620f24eaaa3d8da61cf Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Wed, 8 Jun 2016 13:27:05 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 058/150] V22 rewrite --- 42-MRK/10.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/10.usfm b/42-MRK/10.usfm index 4834ff33..765a6ac8 100644 --- a/42-MRK/10.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/10.usfm @@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ \s5 \v 20 The man said, "Teacher, all these things I have obeyed from the time I was a youth." \v 21 Jesus looked at him and loved him. He said to him, "One thing you lack. You must sell all that you have and give it to the poor, and you will have treasure in heaven. Then come, follow me." -\v 22 But at this statement, he looked discouraged; he became very sorrowful and walked away, for he had many possessions. +\v 22 But he became discouraged because of this statement; he walked away being very sorrowful, for he had many possessions. \s5 \p From c78f79dc4ef18b747a1e8b06124bb880bc5a2752 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Wed, 8 Jun 2016 13:28:36 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 059/150] V28 look --- 42-MRK/10.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/10.usfm b/42-MRK/10.usfm index 765a6ac8..5b859a5d 100644 --- a/42-MRK/10.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/10.usfm @@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ \s5 \v 26 They were greatly astonished and said to each other, "Then who can be saved?" \v 27 Jesus looked at them and said, "With people it is impossible, but not with God. For all things are possible with God." -\v 28 Peter began to speak to him, "Well, we have left everything and have followed you." +\v 28 Peter began to speak to him, "Look, we have left everything and have followed you." \s5 \v 29 Jesus said, "Truly I say to you, there is no one who has left house, or brothers, or sisters, or mother, or father, or children, or lands, for my sake, and for the gospel From 1ad7ed5a51019d903849de89321a98e96c0d7015 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Wed, 8 Jun 2016 13:50:03 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 060/150] V29-30 punctuation --- 42-MRK/10.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/10.usfm b/42-MRK/10.usfm index 5b859a5d..b73433ed 100644 --- a/42-MRK/10.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/10.usfm @@ -55,8 +55,8 @@ \v 28 Peter began to speak to him, "Look, we have left everything and have followed you." \s5 -\v 29 Jesus said, "Truly I say to you, there is no one who has left house, or brothers, or sisters, or mother, or father, or children, or lands, for my sake, and for the gospel -\v 30 who will not receive a hundred times as much now in this world, houses, and brothers, and sisters, and mothers, and children, and lands, with persecutions, and in the world to come, eternal life. +\v 29 Jesus said, "Truly I say to you, there is no one who has left house, or brothers, or sisters, or mother, or father, or children, or lands, for my sake, and for the gospel, +\v 30 who will not receive a hundred times as much now in this world; houses, and brothers, and sisters, and mothers, and children, and lands, with persecutions, and in the world to come, eternal life. \v 31 But many who are first will be last, and the last first." \s5 From 99a59ae56d101d60793859aa92a25fc8a36b7a5e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Wed, 8 Jun 2016 14:00:21 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 061/150] V32 a rewrite --- 42-MRK/10.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/10.usfm b/42-MRK/10.usfm index b73433ed..1403e7db 100644 --- a/42-MRK/10.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/10.usfm @@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ \s5 \p -\v 32 They were walking on the road that goes up to Jerusalem, and Jesus was going ahead of them. The disciples were amazed, and those who were following behind were afraid. Then Jesus took the Twelve aside again and began to tell them what would soon happen to him: +\v 32 They were on the road, going up to Jerusalem, and Jesus was going ahead of them. The disciples were amazed, and those who were following behind were afraid. Then Jesus took the Twelve aside again and began to tell them what would soon happen to him: \v 33 "See, we are going up to Jerusalem, and the Son of Man will be delivered to the chief priests and the scribes. They will condemn him to death and deliver him to the Gentiles. \v 34 They will mock him, spit on him, whip him, and put him to death. But after three days he will rise." From 96e7d3cef02d849a9ca7c197f436129dca4bc773 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Wed, 8 Jun 2016 14:13:17 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 062/150] V46-47 rewrite --- 42-MRK/10.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/10.usfm b/42-MRK/10.usfm index 1403e7db..c4e0a979 100644 --- a/42-MRK/10.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/10.usfm @@ -87,8 +87,8 @@ \s5 \p -\v 46 They came to Jericho. As he left Jericho with his disciples and a great crowd of people, there was a man there named Bartimaeus son of Timaeus, a blind beggar who sat by the road. -\v 47 When he heard that Jesus the Nazarene was on his way, he began to shout and to say, "Jesus, Son of David, have mercy on me!" +\v 46 They came to Jericho. As he left Jericho with his disciples and a great crowd, the son of Timaeus, Bartimaeus, a blind beggar, sat by the road. +\v 47 When he heard that it was Jesus the Nazarene, he began to shout and to say, "Jesus, Son of David, have mercy on me!" \v 48 Many rebuked the blind man, telling him to be quiet. But he cried out all the more, "Son of David, have mercy on me!" \s5 From ddadb3667535785e67ea65c3b5294a7c2500cce7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Wed, 8 Jun 2016 15:03:02 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 063/150] Update 02.usfm --- 57-TIT/02.usfm | 10 +++++----- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/57-TIT/02.usfm b/57-TIT/02.usfm index f71f0bde..1c87ba26 100644 --- a/57-TIT/02.usfm +++ b/57-TIT/02.usfm @@ -1,18 +1,18 @@ \s5 \c 2 \p -\v 1 But you, say what agrees with faithful instruction. +\v 1 But you, say what fits with faithful instruction. \v 2 Older men must be temperate, dignified, sensible, sound in faith, in love, and in perseverance. \s5 -\v 3 Older women likewise should always present themselves as reverent, not gossips. They should not need to continually drink wine. They should teach what is good -\v 4 in order to call the younger women to be balanced in their thinking, to encourage them to love their own husbands and children, to be sensible, +\v 3 Older women likewise should always present themselves as reverent, not gossips. They should not be enslaved to much wine. They should teach what is good +\v 4 in order to call the younger women to be balanced in their thinking. They should encourage them to love their own husbands and children, to be sensible, \v 5 pure, good housekeepers, and to obey their own husbands, so that God's word may not be condemned. \s5 \v 6 In the same way, call the younger men to be sensible. -\v 7 In all ways present yourself as a model of good works; and when you teach, show integrity and dignity. -\v 8 Speak words that do not need to be corrected but that would bring shame upon someone if he tried to oppose you, because there is nothing evil to say about us. +\v 7 In all ways present yourself as a model of good works; and when you teach, show integrity and dignity. +\v 8 Speak a message that is healthy and blameless, so that anyone who is opposed may be put to shame, because he has nothing bad to say about us. \s5 \v 9 Slaves are to obey their masters in everything. They should try to please them and not argue with them; From 729bd3133a1f4704d18ea4ff194b5981cf4c9b27 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Wed, 8 Jun 2016 15:04:00 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 064/150] V51, 52 rewrite --- 42-MRK/10.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/10.usfm b/42-MRK/10.usfm index c4e0a979..8187b7bf 100644 --- a/42-MRK/10.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/10.usfm @@ -96,5 +96,5 @@ \v 50 He threw aside his coat, sprang up, and came to Jesus. \s5 -\v 51 Jesus answered him and said, "What do you want me to do for you?" The blind man said, "Rabbi, I want to receive my sight." -\v 52 Jesus said, "Go. Your faith has healed you." Immediately he received his sight, and followed him along the road as he walked on. +\v 51 And Jesus answered him and said, "What do you want me to do for you?" The blind man said, "Rabbi, I want to receive my sight." +\v 52 And Jesus said to him, "Go. Your faith has healed you." Immediately he received his sight, and followed him on the road. From fbaeac866b5250fc4ed6602ef253fe0cb90cf992 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Wed, 8 Jun 2016 15:19:55 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 065/150] Update 02.usfm --- 57-TIT/02.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/57-TIT/02.usfm b/57-TIT/02.usfm index 1c87ba26..5dae7ded 100644 --- a/57-TIT/02.usfm +++ b/57-TIT/02.usfm @@ -15,8 +15,8 @@ \v 8 Speak a message that is healthy and blameless, so that anyone who is opposed may be put to shame, because he has nothing bad to say about us. \s5 -\v 9 Slaves are to obey their masters in everything. They should try to please them and not argue with them; -\v 10 and they should not steal even inexpensive things from them. But they should show all good faith, so that in every way they might make our teaching about God our savior attractive. +\v 9 Slaves are to obey their masters in all things. They are to please them and not argue with them. +\v 10 They should not steal even inexpensive things from them. But they should show all good faith, so that in every way they might make our teaching about God our savior attractive. \s5 \v 11 You see, the grace of God that is able to bring salvation to everyone has appeared From fe94139bea7bfaab07f7ebc2b9131bacc714781b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Wed, 8 Jun 2016 15:52:30 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 066/150] Update 02.usfm --- 57-TIT/02.usfm | 12 ++++++------ 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/57-TIT/02.usfm b/57-TIT/02.usfm index 5dae7ded..7860f824 100644 --- a/57-TIT/02.usfm +++ b/57-TIT/02.usfm @@ -16,16 +16,16 @@ \s5 \v 9 Slaves are to obey their masters in all things. They are to please them and not argue with them. -\v 10 They should not steal even inexpensive things from them. But they should show all good faith, so that in every way they might make our teaching about God our savior attractive. +\v 10 They should not pilfer. Instead, they should show all good faith, so that in every way they adorn make our teaching about God our savior. \s5 -\v 11 You see, the grace of God that is able to bring salvation to everyone has appeared -\v 12 and trains us to deny ungodliness and worldly passions and to live sensibly, righteously, and in a godly way in this age -\v 13 while we look forward to receiving that which we are gladly anticipating, the appearance of the glory of our great God and Savior Jesus Christ. +\v 11 For the grace of God has appeared to all people. +\v 12 It trains us to deny ungodliness and worldly passions. It trains us to live sensibly, righteously, and in a godly way in this age +\v 13 while we look forward to receiving our blessed hope, the appearance of the glory of our great God and Savior Jesus Christ. \s5 -\v 14 Jesus gave himself for us in order to pay the price to set us free from lawlessness and to make pure, for himself, a treasured people who are eager to do what is good. +\v 14 Jesus gave himself for us in order to redeem us from all lawlessness and to make pure, for himself, a special people who are eager to do good works. \s5 \p -\v 15 Speak of and encourage these things, and give correction with all authority. Let no one disregard you. +\v 15 Speak of and encourage these things. Give correction with all authority. Let no one disregard you. From be3abd105fa8430290899306760cfd03735fa6cc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Wed, 8 Jun 2016 14:58:58 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 067/150] comma edits --- 42-MRK/09.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/09.usfm b/42-MRK/09.usfm index 4ef983fa..85a72d15 100644 --- a/42-MRK/09.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/09.usfm @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ \s5 \v 4 Then Elijah with Moses appeared to them, and they were talking with Jesus. -\v 5 Peter answered and said to Jesus, "Rabbi, it is good for us to be here and so let us make three shelters; one for you, one for Moses, and one for Elijah." +\v 5 Peter answered and said to Jesus, "Rabbi, it is good for us to be here, and so let us make three shelters, one for you, one for Moses, and one for Elijah." \v 6 (For he did not now what to say, for they were terrified.) \s5 From 520334d39eb6933c513fd2a8d7a32a9af70bab0a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Wed, 8 Jun 2016 17:14:47 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 068/150] Update 03.usfm --- 57-TIT/03.usfm | 22 +++++++++++----------- 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-) diff --git a/57-TIT/03.usfm b/57-TIT/03.usfm index 811a3ebd..49da99f7 100644 --- a/57-TIT/03.usfm +++ b/57-TIT/03.usfm @@ -1,35 +1,35 @@ \s5 \c 3 \p -\v 1 Remind them to submit to rulers and authorities, to obey them, to be ready for every good work, -\v 2 to revile no one, to avoid arguing, to let other people have their way, and to show humility to all people. +\v 1 Remind them to submit to rulers and authorities, to obey them, to be ready for every good work. +\v 2 Remind them to revile no one, to avoid arguing, to let other people have their way, and to show humility to all people. \s5 \v 3 For once we ourselves were thoughtless and disobedient. We were led astray and enslaved by various passions and pleasures. We lived in evil and envy. We were detestable and hated one another. \s5 \v 4 But when the kindness of God our savior and his love toward mankind appeared, -\v 5 he saved us through the washing of new birth and renewal by the Holy Spirit, not because of works that we have done in righteousness but according to his mercy. +\v 5 it was not by works of righteousness that we did, but by his mercy that he saved us. He did so through the washing of new birth and renewal by the Holy Spirit. \s5 \v 6 God richly poured the Holy Spirit on us through our Savior Jesus Christ -\v 7 so that, having been justified by his grace, we became heirs of the confidence of eternal life. +\v 7 so that, having been justified by his grace, we became participants in the confidence of eternal life. \s5 -\v 8 These words are trustworthy. I want you to speak confidently about these things, so that those who trust God may set their minds on the good works that he put before them. These things are good and profitable for all people. +\v 8 This message is trustworthy. I want you to speak confidently about these things, so that those who trust God may set their minds on the good works that he put before them. These things are good and profitable for all people. \s5 -\v 9 But avoid foolish debates and genealogies and strife and conflict about the law. Those things are worthless and unprofitable. -\v 10 Reject anyone who is causing divisions among you after one or two warnings, -\v 11 and know that such a one has turned from the right way and is sinning and condemns himself. +\v 9 But avoid foolish debates and genealogies and strife and conflict about the law. For these things are worthless and unprofitable. +\v 10 Reject anyone who is causing divisions among you after one or two warnings. +\v 11 You know that such a person has turned from the right way and is sinning. He condemns himself. \s5 \p -\v 12 When I send Artemas or Tychicus to you, hurry and come to me at Nicopolis where I have decided to spend the winter. -\v 13 Hurry and send Zenas, the expert in law, and Apollos, with everything that they need. +\v 12 When I send Artemas or Tychicus to you, hurry and come to me at Nicopolis, where I have decided to spend the winter. +\v 13 Hurry and send Zenas, the expert in law, and Apollos, in a way that they lack nothing. \s5 -\v 14 Our people must learn to engage themselves in good works that meet urgent needs so that they may not be unfruitful. +\v 14 Our people must learn to engage in good works that meet urgent needs so that they may not be unfruitful. \s5 \p From 41f7674d5bb84195c3268d4d33569fe4d7463142 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Wed, 8 Jun 2016 17:27:09 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 069/150] Update 01.usfm --- 57-TIT/01.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/57-TIT/01.usfm b/57-TIT/01.usfm index 950bfb85..ada7a7a8 100644 --- a/57-TIT/01.usfm +++ b/57-TIT/01.usfm @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ \s5 \c 1 \p -\v 1 Paul, a servant of God and an apostle of Jesus Christ, for the faith of God's chosen people and the knowledge of the truth. +\v 1 Paul, a servant of God and an apostle of Jesus Christ, for the faith of God's chosen people and the knowledge of the truth that agrees with godliness. \v 2 These are in the confidence of everlasting life that God, who is without lies, promised before all the ages of time. \v 3 At the right time, he made his word evident by the message that he trusted me to deliver. I was to do this by the command of God our savior. From 6248184691c4e218687a9fda468524bde6694d5f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Wed, 8 Jun 2016 17:33:52 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 070/150] Update 01.usfm --- 57-TIT/01.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/57-TIT/01.usfm b/57-TIT/01.usfm index ada7a7a8..f34dd9a7 100644 --- a/57-TIT/01.usfm +++ b/57-TIT/01.usfm @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ \p \v 1 Paul, a servant of God and an apostle of Jesus Christ, for the faith of God's chosen people and the knowledge of the truth that agrees with godliness. \v 2 These are in the confidence of everlasting life that God, who is without lies, promised before all the ages of time. -\v 3 At the right time, he made his word evident by the message that he trusted me to deliver. I was to do this by the command of God our savior. +\v 3 At the right time, he revealed his word by the message that he trusted me to deliver. I was to do this by the command of God our savior. \s5 \v 4 To Titus, a true son in our common faith. Grace, mercy, and peace from God the Father and Christ Jesus our savior. From 0a4c5739f2389904f5be48b230b5e349befba981 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Wed, 8 Jun 2016 20:29:16 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 071/150] space place between quotation marks --- 42-MRK/09.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/09.usfm b/42-MRK/09.usfm index 85a72d15..01db5e76 100644 --- a/42-MRK/09.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/09.usfm @@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ \v 22 It has often thrown him into the fire or into the waters and tried to destroy him. If you are able to do anything, have pity on us and help us." \s5 -\v 23 Jesus said to him, "'If you are able'? All things are possible for the one who believes." +\v 23 Jesus said to him, " 'If you are able'? All things are possible for the one who believes." \v 24 Immediately the father of the child cried out and said, "I believe! Help my unbelief!" \v 25 When Jesus saw the crowd running to them, he rebuked the unclean spirit and said, "You mute and deaf spirit, I command you, come out of him, and never enter into him again." From 4326904cef5df3485c032ed312ef3009c3507e95 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Wed, 8 Jun 2016 20:58:23 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 072/150] unnecessary comma removed --- 42-MRK/09.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/09.usfm b/42-MRK/09.usfm index 01db5e76..4388e97d 100644 --- a/42-MRK/09.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/09.usfm @@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ \v 44 \f + \ft The best ancient copies omit this phrase from verses 44 and 46, \fqa "where their worm never dies and the fire is never quenched" \f* \s5 -\v 45 If your foot causes you to stumble, cut it off. It is better for you to enter into life lame, than to have your two feet, and be thrown into hell. +\v 45 If your foot causes you to stumble, cut it off. It is better for you to enter into life lame, than to have your two feet and be thrown into hell. \v 46 \f + \ft See note on verse 44. \f* \s5 From f4168e832275d3b68559212ef2bdc86f36b6cac6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Tue, 26 Jul 2016 07:04:48 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 073/150] spelling corrected: now to know --- 42-MRK/09.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/09.usfm b/42-MRK/09.usfm index 4388e97d..547941f8 100644 --- a/42-MRK/09.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/09.usfm @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ \s5 \v 4 Then Elijah with Moses appeared to them, and they were talking with Jesus. \v 5 Peter answered and said to Jesus, "Rabbi, it is good for us to be here, and so let us make three shelters, one for you, one for Moses, and one for Elijah." -\v 6 (For he did not now what to say, for they were terrified.) +\v 6 (For he did not know what to say, for they were terrified.) \s5 \v 7 A cloud came and overshadowed them. Then a voice came out of the cloud, "This is my beloved Son. Listen to him." From b70a22ae2c32f89fb7342b2362ed12d256f36fc3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Tue, 26 Jul 2016 07:07:35 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 074/150] changed "round" to "around" --- 42-MRK/09.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/09.usfm b/42-MRK/09.usfm index 547941f8..0d447caf 100644 --- a/42-MRK/09.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/09.usfm @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ \s5 \v 7 A cloud came and overshadowed them. Then a voice came out of the cloud, "This is my beloved Son. Listen to him." -\v 8 Suddenly, when they looked round, they no longer saw anyone with them, but only Jesus. +\v 8 Suddenly, when they looked around, they no longer saw anyone with them, but only Jesus. \s5 \p From c838998305288facb0abe9359b12eda12219b94d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Tue, 26 Jul 2016 07:11:08 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 075/150] "furst" changed to "first" --- 42-MRK/09.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/09.usfm b/42-MRK/09.usfm index 0d447caf..87e67a32 100644 --- a/42-MRK/09.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/09.usfm @@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ \s5 \v 11 They asked him, "Why do the scribes say that Elijah must come first?" -\v 12 He said to them, "Elijah does indeed come furst to restore all things. Then why is it written that the Son of Man must suffer many things and will be hated? +\v 12 He said to them, "Elijah does indeed come first to restore all things. Then why is it written that the Son of Man must suffer many things and will be hated? \v 13 But I say to you that Elijah has come, and they did whatever they wanted to him, just as scripture says about him." \s5 From 16f01b72fec2e2f0315678839be6780e258bc9d8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 06:14:30 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 076/150] second attempt to correct "first" --- 42-MRK/09.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/09.usfm b/42-MRK/09.usfm index 87e67a32..58d4dfb5 100644 --- a/42-MRK/09.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/09.usfm @@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ \s5 \p \v 9 As they were coming down the mountain, he commanded them to tell no one what they had seen, until the Son of Man had risen from the dead. -\v 10 So they kept the matter to themselves, but they discussed among themselves what "to rise from the dead" could mean. +\v 10 So they kept the matter to themselves, but they discussed among themselves what "to rise from the dead" could mean. \s5 \v 11 They asked him, "Why do the scribes say that Elijah must come first?" From d5c4c984946900a859fd5b44a90c6c54fa1a6182 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 06:39:41 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 077/150] moved "to test him" for reading clarity --- 42-MRK/10.usfm | 1 - 1 file changed, 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/10.usfm b/42-MRK/10.usfm index 8187b7bf..4085245a 100644 --- a/42-MRK/10.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/10.usfm @@ -2,7 +2,6 @@ \c 10 \p \v 1 Jesus left that place and went to the region of Judea and to the area beyond the Jordan River, and the crowds came to him again. He was teaching them again, as he was accustomed to do. -\v 2 And Pharisees came to him and asked, "Is it lawful for a husband to divorce his wife?" to test him. \v 3 He answered, "What did Moses command you?" \v 4 They said, "Moses allowed a man to write a certificate of divorce and then to send her away." From 2f4790e907ae5e359f83d022897b16e8e76b5de1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 06:46:33 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 078/150] to test him --- 42-MRK/10.usfm | 1 + 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+) diff --git a/42-MRK/10.usfm b/42-MRK/10.usfm index 4085245a..e963825f 100644 --- a/42-MRK/10.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/10.usfm @@ -2,6 +2,7 @@ \c 10 \p \v 1 Jesus left that place and went to the region of Judea and to the area beyond the Jordan River, and the crowds came to him again. He was teaching them again, as he was accustomed to do. +\v 2 And Pharisees came to him to test him and asked, "Is it lawful for a husband to divorce his wife?" \v 3 He answered, "What did Moses command you?" \v 4 They said, "Moses allowed a man to write a certificate of divorce and then to send her away." From 00c722d9923d623e5d8029f1cbcc2d769d3819cb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 07:09:43 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 079/150] modified position single quotation marks OT quotation seems to end after the first occurrence of "one flesh." --- 42-MRK/10.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/10.usfm b/42-MRK/10.usfm index e963825f..3af0f9da 100644 --- a/42-MRK/10.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/10.usfm @@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ \q \v 7 'For this reason a man shall leave his father and mother and cleave to his wife, \q -\v 8 and the two shall become one flesh. So they are no longer two, but one flesh.' +\v 8 and the two shall become one flesh.' So they are no longer two, but one flesh. \m \v 9 Therefore what God has joined together, let no man tear apart." From 797867ec999ba55945b4862b5a776c3a452412af Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 07:17:56 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 080/150] removed a misplace quotation mark --- 42-MRK/10.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/10.usfm b/42-MRK/10.usfm index 3af0f9da..119063b8 100644 --- a/42-MRK/10.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/10.usfm @@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ \s5 \p \v 13 And they brought their little children to him so that he might touch them, but the disciples rebuked them. -\v 14 But when Jesus noticed it, he was very displeased and said to them, "Permit the little children to come to me, and do not forbid them, because to such ones belongs the kingdom of God." +\v 14 But when Jesus noticed it, he was very displeased and said to them, "Permit the little children to come to me, and do not forbid them, because to such ones belongs the kingdom of God. \s5 \v 15 Truly I say to you, whoever will not receive the kingdom of God as a little child will definitely not enter it." From d01b65d5b78431292fdaa2f71119a57a44fc88dc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 09:21:29 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 081/150] Cleaning up --- 24-JER/01.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/24-JER/01.usfm b/24-JER/01.usfm index de59f0c0..2aa54821 100644 --- a/24-JER/01.usfm +++ b/24-JER/01.usfm @@ -44,5 +44,5 @@ \s5 \v 17 Get yourself ready! Stand up and say to them whatever I command you. Do not be shattered before them, or I will shatter you before them! -\v 18 See!—today I have made you a fortified city, an iron pillar, and bronze walls against the whole land—against the kings of Judah, its officials, its priests, and the people of the land. +\v 18 See! Today I have made you a fortified city, an iron pillar, and bronze walls against the whole land—against the kings of Judah, its officials, its priests, and the people of the land. \v 19 They will fight against you, but they will not defeat you, for I will be with you to rescue you—this is Yahweh's declaration." From a6d8223c67080f38e9922d64bac384b6ff763a0c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 07:24:42 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 082/150] corrections to quotation marks --- 42-MRK/10.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/10.usfm b/42-MRK/10.usfm index 119063b8..9d1e563e 100644 --- a/42-MRK/10.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/10.usfm @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ \p \v 17 And when he began his journey, a man ran up to him and knelt before him, and asked, "Good Teacher, what must I do to inherit eternal life?" \v 18 And Jesus said, "Why do you call me good? No one is good, except God alone. -\v 19 You know the commandments: Do not kill, do not commit adultery, do not steal, do not testify falsely, do not defraud, honor your father and mother.'" +\v 19 You know the commandments: 'Do not kill, do not commit adultery, do not steal, do not testify falsely, do not defraud, honor your father and mother'." \s5 \v 20 The man said, "Teacher, all these things I have obeyed from the time I was a youth." From 88e843a661afad30673d8defcf042ced90c444a8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 10:15:14 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 083/150] V3 typo --- 42-MRK/11.usfm | 7 ++----- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/11.usfm b/42-MRK/11.usfm index 1e5939cb..6b78ec06 100644 --- a/42-MRK/11.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/11.usfm @@ -1,11 +1,10 @@ - - \s5 \c 11 \p \v 1 Now as they came to Jerusalem, they were close to Bethphage and Bethany, at the Mount of Olives, and Jesus sent out two of his disciples \v 2 and said to them, "Go into the village opposite us. As soon as you enter it, you will find a colt that has never been ridden. Untie it and bring it to me. -\v 3 If any one says to you, 'Why are you doing this?' you should say, 'The Lord has need of it and will immediately send it back here.'" +\v 3 And if anyone says to you, 'Why are you doing this?' you should say, 'The Lord has need of it and will immediately send it back here.'" + \s5 \v 4 They went away and found a colt tied at a door outside on the open street, and they untied it. \v 5 A few people stood there and they said to them, "What are you doing untying that colt?" @@ -71,5 +70,3 @@ \v 31 They discussed between themselves and argued and said, "If we say, 'From heaven,' he will say, 'Why then did you not believe him?' \v 32 But if we say, 'From men,' ..." They feared the people, for they all held that John was a prophet. \v 33 Then they answered Jesus and said, "We do not know." Then Jesus said to them, "Neither will I tell you by what authority I do these things." - - From 818ae1a333b3fccdc32fb2cf594f6c6d6e3e7165 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 10:31:38 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 084/150] V5 update --- 42-MRK/11.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/11.usfm b/42-MRK/11.usfm index 6b78ec06..81799cc4 100644 --- a/42-MRK/11.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/11.usfm @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ \s5 \v 4 They went away and found a colt tied at a door outside on the open street, and they untied it. -\v 5 A few people stood there and they said to them, "What are you doing untying that colt?" +\v 5 And some people were standing there and said to them, "What are you doing, untying that colt?" \v 6 They spoke to them as Jesus told them, and the people let them go their way. \s5 From 0accfb6b801d81c82a5add04e8b75225c7662e67 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 10:43:19 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 085/150] V11 rewrite --- 42-MRK/11.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/11.usfm b/42-MRK/11.usfm index 81799cc4..4fe7fc5b 100644 --- a/42-MRK/11.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/11.usfm @@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ \s5 \p -\v 11 Then Jesus entered into Jerusalem and went into the temple area. He looked around at everything. It was now late in the evening, and he went out to Bethany with the Twelve. +\v 11 Then Jesus entered into Jerusalem and went into the temple and looked around at everything. Now, the time being late, he went out to Bethany with the Twelve. \v 12 The next day, when they returned from Bethany, he was hungry. \s5 From a236006da20d910f428874e6a6e2922ce783b5ab Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 10:59:56 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 086/150] Update 02.usfm --- 57-TIT/02.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/57-TIT/02.usfm b/57-TIT/02.usfm index 7860f824..45d7596a 100644 --- a/57-TIT/02.usfm +++ b/57-TIT/02.usfm @@ -6,8 +6,8 @@ \s5 \v 3 Older women likewise should always present themselves as reverent, not gossips. They should not be enslaved to much wine. They should teach what is good -\v 4 in order to call the younger women to be balanced in their thinking. They should encourage them to love their own husbands and children, to be sensible, -\v 5 pure, good housekeepers, and to obey their own husbands, so that God's word may not be condemned. +\v 4 in order to train the younger women to sensibly love their own husbands and children. +\v 5 They should train them to be sensible, pure, good housekeepers, and obedient to their own husbands. They should do these things so that God's word may not be insulted. \s5 \v 6 In the same way, call the younger men to be sensible. From 51ac03fa5847a1aeabf8e3f5ffbb7e012af81f3f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 11:25:00 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 087/150] V13, 14 rewrite --- 42-MRK/11.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/11.usfm b/42-MRK/11.usfm index 4fe7fc5b..fcff0695 100644 --- a/42-MRK/11.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/11.usfm @@ -25,8 +25,8 @@ \v 12 The next day, when they returned from Bethany, he was hungry. \s5 -\v 13 He saw a fig tree off in a distance that was showing leaves, so he went to see if he could find any fruit on it. When he came to it, he found nothing but leaves, for it was not the season for figs. -\v 14 He spoke to it, "No one will ever eat fruit from you." His disciples heard what he said. +\v 13 And seeing a fig tree that had leaves from far away, he went to see if he would find anything on it. And when he came to it, he found nothing but leaves, for it was not the season for figs. +\v 14 He spoke to it, "No one will ever eat fruit from you again." And his disciples heard it. \s5 \p From 1c82a1f7e3a06b1822652eb147743a1874ab9fa3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 11:32:27 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 088/150] V15 rewrite --- 42-MRK/11.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/11.usfm b/42-MRK/11.usfm index fcff0695..9b3a8e1b 100644 --- a/42-MRK/11.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/11.usfm @@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ \s5 \p -\v 15 They came to Jerusalem, and he entered the temple area and began to cast out the sellers and the purchasers in the temple. He turned over the tables of the money changers and the seats of those who sold pigeons. +\v 15 They came to Jerusalem, and he entered the temple and began to cast out the sellers and the buyers in the temple. He turned over the tables of the money changers and the seats of those who sold pigeons. \v 16 He did not allow anyone to carry anything through the temple that could be sold. \s5 From 3ca6403fad08ac6409d92958b0e1f8abf3e4b595 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 11:52:08 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 090/150] Update 02.usfm --- 57-TIT/02.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/57-TIT/02.usfm b/57-TIT/02.usfm index 45d7596a..77abeb1b 100644 --- a/57-TIT/02.usfm +++ b/57-TIT/02.usfm @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ \v 5 They should train them to be sensible, pure, good housekeepers, and obedient to their own husbands. They should do these things so that God's word may not be insulted. \s5 -\v 6 In the same way, call the younger men to be sensible. +\v 6 In the same way, encourage the younger men to be sensible. \v 7 In all ways present yourself as a model of good works; and when you teach, show integrity and dignity. \v 8 Speak a message that is healthy and blameless, so that anyone who is opposed may be put to shame, because he has nothing bad to say about us. From c2ec5933e8194ab86e2d8c5b7cdc77c16627680d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 11:58:05 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 091/150] V18-19 rewrite --- 42-MRK/11.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/11.usfm b/42-MRK/11.usfm index 9b3a8e1b..4d83e0b9 100644 --- a/42-MRK/11.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/11.usfm @@ -39,8 +39,8 @@ \q But you have made it a den of robbers." \m -\v 18 The chief priests and the scribes heard what he had said, and they were trying to kill him. For they feared him because the entire crowd was amazed at his teaching. -\v 19 Every evening they left the city. +\v 18 The chief priests and the scribes heard what he had said, and they looked for a way to kill him. For they feared him because the entire crowd was amazed at his teaching. +\v 19 And whenever evening came, they left the city. \s5 \p From 12e96334be8fe8fcd3c1ffef62ea0e2c7891caa8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 12:32:59 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 092/150] V23 rewrite --- 42-MRK/11.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/11.usfm b/42-MRK/11.usfm index 4d83e0b9..1d520876 100644 --- a/42-MRK/11.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/11.usfm @@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ \s5 \v 22 Jesus answered them, "Have faith in God. -\v 23 Truly I say to you, whoever says to this mountain, 'May God lift you up and cast you into the sea,' and if he does not doubt in his heart but believes that what he said will happen, that is what God will do. +\v 23 Truly I say to you that whoever says to this mountain, 'May God lift you up and cast you into the sea,' and if he does not doubt in his heart but believes that what he said will happen, that is what God will do. \s5 \v 24 Therefore I say to you, Everything for which you ask in prayer, believe that you received it, and it will be yours. From 5aa7dceb805d65306fa5cef872b9d27697e1c403 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 12:40:50 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 093/150] V24-25 rewrite --- 42-MRK/11.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/11.usfm b/42-MRK/11.usfm index 1d520876..33d3bdeb 100644 --- a/42-MRK/11.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/11.usfm @@ -52,8 +52,8 @@ \v 23 Truly I say to you that whoever says to this mountain, 'May God lift you up and cast you into the sea,' and if he does not doubt in his heart but believes that what he said will happen, that is what God will do. \s5 -\v 24 Therefore I say to you, Everything for which you ask in prayer, believe that you received it, and it will be yours. -\v 25 When you stand and pray, you must forgive whatever you have against anyone, so that your Father who is in heaven will also forgive you your transgressions. +\v 24 Therefore I say to you: Everything you pray and ask for, believe that you received it, and it will be yours. +\v 25 When you stand and pray, you must forgive whatever you have against anyone, so that your Father who is in heaven will also forgive you your transgressions." \v 26 \f + \ft The best ancient copies omit this verse (see Mt. 6:15). Mk. 11:26 \fqa But if you do not forgive, neither will your Father who is in heaven forgive your sins. \f* From 50ae832f1869d45ecde89e55a486709473d98248 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 12:46:37 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 094/150] V28 split in two questions --- 42-MRK/11.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/11.usfm b/42-MRK/11.usfm index 33d3bdeb..cc71538b 100644 --- a/42-MRK/11.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/11.usfm @@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ \s5 \p \v 27 They came to Jerusalem again. As Jesus was walking in the temple, the chief priests, the scribes, and the elders came to him. -\v 28 They said to him, "By what authority do you do these things, and who gave you the authority to do them?" +\v 28 They said to him, "By what authority do you do these things? And who gave you the authority to do them?" \s5 \v 29 Jesus said to them, "I will ask you one question. Tell me and I will tell you by what authority I do these things. From ee983d62b538606e29808fe54e907fbb35a9ee28 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 12:55:23 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 095/150] Update 02.usfm --- 57-TIT/02.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/57-TIT/02.usfm b/57-TIT/02.usfm index 77abeb1b..912b8673 100644 --- a/57-TIT/02.usfm +++ b/57-TIT/02.usfm @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ \s5 \v 9 Slaves are to obey their masters in all things. They are to please them and not argue with them. -\v 10 They should not pilfer. Instead, they should show all good faith, so that in every way they adorn make our teaching about God our savior. +\v 10 They should not pilfer. Instead, they should show all good faith, so that in every way they adorn our teaching about God our savior. \s5 \v 11 For the grace of God has appeared to all people. From b81427b5af0bc05b4f4e840b9e34a9d927df154b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 13:14:38 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 096/150] V13 rewrite --- 42-MRK/12.usfm | 8 +++----- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/12.usfm b/42-MRK/12.usfm index 6c11d1b4..b8df5bfb 100644 --- a/42-MRK/12.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/12.usfm @@ -1,5 +1,3 @@ - - \s5 \c 12 \p @@ -10,6 +8,7 @@ \s5 \v 4 Again he sent to them another servant, and they wounded him in the head and treated him shamefully. \v 5 He sent yet another, and this one they killed. They treated many others in the same way, beating some and and killing others. + \s5 \v 6 He had still one more person to send, a beloved son. He was the last one he sent to them. He said, "They will respect my son." \v 7 But the tenants said to one another, "This is the heir. Come, let us kill him, and the inheritance will be ours." @@ -27,9 +26,10 @@ \q and it is marvelous in our eyes.'" \m \v 12 They sought to arrest Jesus, but they feared the crowd, for they knew that he has spoken this parable against them. So they left him and went away. + \s5 \p -\v 13 Then they sent to him some of the Pharisees and some of the Herodians, to entrap him in speaking. +\v 13 Then they sent some of the Pharisees and the Herodians to him to trap him in a word. \v 14 When they came, they said to him, "Teacher, we know that you care for no one's opinion, and you do not show partiality between people. You truly teach the way of God. Is it lawful to pay taxes to Caesar or not? Should we pay or not?" \v 15 But Jesus knew their hypocrisy and said to them, "Why do you test me? Bring me a denarius so I can look at it." @@ -92,5 +92,3 @@ \s5 \v 43 Jesus called his disciples together and said to them, "Truly I say to you, this poor widow has put in more than all of them who contributed to the offering box. \v 44 All of these gave out of their abundance. But this widow, out of her poverty, put in all of the money which she had to live on. " - - From b9661426653aed7eab8aa63be510e69195ea88ef Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 13:23:51 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 097/150] V18 rewrote --- 42-MRK/12.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/12.usfm b/42-MRK/12.usfm index b8df5bfb..fa862592 100644 --- a/42-MRK/12.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/12.usfm @@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ \s5 \p -\v 18 Then Sadducees came to him, they who say that there is no resurrection. They asked him, saying, +\v 18 Then Sadducees, who say there is no resurrection, came to him. They asked him, saying, \v 19 "Teacher, Moses wrote for us, 'If a man's brother dies and leaves a wife behind him, but no child, the man should take the brother's wife, and have a child for his brother.' \s5 From c3a22f7bda421e8b4e79d2c743ccb478470d9e73 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 13:43:38 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 098/150] V25, 26 rewrite --- 42-MRK/12.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/12.usfm b/42-MRK/12.usfm index fa862592..c3ae86b6 100644 --- a/42-MRK/12.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/12.usfm @@ -50,10 +50,10 @@ \s5 \v 24 Jesus said, "Is this not the reason you are mistaken, because you do not know the scriptures nor the power of God? -\v 25 For when they rise from the dead, they neither marry nor be given in marriage, but they are like angels in heaven. +\v 25 For when they rise from the dead, they neither marry nor are given in marriage, but they are like angels in heaven. \s5 -\v 26 But concerning the dead, that they are raised, have you not read in The Book of Moses, in the account about the bush, how God spoke to him and said, 'I am the God of Abraham, the God of Isaac, and the God of Jacob?'" +\v 26 But concerning the dead that are raised, have you not read in The Book of Moses, in the account about the bush, how God spoke to him and said, 'I am the God of Abraham and the God of Isaac and the God of Jacob'? \v 27 He is not the God of the dead, but of the living. You are quite mistaken." \s5 From 3c736cc7096b32240976e29337cf46800d7f20e1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 15:16:46 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 099/150] Update 03.usfm --- 57-TIT/03.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/57-TIT/03.usfm b/57-TIT/03.usfm index 49da99f7..347d3513 100644 --- a/57-TIT/03.usfm +++ b/57-TIT/03.usfm @@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ \s5 \v 4 But when the kindness of God our savior and his love toward mankind appeared, -\v 5 it was not by works of righteousness that we did, but by his mercy that he saved us. He did so through the washing of new birth and renewal by the Holy Spirit. +\v 5 it was not by works of righteousness that we did, but by his mercy that he saved us. He saved us through the washing of new birth and renewal by the Holy Spirit. \s5 \v 6 God richly poured the Holy Spirit on us through our Savior Jesus Christ From 87bb0039fc9b7c1acc436c4dbce76c066d53cb75 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 15:30:33 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 100/150] Update 03.usfm --- 57-TIT/03.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/57-TIT/03.usfm b/57-TIT/03.usfm index 347d3513..af1f9a92 100644 --- a/57-TIT/03.usfm +++ b/57-TIT/03.usfm @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ \v 3 For once we ourselves were thoughtless and disobedient. We were led astray and enslaved by various passions and pleasures. We lived in evil and envy. We were detestable and hated one another. \s5 -\v 4 But when the kindness of God our savior and his love toward mankind appeared, +\v 4 But when the kindness of God our savior and his love for mankind appeared, \v 5 it was not by works of righteousness that we did, but by his mercy that he saved us. He saved us through the washing of new birth and renewal by the Holy Spirit. \s5 From 1cb3fe0fef42ac3d191443b3c09577e0986f513d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 15:55:59 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 101/150] Update 03.usfm --- 57-TIT/03.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/57-TIT/03.usfm b/57-TIT/03.usfm index af1f9a92..7b3a6b68 100644 --- a/57-TIT/03.usfm +++ b/57-TIT/03.usfm @@ -12,8 +12,8 @@ \v 5 it was not by works of righteousness that we did, but by his mercy that he saved us. He saved us through the washing of new birth and renewal by the Holy Spirit. \s5 -\v 6 God richly poured the Holy Spirit on us through our Savior Jesus Christ -\v 7 so that, having been justified by his grace, we became participants in the confidence of eternal life. +\v 6 God richly poured the Holy Spirit on us through our Savior Jesus Christ. +\v 7 He did this in order that, having been justified by his grace, we might become participants in the confidence of eternal life. \s5 \v 8 This message is trustworthy. I want you to speak confidently about these things, so that those who trust God may set their minds on the good works that he put before them. These things are good and profitable for all people. From 87685ec3df48c3e005a8fcae1300e88f669e8f67 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 16:14:26 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 102/150] V35, 37 rewrite --- 42-MRK/12.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/12.usfm b/42-MRK/12.usfm index c3ae86b6..30ff738c 100644 --- a/42-MRK/12.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/12.usfm @@ -70,13 +70,13 @@ \s5 \p -\v 35 Jesus was teaching in the temple, and he responded to them and said, "How is it that the scribes say the Christ is the son of David? +\v 35 And Jesus responded, while he was teaching in the temple, he said, "How is it that the scribes say the Christ is the son of David? \v 36 David himself, in the Holy Spirit, said, \q 'The Lord said to my Lord, \q sit at my right hand, \q until I make your enemies your footstool.' \m -\v 37 David himself calls the Christ 'Lord', so how is he David's son?" The great crowd listened to him with gladness. +\v 37 David himself calls the Christ 'Lord', so how is he David's son?" The great crowd gladly listened to him. \s5 \p From a325bd5b65c7a2f012ad817b9910d2ea50bbd2b1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 16:36:51 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 103/150] V38 delete "special" --- 42-MRK/12.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/12.usfm b/42-MRK/12.usfm index 30ff738c..f55b7509 100644 --- a/42-MRK/12.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/12.usfm @@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ \s5 \p -\v 38 In his teaching Jesus said, "Beware of the scribes, who desire to walk in long robes and special greetings in the marketplaces +\v 38 In his teaching Jesus said, "Beware of the scribes, who desire to walk in long robes and greetings in the marketplaces \v 39 and chief seats in the synagogues and chief places at feasts. \v 40 They also devour widows' houses, and they pray long prayers for people to see. These will receive greater condemnation." From df314e9fd45295aead1a7eda2559ea7d2cbbdb64 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 15:42:27 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 104/150] colon instead of semicolon before a listing --- 42-MRK/10.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/10.usfm b/42-MRK/10.usfm index 9d1e563e..7aee0b5f 100644 --- a/42-MRK/10.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/10.usfm @@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ \s5 \v 29 Jesus said, "Truly I say to you, there is no one who has left house, or brothers, or sisters, or mother, or father, or children, or lands, for my sake, and for the gospel, -\v 30 who will not receive a hundred times as much now in this world; houses, and brothers, and sisters, and mothers, and children, and lands, with persecutions, and in the world to come, eternal life. +\v 30 who will not receive a hundred times as much now in this world: houses, and brothers, and sisters, and mothers, and children, and lands, with persecutions, and in the world to come, eternal life. \v 31 But many who are first will be last, and the last first." \s5 From c2fc45661911ef0d2821208329783a2583b70ee5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 17:09:04 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 105/150] Update 03.usfm --- 57-TIT/03.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/57-TIT/03.usfm b/57-TIT/03.usfm index 7b3a6b68..1771adb6 100644 --- a/57-TIT/03.usfm +++ b/57-TIT/03.usfm @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ \v 7 He did this in order that, having been justified by his grace, we might become participants in the confidence of eternal life. \s5 -\v 8 This message is trustworthy. I want you to speak confidently about these things, so that those who trust God may set their minds on the good works that he put before them. These things are good and profitable for all people. +\v 8 This message is trustworthy. I want you to speak confidently about these things, so that those who trust God may be intent on the good works that he put before them. These things are good and profitable for all people. \s5 \v 9 But avoid foolish debates and genealogies and strife and conflict about the law. For these things are worthless and unprofitable. From e0ced68ee75c13217fcbb77b953cef41419eefbe Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: BramvandenHeuvel Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 17:27:18 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 106/150] V43-44 rewrite --- 42-MRK/12.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/12.usfm b/42-MRK/12.usfm index f55b7509..d3b0079d 100644 --- a/42-MRK/12.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/12.usfm @@ -90,5 +90,5 @@ \v 42 Then a poor widow came and put in two mites, worth about a penny. \s5 -\v 43 Jesus called his disciples together and said to them, "Truly I say to you, this poor widow has put in more than all of them who contributed to the offering box. -\v 44 All of these gave out of their abundance. But this widow, out of her poverty, put in all of the money which she had to live on. " +\v 43 And he called his disciples and said to them, "Truly I say to you, this poor widow has put in more than all of them who contributed to the offering box. +\v 44 For all of them gave out of their abundance. But this widow, out of her poverty, put in all of the money which she had to live on. " From ef2e87cca7c33c011657ab2ae728406bdeb425e1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 18:14:47 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 107/150] Update 03.usfm --- 57-TIT/03.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/57-TIT/03.usfm b/57-TIT/03.usfm index 1771adb6..ba343cf6 100644 --- a/57-TIT/03.usfm +++ b/57-TIT/03.usfm @@ -20,8 +20,8 @@ \s5 \v 9 But avoid foolish debates and genealogies and strife and conflict about the law. For these things are worthless and unprofitable. -\v 10 Reject anyone who is causing divisions among you after one or two warnings. -\v 11 You know that such a person has turned from the right way and is sinning. He condemns himself. +\v 10 After one or two warning, reject anyone who is causing divisions among you. +\v 11 You know that such a person has turned from the right way and is sinning. He is condemning himself. \s5 \p From 19f2ec75fb712633379489d99dde1fe42ba69843 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 18:40:22 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 108/150] Update 01.usfm --- 58-PHM/01.usfm | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/58-PHM/01.usfm b/58-PHM/01.usfm index 17c6bfd4..7184631e 100644 --- a/58-PHM/01.usfm +++ b/58-PHM/01.usfm @@ -2,16 +2,16 @@ \s5 \c 1 \p -\v 1 I, Paul, a prisoner of Christ Jesus, and Timothy our brother, are writing to Philemon our dear friend and fellow worker, +\v 1 Paul, a prisoner of Christ Jesus, and the brother Timothy to Philemon, our dear friend and fellow worker, \v 2 and to Apphia our sister, and to Archippus our fellow soldier, and to the church that meets in your home: \v 3 Grace to you and peace from God our Father and the Lord Jesus Christ. \b \s5 \p -\v 4 I thank my God always, making mention of you in my prayers, -\v 5 hearing of the faith that you have in the Lord Jesus and of your love for all the believers. -\v 6 I pray that the active sharing of your faith may help you grow in the knowledge of everything good that belongs to us in Christ. +\v 4 I always thank my God. I mention you in my prayers. +\v 5 I have heard of the love and the faith that you have in the Lord Jesus and for all the believers. +\v 6 I pray that the sharing of your faith may help you grow in the knowledge of everything good that belongs to us in Christ. \v 7 For your love has given me much joy and comfort, because you, brother, refreshed the hearts of the believers. \s5 From 8175d18aebf4134a8eae3b2ae459c8154192826f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 20:07:04 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 109/150] Update 01.usfm --- 58-PHM/01.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/58-PHM/01.usfm b/58-PHM/01.usfm index 7184631e..a74fabd4 100644 --- a/58-PHM/01.usfm +++ b/58-PHM/01.usfm @@ -11,8 +11,8 @@ \p \v 4 I always thank my God. I mention you in my prayers. \v 5 I have heard of the love and the faith that you have in the Lord Jesus and for all the believers. -\v 6 I pray that the sharing of your faith may help you grow in the knowledge of everything good that belongs to us in Christ. -\v 7 For your love has given me much joy and comfort, because you, brother, refreshed the hearts of the believers. +\v 6 I pray that the fellowship of your faith may be effective for the knowledge of everything good that is among us in Christ. +\v 7 For I have had much joy and comfort because of your love, because the hearts of the believers have been rested by you, brother. \s5 \p From 5114d74e9af490335ff1b1c3aa060a0651e2cc90 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 21:20:13 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 110/150] Update 01.usfm --- 58-PHM/01.usfm | 10 +++++----- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/58-PHM/01.usfm b/58-PHM/01.usfm index a74fabd4..c08e176c 100644 --- a/58-PHM/01.usfm +++ b/58-PHM/01.usfm @@ -20,15 +20,15 @@ \v 9 yet because of love, I appeal to you instead—I, Paul, an old man, and now a prisoner for Christ Jesus— \s5 -\v 10 I ask you concerning my child Onesimus, whom I have fathered in my bonds. +\v 10 I am asking you concerning my child Onesimus, whom I have fathered in my chains. \v 11 For he once was unprofitable to you, but now is profitable both to you and to me. -\v 12 I have sent him—who is my very heart—back to you. +\v 12 I have sent him—he who is my very heart—back to you. \v 13 I wish I could have kept him with me, so he could serve me in your place, while I am in chains for the sake of the gospel. \s5 -\v 14 But I did not want to do anything without your consent, so any good deed would not be done because I forced you, but because you wanted to do it. -\v 15 Perhaps the reason he was separated from you for a while, was so you might have him back forever— -\v 16 no longer as a slave, but better than a slave, as a beloved brother— especially to me, and how much more so to you, both in human terms and in the Lord. +\v 14 But I did not want to do anything without your consent. I did this so that any good deed would not be done because I forced you, but because you wanted to do it. +\v 15 Perhaps the reason he was separated from you for a time, was so you might have him back forever. +\v 16 So that he would no longer as a slave, but better than a slave, as a beloved brother— especially to me, and much more so to you, both in human terms and in the Lord. \s5 \v 17 And so if you regard me a partner, receive him as you would receive me. From 6f273fe8a33bb9119c132d3f21655d837aad5137 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 21:22:14 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 111/150] Update 01.usfm --- 58-PHM/01.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/58-PHM/01.usfm b/58-PHM/01.usfm index c08e176c..818cb44d 100644 --- a/58-PHM/01.usfm +++ b/58-PHM/01.usfm @@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ \s5 \v 14 But I did not want to do anything without your consent. I did this so that any good deed would not be done because I forced you, but because you wanted to do it. \v 15 Perhaps the reason he was separated from you for a time, was so you might have him back forever. -\v 16 So that he would no longer as a slave, but better than a slave, as a beloved brother— especially to me, and much more so to you, both in human terms and in the Lord. +\v 16 So that he would no longer as a slave, but better than a slave, as a beloved brother— especially to me, and much more so to you, in both the flesh and in the Lord. \s5 \v 17 And so if you regard me a partner, receive him as you would receive me. From d3eb85b062526718037ee1d307a44d6e62d2ac12 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 21:24:13 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 112/150] Update 01.usfm --- 58-PHM/01.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/58-PHM/01.usfm b/58-PHM/01.usfm index 818cb44d..4987b821 100644 --- a/58-PHM/01.usfm +++ b/58-PHM/01.usfm @@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ \s5 \p \v 8 Therefore, although I have all the boldness in Christ to command you to do what you should do, -\v 9 yet because of love, I appeal to you instead—I, Paul, an old man, and now a prisoner for Christ Jesus— +\v 9 yet because of love, I appeal to you instead—I, Paul, an old man, and now a prisoner for Christ Jesus. \s5 \v 10 I am asking you concerning my child Onesimus, whom I have fathered in my chains. From fb30d844442424c1a41caf552c021b8a38573cf9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2016 21:53:43 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 113/150] difficult punctuation modifications --- 42-MRK/11.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/11.usfm b/42-MRK/11.usfm index cc71538b..4abc2ec2 100644 --- a/42-MRK/11.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/11.usfm @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ \p \v 1 Now as they came to Jerusalem, they were close to Bethphage and Bethany, at the Mount of Olives, and Jesus sent out two of his disciples \v 2 and said to them, "Go into the village opposite us. As soon as you enter it, you will find a colt that has never been ridden. Untie it and bring it to me. -\v 3 And if anyone says to you, 'Why are you doing this?' you should say, 'The Lord has need of it and will immediately send it back here.'" +\v 3 And if anyone says to you, 'Why are you doing this'?, you should say, 'The Lord has need of it and will immediately send it back here.' " \s5 \v 4 They went away and found a colt tied at a door outside on the open street, and they untied it. From 199aaa02c8e2ccfe1547112acf3d4b39854f2a7e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Fri, 10 Jun 2016 08:54:31 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 114/150] typo place should be "placed" Fixed --- 44-JHN/19.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/44-JHN/19.usfm b/44-JHN/19.usfm index f95b11e1..3170628e 100644 --- a/44-JHN/19.usfm +++ b/44-JHN/19.usfm @@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ \s5 \p \v 28 After this Jesus, because he knew that all things are now finished, in order to make the scriptures come true, said, "I am thirsty." -\v 29 A container full of sour wine had been place there, so they put a sponge full of the sour wine on a hyssop staff and lifted it up to his mouth. +\v 29 A container full of sour wine had been placed there, so they put a sponge full of the sour wine on a hyssop staff and lifted it up to his mouth. \v 30 When Jesus had taken the vinegar, he said, "It is finished." He bowed his head and gave up his spirit. \s5 From c98f9137e6836e54d156ae1746bde1bff0c90560 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Fri, 10 Jun 2016 09:29:32 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 115/150] Changes --- 44-JHN/19.usfm | 2 +- 45-ACT/04.usfm | 2 +- 2 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/44-JHN/19.usfm b/44-JHN/19.usfm index 3170628e..4382bcdc 100644 --- a/44-JHN/19.usfm +++ b/44-JHN/19.usfm @@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ \s5 \p -\v 17 Then they took Jesus, and he went out, carrying the cross for himself, to the place called The Place of a Skull, which in Hebrew is called Golgotha. +\v 17 Then they took Jesus, and he went out, carrying the cross for himself, to the place called The Place of a Skull, which in Hebrew is called Golgotha. \v 18 They crucified Jesus there, and with him two other men, one on each side, with Jesus in the middle. \s5 diff --git a/45-ACT/04.usfm b/45-ACT/04.usfm index c252581c..32869636 100644 --- a/45-ACT/04.usfm +++ b/45-ACT/04.usfm @@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ \s5 \p -\v 36 Joseph, a Levite, a man from Cyprus, was given the name Barnabas by the apostles. (that is, being interpreted, son of encouragement). +\v 36 Joseph, a Levite, a man from Cyprus, was given the name Barnabas by the apostles (that is, being interpreted, son of encouragement). \v 37 Having a field, he sold it and brought the money and laid it at the apostles' feet. From 1a6f53cba6a35e394391db00405c992892484fb0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Fri, 10 Jun 2016 09:45:39 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 116/150] servant a description not a title --- 45-ACT/04.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/45-ACT/04.usfm b/45-ACT/04.usfm index 32869636..6e88a907 100644 --- a/45-ACT/04.usfm +++ b/45-ACT/04.usfm @@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ \m \s5 -\v 27 Indeed, both Herod and Pontius Pilate, together with the Gentiles and the people of Israel, gathered together in this city against your holy Servant Jesus, whom you anointed. +\v 27 Indeed, both Herod and Pontius Pilate, together with the Gentiles and the people of Israel, gathered together in this city against your holy servant Jesus, whom you anointed. \v 28 They gathered together to do all that your hand and your desire decided in advance would happen. \s5 From 82c3653d74053961b9a52f5cc4d39d7ed2a5a8f7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 10 Jun 2016 11:36:59 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 117/150] Update 03.usfm --- 50-EPH/03.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/50-EPH/03.usfm b/50-EPH/03.usfm index 45f64503..85dac10f 100644 --- a/50-EPH/03.usfm +++ b/50-EPH/03.usfm @@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ \v 7 For this I became a servant by the gift of God's grace given to me through the working of his power. \s5 -\v 8 God gave this gift to me, although I am less than the lowest of those set apart for God. This gift is that I should proclaim to the Gentiles the gospel of the infinite riches of Christ. +\v 8 God gave this gift to me, although I am less than the lowest of those set apart for God. This gift is that I should proclaim to the Gentiles the gospel of the unsearchable riches of Christ. \v 9 I should bring everyone into the light and tell them about God's secret plan. This is the plan that God, who created all things, had hidden for ages in the past. \s5 From 978336d0af63860476edd49c3bcfe66efcddfa7f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Hanker10 Date: Fri, 10 Jun 2016 11:44:33 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 118/150] John 1:17 changed punctuation John 1:17 changed punctuation to reflect the contrast between the two (now independent) clauses. --- 44-JHN/01.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/44-JHN/01.usfm b/44-JHN/01.usfm index 7c46f077..a3867b10 100644 --- a/44-JHN/01.usfm +++ b/44-JHN/01.usfm @@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ \s5 \v 16 For from his fullness we have all received free gift after free gift. -\v 17 For the law was given through Moses, and grace and truth came through Jesus Christ. +\v 17 For the law was given through Moses. Grace and truth came through Jesus Christ. \v 18 No man has seen God at any time. The one and only person, himself God, who is in the bosom of the Father, he has made him known. \s5 From c6064764f127534e2544989f04a0bd3845e59f9a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 10 Jun 2016 11:47:58 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 119/150] Update 03.usfm --- 50-EPH/03.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/50-EPH/03.usfm b/50-EPH/03.usfm index 85dac10f..1569c1e9 100644 --- a/50-EPH/03.usfm +++ b/50-EPH/03.usfm @@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ \v 7 For this I became a servant by the gift of God's grace given to me through the working of his power. \s5 -\v 8 God gave this gift to me, although I am less than the lowest of those set apart for God. This gift is that I should proclaim to the Gentiles the gospel of the unsearchable riches of Christ. +\v 8 God gave this gift to me, although I am the smallest of those set apart for God. This gift is that I should proclaim to the Gentiles the gospel of the unsearchable riches of Christ. \v 9 I should bring everyone into the light and tell them about God's secret plan. This is the plan that God, who created all things, had hidden for ages in the past. \s5 From 63dbd5220c4ee13eb2daa7e1f5d4248a0bed1de1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Hanker10 Date: Fri, 10 Jun 2016 11:56:04 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 120/150] John 1:19 took out comma after "testimony" John 1:19 took out comma after "testimony" --- 44-JHN/01.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/44-JHN/01.usfm b/44-JHN/01.usfm index a3867b10..a9f72b8a 100644 --- a/44-JHN/01.usfm +++ b/44-JHN/01.usfm @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ \s5 \p -\v 19 Now this is John's testimony, when the Jews sent to him from Jerusalem priests and Levites to ask him, "Who are you?" +\v 19 Now this is John's testimony when the Jews sent to him from Jerusalem priests and Levites to ask him, "Who are you?" \v 20 He freely stated, and did not deny, but replied, "I am not the Christ." \v 21 So they asked him, "What are you then? Are you Elijah?" He said, "I am not." They said, "Are you the prophet?" He answered, "No." From 29f15a4d9a37e881e0c855fb7b7eb296bbb3a250 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 10 Jun 2016 12:04:38 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 121/150] Update 03.usfm --- 50-EPH/03.usfm | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/50-EPH/03.usfm b/50-EPH/03.usfm index 1569c1e9..b92ca9ba 100644 --- a/50-EPH/03.usfm +++ b/50-EPH/03.usfm @@ -18,11 +18,11 @@ \s5 \v 8 God gave this gift to me, although I am the smallest of those set apart for God. This gift is that I should proclaim to the Gentiles the gospel of the unsearchable riches of Christ. -\v 9 I should bring everyone into the light and tell them about God's secret plan. This is the plan that God, who created all things, had hidden for ages in the past. +\v 9 I should enlighten all people about what is God's secret plan. This is the plan that had been hidden for ages in the past by God, who created all things. \s5 -\v 10 The purpose for bringing everyone into the light was that, through the church, the rulers and authorities in the heavenly places would come to know the many-sided nature of the wisdom of God. -\v 11 This will be according to the eternal plan that he accomplished in Christ Jesus our Lord. +\v 10 This was so that, through the church, the rulers and authorities in the heavenly places would come to know the many-sided nature of the wisdom of God. +\v 11 This will happen according to the eternal plan that he accomplished in Christ Jesus our Lord. \s5 \v 12 For in Christ we have boldness and access with confidence because of our faith in him. From 223b9863e2d75550b8e05c023c15e19dcb851543 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hmw3 Date: Fri, 10 Jun 2016 13:54:43 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 122/150] Added comma to Gal 2:3 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit The Greek doesn’t seem to distinguish between restrictive and non-restrictive clauses, at least not with commas, but this has to be non-restrictive (see NIV, ESV, NET), so a comma is called for, even if absent in Greek. --- 49-GAL/02.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/49-GAL/02.usfm b/49-GAL/02.usfm index b1158b18..94d53537 100644 --- a/49-GAL/02.usfm +++ b/49-GAL/02.usfm @@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ \v 2 I went up because God revealed to me that I should go. I put before them the gospel that I proclaim among the Gentiles. (But I spoke privately to those who seemed to be important leaders). I did this to make sure that I was not running, or had run, for nothing. \s5 -\v 3 But not even Titus who was with me, who was a Greek, was forced to be circumcised. +\v 3 But not even Titus, who was with me, who was a Greek, was forced to be circumcised. \v 4 This was in spite of the false brothers who had been sent in secretly to spy on the liberty that we have in Christ Jesus. They desired to make us slaves to the law. \v 5 We did not yield in submission to them for even an hour, in order that the truth of the gospel might remain unchanged for you. From b76944cf0ed342eb9b9737f6c37e7d489f66b7ca Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Fri, 10 Jun 2016 13:11:07 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 123/150] changed to what the Greek says The verbs are aorist passive, and the subject is not "God." The word "God" is not there. Translated as imperative to avoid the passive for MTTs. --- 42-MRK/11.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/11.usfm b/42-MRK/11.usfm index 4abc2ec2..a283fcea 100644 --- a/42-MRK/11.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/11.usfm @@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ \s5 \v 22 Jesus answered them, "Have faith in God. -\v 23 Truly I say to you that whoever says to this mountain, 'May God lift you up and cast you into the sea,' and if he does not doubt in his heart but believes that what he said will happen, that is what God will do. +\v 23 Truly I say to you that whoever says to this mountain, 'Get up and cast yourself into the sea,' and if he does not doubt in his heart but believes that what he said will happen, that is what God will do. \s5 \v 24 Therefore I say to you: Everything you pray and ask for, believe that you received it, and it will be yours. From 25be317946dd3609390db65773d3aa9248966387 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Fri, 10 Jun 2016 14:56:11 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 124/150] forgiven men not forgive to men --- 41-MAT/12.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/41-MAT/12.usfm b/41-MAT/12.usfm index 69edce08..8cbee190 100644 --- a/41-MAT/12.usfm +++ b/41-MAT/12.usfm @@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ \v 30 The one who is not with me is against me, and the one who does not gather with me scatters. \s5 -\v 31 Therefore I say to you, every sin and blasphemy will be forgiven to men, but the blasphemy against the Spirit will not be forgiven. +\v 31 Therefore I say to you, every sin and blasphemy will be forgiven men, but the blasphemy against the Spirit will not be forgiven. \v 32 And whoever speaks any word against the Son of Man, that will be forgiven him. But whoever speaks against the Holy Spirit, that will not be forgiven him, neither in this world, nor in that which is to come. \s5 From e999865e0c7bc2c887ced029e7a7924556e21a2c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Fri, 10 Jun 2016 14:58:56 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 125/150] Not Nor, but Or --- 41-MAT/16.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/41-MAT/16.usfm b/41-MAT/16.usfm index 810b5d00..0191ba57 100644 --- a/41-MAT/16.usfm +++ b/41-MAT/16.usfm @@ -18,8 +18,8 @@ \v 8 Jesus was aware of this and said, "You of little faith, why do you reason among yourselves and say that it is because you have taken no bread? \s5 -\v 9 Do you not yet perceive nor remember the five loaves for the five thousand, and how many baskets you gathered up? -\v 10 Nor the seven loaves for the four thousand, and how many baskets you took up? +\v 9 Do you not yet perceive or remember the five loaves for the five thousand, and how many baskets you gathered up? +\v 10 Or the seven loaves for the four thousand, and how many baskets you took up? \s5 \v 11 How is it that you do not understand that I was not speaking to you about bread? Take heed and beware of the yeast of the Pharisees and Sadducees." From e3a521f0608b448af241dbeb01022ef29e263c18 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Fri, 10 Jun 2016 15:01:29 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 126/150] warnings --- 57-TIT/03.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/57-TIT/03.usfm b/57-TIT/03.usfm index ba343cf6..31bd4646 100644 --- a/57-TIT/03.usfm +++ b/57-TIT/03.usfm @@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ \s5 \v 9 But avoid foolish debates and genealogies and strife and conflict about the law. For these things are worthless and unprofitable. -\v 10 After one or two warning, reject anyone who is causing divisions among you. +\v 10 After one or two warnings, reject anyone who is causing divisions among you. \v 11 You know that such a person has turned from the right way and is sinning. He is condemning himself. \s5 From ab07a857ca01214abdf75fdfa2be42a791c69259 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Fri, 10 Jun 2016 15:08:53 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 127/150] Who sneaked in --- 49-GAL/02.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/49-GAL/02.usfm b/49-GAL/02.usfm index 94d53537..262d7e9d 100644 --- a/49-GAL/02.usfm +++ b/49-GAL/02.usfm @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ \s5 \v 3 But not even Titus, who was with me, who was a Greek, was forced to be circumcised. -\v 4 This was in spite of the false brothers who had been sent in secretly to spy on the liberty that we have in Christ Jesus. They desired to make us slaves to the law. +\v 4 This was in spite of the false brothers who sneaked in to spy on the liberty we have in Christ Jesus. They desired to make us slaves to the law. \v 5 We did not yield in submission to them for even an hour, in order that the truth of the gospel might remain unchanged for you. \s5 From 2e465d765761597601095e9e43ef99f1d7c22e6b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Fri, 10 Jun 2016 15:10:48 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 128/150] save again --- 49-GAL/02.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/49-GAL/02.usfm b/49-GAL/02.usfm index 262d7e9d..0f0794ca 100644 --- a/49-GAL/02.usfm +++ b/49-GAL/02.usfm @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ \s5 \v 3 But not even Titus, who was with me, who was a Greek, was forced to be circumcised. -\v 4 This was in spite of the false brothers who sneaked in to spy on the liberty we have in Christ Jesus. They desired to make us slaves to the law. +\v 4 This matter arose because of the false brothers who came in secretly to spy on the liberty we have in Christ Jesus. They desired to make us slaves to the law. \v 5 We did not yield in submission to them for even an hour, in order that the truth of the gospel might remain unchanged for you. \s5 From 7125d37b358424007d3a80364b9c5084a35491e0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Fri, 10 Jun 2016 14:22:26 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 129/150] "had" is needed here, not "has" --- 42-MRK/12.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/12.usfm b/42-MRK/12.usfm index d3b0079d..8c1def5f 100644 --- a/42-MRK/12.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/12.usfm @@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ \v 11 This was from the Lord, \q and it is marvelous in our eyes.'" \m -\v 12 They sought to arrest Jesus, but they feared the crowd, for they knew that he has spoken this parable against them. So they left him and went away. +\v 12 They sought to arrest Jesus, but they feared the crowd, for they knew that he had spoken this parable against them. So they left him and went away. \s5 \p From 38f8e9a4d3cc652cd6613c596bccd09186f7a3a3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Fri, 10 Jun 2016 14:27:18 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 130/150] "with words" seems much clearer than "in a word" --- 42-MRK/12.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/12.usfm b/42-MRK/12.usfm index 8c1def5f..7ad52809 100644 --- a/42-MRK/12.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/12.usfm @@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ \s5 \p -\v 13 Then they sent some of the Pharisees and the Herodians to him to trap him in a word. +\v 13 Then they sent some of the Pharisees and the Herodians to him to trap him with words. \v 14 When they came, they said to him, "Teacher, we know that you care for no one's opinion, and you do not show partiality between people. You truly teach the way of God. Is it lawful to pay taxes to Caesar or not? Should we pay or not?" \v 15 But Jesus knew their hypocrisy and said to them, "Why do you test me? Bring me a denarius so I can look at it." From f45aa6224f91aff8504734f5ee125ea74c69a6ae Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Fri, 10 Jun 2016 14:34:09 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 131/150] removed unnecessary comma --- 42-MRK/12.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/12.usfm b/42-MRK/12.usfm index 7ad52809..67c339fd 100644 --- a/42-MRK/12.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/12.usfm @@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ \s5 \v 16 They brought one to Jesus. He said to them, "Whose likeness and inscription is this?" They said, "Caesar's." -\v 17 Jesus said, "Give to Caesar the things that are Caesar's, and to God, the things that are God's." They marveled at him. +\v 17 Jesus said, "Give to Caesar the things that are Caesar's, and to God the things that are God's." They marveled at him. \s5 \p From 2395daef2b5480b838b7d043fb827922f774f59e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Fri, 10 Jun 2016 14:42:25 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 132/150] "children" instead of "a child" literally, "seed," referring more to "children" rather than just "child," as the UBS Notes say --- 42-MRK/12.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/12.usfm b/42-MRK/12.usfm index 67c339fd..9aaf0fbd 100644 --- a/42-MRK/12.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/12.usfm @@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ \s5 \p \v 18 Then Sadducees, who say there is no resurrection, came to him. They asked him, saying, -\v 19 "Teacher, Moses wrote for us, 'If a man's brother dies and leaves a wife behind him, but no child, the man should take the brother's wife, and have a child for his brother.' +\v 19 "Teacher, Moses wrote for us, 'If a man's brother dies and leaves a wife behind him, but no child, the man should take the brother's wife, and have children for his brother.' \s5 \v 20 There were seven brothers; the first took a wife and then died, leaving no children. From a0aa84f78f1735e350229effd68625de6e98d85a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Fri, 10 Jun 2016 15:48:27 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 133/150] wording clarified --- 42-MRK/12.usfm | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/12.usfm b/42-MRK/12.usfm index 9aaf0fbd..52fabbcc 100644 --- a/42-MRK/12.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/12.usfm @@ -80,9 +80,9 @@ \s5 \p -\v 38 In his teaching Jesus said, "Beware of the scribes, who desire to walk in long robes and greetings in the marketplaces -\v 39 and chief seats in the synagogues and chief places at feasts. -\v 40 They also devour widows' houses, and they pray long prayers for people to see. These will receive greater condemnation." +\v 38 In his teaching Jesus said, "Beware of the scribes, who desire to walk in long robes and greetings in the marketplaces +\v 39 and have the chief seats in the synagogues and chief places at feasts. +\v 40 They also devour widows' houses, and they pray long prayers for people to see. These men will receive greater condemnation." \s5 \p From c6813d976903a660791aefd5769523b2857c3c63 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Fri, 10 Jun 2016 19:36:48 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 134/150] Update 05.usfm --- 50-EPH/05.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/50-EPH/05.usfm b/50-EPH/05.usfm index da5dd66a..f3315dbf 100644 --- a/50-EPH/05.usfm +++ b/50-EPH/05.usfm @@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ \s5 \v 8 For you were once darkness, but now you are light in the Lord. So walk as children of light. \v 9 For the fruit of the light consists in all goodness, righteousness, and truth. -\v 10 These show what is pleasing to the Lord. +\v 10 Find out what is pleasing to the Lord. \v 11 Have no participation with the unfruitful works of the darkness. Instead, expose them. \v 12 For the things done by them in secret are too shameful even to describe. From ba045a3eea018cde7cfe042246f34ac94a7c8451 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Sat, 11 Jun 2016 08:22:16 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 135/150] removed misplaced "to" --- 42-MRK/13.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/13.usfm b/42-MRK/13.usfm index 9ff1b124..2e663033 100644 --- a/42-MRK/13.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/13.usfm @@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ \s5 \p -\v 14 When you see the abomination of desolation standing where it should not to be standing (let the reader understand), let those who are in Judea flee to the mountains, +\v 14 When you see the abomination of desolation standing where it should not be standing (let the reader understand), let those who are in Judea flee to the mountains, \v 15 let him who is on the housetop not go down into the house, or take anything out of it, \v 16 and let him who is in the field not return to take his cloak. From d61644ba023eaf654d8abd97f2daf8c15029af58 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Sat, 11 Jun 2016 08:36:28 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 136/150] modified commas --- 42-MRK/13.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/13.usfm b/42-MRK/13.usfm index 2e663033..3a3c1787 100644 --- a/42-MRK/13.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/13.usfm @@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ \v 20 Unless the Lord had shortened the days, no flesh would be saved, but for the sake of the elect, those he chose, he shortened the number of the days. \s5 -\v 21 Then if anyone says to you, 'Look, here is the Christ!' Or, 'Look, there he is!' do not believe it. +\v 21 Then if anyone says to you, 'Look, here is the Christ!' or 'Look, there he is!', do not believe it. \v 22 For false Christs and false prophets will appear and will give signs and wonders, so as to deceive, if possible, even the elect. \v 23 Be on guard! I have told you all these things ahead of time." From 0c39a72fa3df769008d68a7a41ed360a9bfa51d8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Sat, 11 Jun 2016 13:32:35 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 137/150] Update 05.usfm --- 49-GAL/05.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/49-GAL/05.usfm b/49-GAL/05.usfm index ed6ff9ae..efd93b5c 100644 --- a/49-GAL/05.usfm +++ b/49-GAL/05.usfm @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ \s5 \p \v 16 I say, walk by the Spirit, and you will not fulfill the lust of the flesh. -\v 17 For the flesh lusts against the Spirit, and the Spirit works against the flesh. For these are opposed to each other. The result is that you do not do the things you desire to do. +\v 17 For the flesh has strong desires against the Spirit, and the Spirit has strong desires against the flesh. For these are opposed to each other. The result is that you do not do the things you desire to do. \v 18 But if the Spirit is leading you, you are not under the law. \s5 From 5bccfb7ab51dc569ae0c4187740daae7542f7a85 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Sat, 11 Jun 2016 13:34:17 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 138/150] Update 05.usfm --- 49-GAL/05.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/49-GAL/05.usfm b/49-GAL/05.usfm index efd93b5c..220cdf30 100644 --- a/49-GAL/05.usfm +++ b/49-GAL/05.usfm @@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ \s5 \p -\v 16 I say, walk by the Spirit, and you will not fulfill the lust of the flesh. +\v 16 I say, walk by the Spirit, and you will not fulfill the desires of the flesh. \v 17 For the flesh has strong desires against the Spirit, and the Spirit has strong desires against the flesh. For these are opposed to each other. The result is that you do not do the things you desire to do. \v 18 But if the Spirit is leading you, you are not under the law. From 8a27e1dbd1a0586c4c1eae0cf5557dc03efb9a33 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Sat, 11 Jun 2016 13:51:40 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 139/150] Update 05.usfm --- 49-GAL/05.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/49-GAL/05.usfm b/49-GAL/05.usfm index 220cdf30..c315407b 100644 --- a/49-GAL/05.usfm +++ b/49-GAL/05.usfm @@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ \s5 \v 22 But the fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, patience, kindness, goodness, faith, -\v 23 gentleness, and self-control. The law is not against such things. +\v 23 gentleness, and self-control. There is no law against such things. \v 24 Those who belong to Christ Jesus have crucified the flesh with its passions and evil desires. \s5 From ba1956247d009f7f0c3015c5641aec8cec80bf70 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Sat, 11 Jun 2016 15:14:31 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 140/150] quotation marks corrections made --- 42-MRK/14.usfm | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/14.usfm b/42-MRK/14.usfm index 7a372e28..9b063734 100644 --- a/42-MRK/14.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/14.usfm @@ -27,10 +27,10 @@ \p \v 12 On the first day of unleavened bread, when they sacrificed the Passover lamb, his disciples said to him, "Where do you want us to go to prepare so you may eat the Passover meal?" \v 13 He sent two of his disciples and said to them, "Go into the city, and a man bearing a pitcher of water will meet you. Follow him. -\v 14 Where he enters a house, follow him in and say to the owner of that house, 'The Teacher says, "Where is my guest room where I will eat the Passover with my disciples?' +\v 14 Where he enters a house, follow him in and say to the owner of that house, 'The Teacher says, "Where is my guest room where I will eat the Passover with my disciples?" ' \s5 -\v 15 He will show you a large furnished upper room that is ready. Make the preparations for us there. +\v 15 He will show you a large furnished upper room that is ready. Make the preparations for us there." \v 16 The disciples left and went to the city; they found everything as he had said to them, and they prepared the Passover meal. \s5 From 318c9c8b38e59997e6f6ecfab735f1e106b76783 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Sat, 11 Jun 2016 17:08:53 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 141/150] Update 01.usfm --- 48-2CO/01.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/48-2CO/01.usfm b/48-2CO/01.usfm index 53d992a2..5b8bc2cd 100644 --- a/48-2CO/01.usfm +++ b/48-2CO/01.usfm @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ \s5 \v 5 For just as the sufferings of Christ abound for our sake, so also our comfort abounds through Christ. -\v 6 But if we are afflicted, it is for your comfort and salvation. And if we are comforted, it is for your comfort. Your comfort is working when you patiently share in the same sufferings that we also suffer. +\v 6 But if we are afflicted, it is for your comfort and salvation. And if we are comforted, it is for your comfort. Your comfort is working effectively when you patiently share in the same sufferings that we also suffer. \v 7 And our confidence about you is certain. We know that as you also share the sufferings, you also share the comfort. \s5 From 590adf0ecb04526834d2b6fa7add86b546028ee8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Sat, 11 Jun 2016 17:40:08 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 142/150] Update 05.usfm --- 48-2CO/05.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/48-2CO/05.usfm b/48-2CO/05.usfm index 173d27f1..47dbda3e 100644 --- a/48-2CO/05.usfm +++ b/48-2CO/05.usfm @@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ \v 17 Therefore, if anyone is in Christ, he is a new creation. The old things have passed away. See, they have become new. \s5 -\v 18 All these things are from God. He reconciled us to himself through Christ, and gave us the ministry of reconciliation. +\v 18 All these things are from God. He reconciled us to himself through Christ, and has given us the ministry of reconciliation. \v 19 That is, in Christ God is reconciling the world to himself, not counting their trespasses against them. He is entrusting to us the message of reconciliation. \s5 From a8fbc49ded2847e1f287c48acf3b2b8ecebfd471 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Sat, 11 Jun 2016 19:53:34 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 143/150] Update 12.usfm --- 46-ROM/12.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/46-ROM/12.usfm b/46-ROM/12.usfm index 2c265abd..abcc88af 100644 --- a/46-ROM/12.usfm +++ b/46-ROM/12.usfm @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ \s5 \c 12 \p -\v 1 I urge you therefore, brothers, by the mercies of God, to present your bodies a living sacrifice, holy, acceptable to God. This is your spiritual service. +\v 1 I urge you therefore, brothers, by the mercies of God, to present your bodies a living sacrifice, holy, acceptable to God. This is your reasonable service. \v 2 Do not be conformed to this world, but be transformed by the renewal of your mind. Do this to know what is the good, acceptable, and perfect will of God. \s5 From bf55e939c3bb502342cccaa704d1e027191cabbc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: pohlig Date: Sat, 11 Jun 2016 20:47:34 -0400 Subject: [PATCH 144/150] Update 14.usfm --- 46-ROM/14.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/46-ROM/14.usfm b/46-ROM/14.usfm index 4ecce72e..6026fd6a 100644 --- a/46-ROM/14.usfm +++ b/46-ROM/14.usfm @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ \s5 \c 14 \p -\v 1 Receive anyone who is weak in faith, without giving judgment about such arguments. +\v 1 Receive anyone who is weak in faith, without giving judgment about arguments. \v 2 One person has faith to eat anything, another who is weak eats only vegetables. \s5 From 90bb16c2c49cb183e698cddafba5974ca6c6729d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Sat, 11 Jun 2016 23:23:34 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 145/150] space between quotation marks --- 42-MRK/14.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/14.usfm b/42-MRK/14.usfm index 9b063734..90e9526a 100644 --- a/42-MRK/14.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/14.usfm @@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ \s5 \v 57 Some stood up and brought false testimony against him; they said, -\v 58 "We heard him say, 'I will destroy this temple made with hands, and in three days I will build another made without hands.'" +\v 58 "We heard him say, 'I will destroy this temple made with hands, and in three days I will build another made without hands.' " \v 59 Yet even their testimony did not agree. \s5 From 9f4498e4e493240c05f0e534af1b45ed851f3598 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Sun, 12 Jun 2016 07:16:01 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 146/150] changed "maid" to "servant girl" This seems to be the same "servant girl" spoken of in 14:66. --- 42-MRK/14.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/14.usfm b/42-MRK/14.usfm index 90e9526a..45881b54 100644 --- a/42-MRK/14.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/14.usfm @@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ \f + \ft Some manuscripts add, "And the rooster crowed," but the best manuscripts do not have this phrase.\f* \s5 -\v 69 But the maid there saw him and began to say again to those who stood there, "This man is one of them!" +\v 69 But the servant girl there saw him and began to say again to those who stood there, "This man is one of them!" \v 70 But he denied it again. After a little while those who stood there were saying to Peter, "Surely you are one of them, for you also are a Galilean." \s5 From 6df995d6ce9079ce09ef672b02744681f896d550 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Sun, 12 Jun 2016 09:44:51 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 147/150] "Sanhedrin" is present in Greek, added it --- 42-MRK/15.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/15.usfm b/42-MRK/15.usfm index 1012d590..3406bd98 100644 --- a/42-MRK/15.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/15.usfm @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ \s5 \c 15 \p -\v 1 Early in the morning the chief priests met together with the elders and scribes and the whole Council. Then they bound Jesus and led him away. They handed him over to Pilate. +\v 1 Early in the morning the chief priests met together with the elders and scribes and the whole Sanhedrin Council. Then they bound Jesus and led him away. They handed him over to Pilate. \v 2 Pilate asked him, "Are you the King of the Jews?" He answered him, "You say so." \v 3 The chief priests were presenting many charges against Jesus. From 090dd6fb50525056ac44522a8143f78ae6da5eff Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Sun, 12 Jun 2016 15:01:14 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 148/150] removed unnecessary comma --- 42-MRK/15.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/15.usfm b/42-MRK/15.usfm index 3406bd98..e1e3ad55 100644 --- a/42-MRK/15.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/15.usfm @@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ \p \v 33 At the sixth hour, darkness came over the whole land until the ninth hour. \v 34 At the ninth hour Jesus cried out with a loud voice, "Eloi, Eloi, lama sabachthani?" which is interpreted, "My God, my God, why have you forsaken me?" -\v 35 Some of those standing by, heard it and said, "Look, he is calling for Elijah." +\v 35 Some of those standing by heard it and said, "Look, he is calling for Elijah." \s5 \v 36 Someone ran, put sour wine on a sponge, put it on a reed staff, and gave it to him to drink. The man said, "Let us see if Elijah comes to take him down." From 9fa5cbba66b8057e8bef97a82552c80b0d8fc60b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Sun, 12 Jun 2016 15:13:19 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 149/150] modified sentence structure --- 42-MRK/15.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/15.usfm b/42-MRK/15.usfm index e1e3ad55..e6daafbb 100644 --- a/42-MRK/15.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/15.usfm @@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ \s5 \p \v 42 When evening had come, because it was the day of Preparation, that is, the day before the Sabbath, -\v 43 Joseph of Arimathea came there, he was a respected member of the Council, who was waiting for the kingdom of God. He boldly went in to Pilate and asked for the body of Jesus. +\v 43 Joseph of Arimathea came there. He was a respected member of the Council, who was waiting for the kingdom of God. He boldly went in to Pilate and asked for the body of Jesus. \v 44 Pilate was amazed that Jesus was already dead; he called the centurion and asked him if Jesus was dead. \s5 From fb17c7ada2608d5fa4ac1a9c04f41a3bcd8291f2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hharrissWA Date: Sun, 12 Jun 2016 16:34:07 -0600 Subject: [PATCH 150/150] added apostrophe to show possession: Jesus' --- 42-MRK/16.usfm | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/42-MRK/16.usfm b/42-MRK/16.usfm index d124e75e..716be8e8 100644 --- a/42-MRK/16.usfm +++ b/42-MRK/16.usfm @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ \s5 \c 16 \p -\v 1 When the Sabbath day was over, Mary Magdalene and Mary the mother of James, and Salome, bought aromatic spices, that they might come and anoint Jesus body for burial. +\v 1 When the Sabbath day was over, Mary Magdalene and Mary the mother of James, and Salome, bought aromatic spices, that they might come and anoint Jesus' body for burial. \v 2 Very early on the first day of the week, they went to the tomb when the sun came up. \s5