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09-1SA/01.usfm

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 \v 23 Elkanah her husband said to her, "Do what seems good to you. Wait until you have weaned him; only, may Yahweh confirm his word." So the woman stayed and nursed her son until she weaned him.
 
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-\v 24 When she had weaned him, she took him with her, along with a three year old bull, one ephah of meal, and a bottle of wine, and brought him to the house of Yahweh in Shiloh. Now the child was still young.
+\v 24 When she had weaned him, she took him with her, along with a three-year-old bull, one ephah of meal, and a bottle of wine, and brought him to the house of Yahweh in Shiloh. Now the child was still young.
 \v 25 They killed the bull, and they brought the child to Eli.
 
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09-1SA/02.usfm

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 \v 12 Now the sons of Eli were worthless men. They did not know Yahweh.
-\v 13 The custom of the priests with the people was that when any man offered a sacrifice, the priest's servant would come with a three pronged fork in his hand, while the meat was boiling.
+\v 13 The custom of the priests with the people was that when any man offered a sacrifice, the priest's servant would come with a three-pronged fork in his hand, while the meat was boiling.
 \v 14 He would stick it into the pan, or kettle, or caldron, or pot. All that the fork brought up the priest would take for himself. They did this in Shiloh with all the Israelites that came there.
 
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 \v 22 Now Eli was very old; he heard all that his sons were doing to all Israel, and how they slept with the women who served at the entrance to the tent of meeting.
 \v 23 He said to them, "Why do you such things? For I hear of your evil actions from all these people."
-\v 24 No, my sons; for it is no good report that I hear. You make Yahweh's people disobey.
+\v 24 No, my sons; for it is not a good report that I hear. You make Yahweh's people disobey.
 
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 \v 25 "If one man sins against another, God will judge him; but if a man sins against Yahweh, who will speak for him?" 
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 \v 35 I will raise up for myself a faithful priest who will do what is in my heart and in my soul. I will build him a sure house; and he will walk before my anointed king forever.
 
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-\v 36 Every one who is left in your house will come and bow down to that person, asking for a piece of silver and a loaf of bread, and will say, "Please assign me to one of the priests' positions so I can eat a piece of bread."'"
+\v 36 Everyone who is left in your house will come and bow down to that person, asking for a piece of silver and a loaf of bread, and will say, "Please assign me to one of the priests' positions so I can eat a piece of bread."'"
 
 
 

09-1SA/03.usfm

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 \v 16 Then Eli called Samuel and said, "Samuel, my son." Samuel said, "Here I am."
 
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-\v 17 He said, "What was the word he spoke to you? Please do not hide it from me. May God do so to you, and even more, if you hide anything from me any of all the words that he spoke to you."
+\v 17 He said, "What was the word he spoke to you? Please do not hide it from me. May God do so to you, and even more, if you hide anything from me of all the words that he spoke to you."
 \v 18 Samuel told him everything; he hid nothing from him. Eli said, "It is Yahweh. Let him do what seems good to him."
 
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09-1SA/10.usfm

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 \v 5 After that, you will come to the hill of God, where the garrison of the Philistines is. When you arrive at the city, you will meet a group of prophets coming down from the high place with a harp, a tambourine, a flute, and a lyre before them; they will be prophesying.
-\v 6 The Spirit of Yahweh will rush upon you, and you will prophesy with them, and you willl be changed into a different man.
+\v 6 The Spirit of Yahweh will rush upon you, and you will prophesy with them, and you will be changed into a different man.
 
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 \v 7 Now, when these signs come to you, do whatever your hand finds to do, for God is with you.

09-1SA/13.usfm

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 \v 19 No blacksmith could be found throughout all of Israel, because the Philistines said, "Otherwise the Hebrews would make swords or spears for themselves."
 \v 20 But all the men of Israel used to go down to the Philistines, each to sharpen his plow points, his mattock, his ax, and his sickle.
-\v 21 The charge was two thirds of a shekel for the plow points, and the mattocks, and one third of a shekel for sharpening axes and for straightening the goads.
+\v 21 The charge was two-thirds of a shekel for the plow points, and the mattocks, and one-third of a shekel for sharpening axes and for straightening the goads.
 
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 \v 22 So on the day of battle, there were no swords or spears found in the hands of any of the soldiers who were with Saul and Jonathan; only Saul and his son Jonathan had them.

09-1SA/22.usfm

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 \v 1 So David left there and escaped to the cave of Adullam. When his brothers and all his father's house heard it, they went down there to him.
-\v 2 Everyone who was in distress, every one who was in debt, and every one who was discontented—they all gathered to him. David became captain over them. There were about four hundred men with him.
+\v 2 Everyone who was in distress, everyone who was in debt, and everyone who was discontented—they all gathered to him. David became captain over them. There were about four hundred men with him.
 
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09-1SA/24.usfm

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 \v 11 See, my father, see the corner of your robe in my hand. For the fact that I cut off the corner of your robe and did not kill you, you may know and see that there is no evil or treason in my hand, and I have not sinned against you, even though you hunt my life to take it.
 
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-\v 12 May Yahweh judge between you and I, and may Yahweh avenge me against you, but my hand shall not be against you.
+\v 12 May Yahweh judge between you and me, and may Yahweh avenge me against you, but my hand shall not be against you.
 \v 13 As the proverb of the ancients says, 'Out of the wicked comes wickedness.' But my hand will not be against you.
 
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