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 \v 8 The Levites were Jeshua, Binnui, Kadmiel, Sherebiah, Judah, and Mattaniah, who was in charge of the thanksgiving songs, along with his associates. 
-\v 9 Bakbukiah and Unno, their associates, stood opposite them during the service.
+\v 9 Bakbukiah and Unni, their associates, stood opposite them during the service.
 
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-\v 10 Jeshua was the father of Joiakim. Joiakim became the father of Eliashib, Eliashib became the father of Joiada,
-\v 11 Joiada became the father of Jonathan, and Jonathan became the father of Jaddua.
+\v 10 Jeshua was the father of Joiakim, Joiakim was the father of Eliashib, Eliashib was the father of Joiada,
+\v 11 Joiada was the father of Jonathan, and Jonathan was the father of Jaddua.
 
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-\v 12 In the days of Joiakim these were the priests, the heads of fathers' families: Meraiah was the leader of Seraiah, Hananiah was the leader of Jeremiah,
+\v 12 In the days of Joiakim these were the priests, the heads of fathers' families: Meraiah was leader of Seraiah, Hananiah was leader of Jeremiah,
 \v 13 Meshullam was leader of Ezra, Jehohanan was leader of Amariah,
-\v 14 Jonathan was leader of Malluchi, Joseph was leader of Shebaniah.
+\v 14 Jonathan was leader of Malluchi, and Joseph was leader of Shebaniah.
 
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-\v 15 To continue, Adna was the leader of Harim, Helkai was leader of Meraioth,
-\v 16 Zechariah was leader of Iddo, Meshullam was leader of Ginnethon,
+\v 15 To continue, Adna was leader of Harim, Helkai leader of Meraioth,
+\v 16 Zechariah was leader of Iddo, Meshullam was leader of Ginnethon, and 
 \v 17 Zichri was leader of Abijah. There was also a leader of Miniamin. Piltai was leader of Moadiah. 
 \v 18 Shammua was leader of Bilgah, Jehonathan was leader of Shemaiah,
 \v 19 Mattenai was leader of Joiarib, Uzzi was leader of Jedaiah,
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-\v 22 In the days of Eliashib, the Levites, Eliashib, Joiada, Johanan, and Jaddua, were recorded as the heads of families, and the priests were recorded during the reign of Darius the Persian. 
+\v 22 In the days of Eliashib, the Levites Eliashib, Joiada, Johanan, and Jaddua were recorded as the heads of families, and the priests were recorded during the reign of Darius the Persian. 
 \v 23 The descendants of Levi and their leaders of families were recorded in The Book of the Annals up to the days of Johanan son of Eliashib.
 
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-\v 24 And the leaders of the Levites were Hashabiah, Sherebiah, and Jeshua son of Kadmiel, with their colleagues who stood opposite them to give praise and to give thanks, responding section by section, in obedience to the command of David, the man of God.
-\v 25 Mattaniah, Bakbukiah, Obadiah, Meshullam, Talmon, and Akkub, were gatekeepers standing guard at the storerooms of the gates.
+\v 24 And the leaders of the Levites were Hashabiah, Sherebiah, and Jeshua son of Kadmiel, with their associates who stood opposite them to give praise and to give thanks, responding section by section, in obedience to the command of David, the man of God.
+\v 25 Mattaniah, Bakbukiah, Obadiah, Meshullam, Talmon, and Akkub were gatekeepers standing guard at the storerooms of the gates.
 \v 26 They served in the days of Joiakim son of Jeshua son of Jozadak, and in the days of Nehemiah the governor and of Ezra the priest and scribe.
 
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-\v 27 At the dedication of the wall of Jerusalem, the people sought out the Levites wherever they lived, to bring them to Jerusalem to celebrate the dedication with joy, with thanksgivings, singing, with cymbals, harps, and with lyres.
+\v 27 At the dedication of the wall of Jerusalem, the people sought out the Levites wherever they lived, to bring them to Jerusalem to celebrate the dedication with joy, with thanksgivings and singing with cymbals, harps, and with lyres.
 \v 28 The fellowship of singers gathered together from the district around Jerusalem and from the villages of the Netophathites.
 
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 \v 38 And the other choir of those who gave thanks went in the other direction. I followed them on the wall with half the people, above the Tower of Ovens, to the Broad Wall,
-\v 39 and above the Gate of Ephraim, and by the Old Gate, and by the Fish Gate and the Tower of Hananel and the Tower of Hammeah, to the Sheep Gate, and they stopped at the Gate of the Guard.
+\v 39 and above the Gate of Ephraim, and by the Old Gate, and by the Fish Gate and the Tower of Hananel and the Tower of the Hundred, to the Sheep Gate, and they stopped at the Gate of the Guard.
 
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-\v 40 So both choirs of those who gave thanks took their place in the house of God,  and I also took my place with half of the officials with me. 
+\v 40 So both choirs of those who gave thanks took their place in the house of God, and I also took my place with half of the officials with me. 
 \v 41 And the priests took their place: Eliakim, Maaseiah, Miniamin, Micaiah, Elioenai, Zechariah, and Hananiah, with the trumpets,
 \v 42 Maaseiah, Shemaiah, Eleazar, Uzzi, Jehohanan, Malchijah, Elam, and Ezer. The singers sang with Jezrahiah as director.