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PSA 122 looking carefully at the Heb

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 \v 1 I was glad when they said to me,
 \q "Let us go to the house of Yahweh."
 \q
-\v 2 Our feet are standing
+\v 2 Jerusalem, our feet are standing
-\q inside your gates, Jerusalem.
+\q within your gates!
 \q
-\v 3 Jerusalem was built
+\v 3 Jerusalem, built 
-\q as a city that was carefully planned.
+\q as a city carefully planned!
  
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 \q
-\v 4 The tribes go up there, the tribes of Yahweh,
+\v 4 The tribes go up to Jerusalem—the tribes of Yahweh—
-\q as a law for Israel
+\q as a testimony for Israel,
 \q to give thanks to the name of Yahweh.
 \q
-\v 5 The leaders sit on thrones there,
+\v 5 There thrones of judgment were set,
-\q for judgment for the house of David.
+\q thrones of the house of David.
  
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 \q
 \v 6 Pray for the peace of Jerusalem!
-\q They will prosper who love you.
+\q "May those who love you have peace.
 \q
-\v 7 May there be peace within your walls
+\v 7 May there be peace within the walls that defend you,
-\q and prosperity within your towers.
+\q and may they have peace within your fortresses."
  
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 \q
-\v 8 For my brothers' and companions' sakes
+\v 8 For the sake of my brothers and my friends
-\q I will now say, "May there be peace in you."
+\q I will say, "I will speak peace to you."
 \q
 \v 9 For the sake of the house of Yahweh our God,
 \q I will pray for your good.