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04-NUM/16.usfm

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 \v 1 Now Korah son of Izhar son of Kohath son of Levi, along with Dathan and Abiram sons of Eliab, and On son of Peleth, descendants of Reuben, gathered some men.
 \v 2 They rose up against Moses, along with other men from the people of Israel, two hundred and fifty leaders of the community who were well-known members in the community.
-\v 3 They assembled themselves together to confront Moses and Aaron. They said to them, "You take too much on yourselves. All the community are holy, reserved for Yahweh, every one of them, and Yahweh is among them. Why do you lift up yourselves above the rest of Yahweh's community?"
+\v 3 They assembled themselves together to confront Moses and Aaron. They said to them, "You have gone too far! All the community are holy, reserved for Yahweh, every one of them, and Yahweh is among them. Why do you lift up yourselves above the rest of Yahweh's community?"
 
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 \v 4 When Moses heard that, he lay facedown.
-\v 5 He spoke to Korah and to all his group; he said, "In the morning Yahweh will show who are his, and who is dedicated to Yahweh. He will bring up to himself the man he chooses. Yahweh will bring him up to himself.
+\v 5 He spoke to Korah and to all those with him, "In the morning Yahweh will make known who belongs to him and who is dedicated to him. He will bring that person near to him. The one he chooses he will bring near to himself. 
  
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 \v 6 Do this, Korah and all your group. Take censers 

25-LAM/04.usfm

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-\v 16 Yahweh himself scattered them; he does not watch over them any more. 
+\v 16 Yahweh himself scattered them; he does not watch over them anymore. 
 \q They do not honor the priests, 
 \q and they did not show any favor to the elders. 
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25-LAM/05.usfm

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 \q and you will sit upon your throne from generation to generation.
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 \v 20 Why do you forget us forever?
-\q Will do you forsake us for so many days?
+\q Why do you forsake us for so many days?
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 \v 21 Restore us to yourself, Yahweh, and we will be restored.
 \q Renew our days as they were long ago—

26-EZK/31.usfm

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 \v 8 Cedars in the garden of God could not equal it. 
-\q None among the fir trees matched its branches, and plane trees could not equal its boughs. 
+\q None among the cypress trees matched its branches, and plane tree could not equal its boughs. 
-\q No tree in the garden of God could equal it in beauty.
+\q There was no other tree in the garden of God that was like it in its beauty.
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 \v 9 I made it beautiful with its many branches
 \q and all the trees of Eden that were in the garden of God envied it.

35-HAB/01.usfm

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 \v 13 Your eyes are too pure to gaze upon evil, and you are not able to look on wrongdoing with favor; 
 \q why then have you looked favorably on those who betray?
-\q Why are you silent while the wicked swallow up those more righteous than themselves?
+\q Why are you silent while the wicked swallow up those more righteous than they are?
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 \v 14 You make men like fish in the sea, like creeping things without a ruler over them.
 
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 \v 15 They bring up all of them with fishhooks; they drag men away in fishnets 
 \q and gather them in their net. This is why they rejoice and shout exuberantly!
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-\v 16 Therefore they sacrifice to their fishing net and burn incense to their net, 
+\v 16 Therefore they sacrifice to their fishing nets and burn incense to their net, 
 \q for fattened beasts are their portion, and the fatty meat is their food!
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-\v 17 Will they therefore empty their net and continue to slaughter the nations, feeling no compassion?"
+\v 17 Will they therefore empty their fishing nets and continue to slaughter the nations, feeling no compassion?"
 
 
 

35-HAB/02.usfm

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-\v 1 I will stand at my guardpost and station myself on the watchtower, and I will watch carefully 
+\v 1 I will stand at my guard post and station myself on the watchtower, and I will watch carefully 
 \q to see what he will say to me and how I should turn from my complaint.
 
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 \v 13 Is it not from Yahweh of hosts 
 \q2 that peoples labor for fire and all the other nations weary themselves for nothing?
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-\v 14 Yet the land will be filled with the knowledge of the glory of Yahweh like the waters cover the sea.
+\v 14 Yet the land will be filled with the knowledge of the glory of Yahweh as  the waters cover the sea.
 
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35-HAB/03.usfm

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-\v 4 The rays of his hand were gleaming like the light,
+\v 4 The two rays of his hand were as bright as lightning,
-\q and there he kept his power.
+\q where his strength was hidden.
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-\v 5 Pestilence went before his face, and plague after his feet.
+\v 5 Deadly disease went before him, and plague went after his feet.
 
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 \v 7 I saw the tents of Cushan in affliction, and the fabric of the tents in the land of Midian trembling.
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-\v 8 Was Yahweh angry with the rivers? Was your wrath against the rivers, or your fury against the sea
+\v 8 Was Yahweh angry at the rivers? Was your wrath against the rivers, 
-\q when you rode upon your horses, your chariot of salvation?
+\q or your fury against the sea,
+\q when you rode upon your horses and your victorious chariots?
 
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-\v 11 The sun and moon stood still in their lofty places,
+\v 11 The sun and moon stood still above in their high places
-\q then went away at the light of your arrows and the gleaming lightning of your spear!
+\q at the light of your arrows and they flew, at the brightness of the lightning flash of your spear!
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 \v 12 You have marched over the earth with indignation. In wrath you have threshed the nations.
 
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 \v 18 Still, I will rejoice in Yahweh! I will be happy because the God of my salvation!
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-\v 19 The Lord Yahweh is my strength, 
+\v 19 The Lord Yahweh is my strength 
-\q and he makes my feet like hinds' feet and leads me upon my high places!
+\q and he makes my feet like the deer's; 
+\q he leads me on my high places!
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 —To the music director, on my stringed instruments.