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-\v 4 You shine brightly and reveal your glory,
+\v 4 You shine brightly and are majestic
 \q as you descend from the mountains, where you killed your victims.
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-\v 5 The bravehearted were plundered;
+\v 5 The brave of heart were plundered;
 \q they fell asleep.
 \q All the warriors were helpless.
 
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 \v 6 At your rebuke, God of Jacob,
-\q both rider and horse fell asleep.
+\q both charioteer and horse fell asleep.
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 \v 7 You, yes you, are to be feared;
 \q who can stand in your sight when you are angry?
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 \v 10 Surely your angry judgment against humanity will bring you praise;
-\q you gird yourself with what is left of your anger.
+\q you gird yourself with the remnant of your anger.
 
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 \v 11 Make vows to Yahweh your God and keep them.
-\q May all who surround him bring gifts to him who is to be feared.
+\q May all who surround him bring tribute to him who is to be feared.
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 \v 12 He cuts off the spirit of the princes;
 \q he is feared by the kings of the earth.
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 \q I was too troubled to speak.
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 \v 5 I thought about the days of old,
-\q about times long past.
+\q about years long past.
 
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 \v 33 Therefore God cut short their days;
 \q their years were filled with terror.
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-\v 34 Whenever God afflicted them, they would start to seek him,
+\v 34 Whenever God killed them, they would start to seek him,
 \q and they would return and look earnestly for him.
 
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 \q so that they could not drink from their streams.
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 \v 45 He sent swarms of flies that devoured them
-\q and frogs that overran their land.
+\q and frogs that destroyed them.
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 \v 46 He gave their crops to the grasshopper
 \q and their labor to the locust.
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 \v 49 The fierceness of his anger lashed out against them.
 \q He sent wrath, fury, and trouble
-\q like agents who bring disaster.
+\q like angels who bring disaster.
 
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-\v 56 Yet they challenged and defied the Most High God
+\v 56 Yet they challenged and rebelled against the Most High God
 \q and did not keep his solemn commands.
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 \v 57 They were unfaithful and acted treacherously like their fathers;
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 \q and he was angry with his heritage.
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 \v 63 Fire devoured their young men,
-\q and their young women had no wedding songs.
+\q and their virgins had no wedding songs.
 
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 \q and on the kingdoms that do not call upon your name.
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 \v 7 For they have devoured Jacob
-\q and destroyed his villages.
+\q and laid waste his villages.
 
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-\v 8 Do not hold the sins of our forefathers against us;
+\v 8 Do not hold the iniquities of our forefathers against us;
 \q may your merciful actions come to us,
 \q for we are very low.
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 \v 12 Pay back into the laps of our neighboring countries seven times as much
-\q as the insults with which they have insulted you, Lord.
+\q as the reproaches with which they have reproached you, Lord.
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 \v 13 So we your people and sheep of your pasture
 \q will give you thanks forever.
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 \v 5 You have fed them with the bread of tears
 \q and given them tears to drink in great quantities.
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-\v 6 You make us something for our neighbors to argue over,
-\q and our enemies laugh about us among themselves.
+\v 6 You make us an object of strife for our neighbors,
+\q and our enemies laugh in mockery about us among themselves.
 
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 \q look down from heaven and take notice and take care of this vine.
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 \v 15 This is the root that your right hand planted,
-\q the shoot that you made to grow.
+\q the son that you have strengthened for yourself.
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 \v 16 It has been burned and cut down;
 \q they perish because of your rebuke.
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 \v 17 May your hand be on the man of your right hand,
-\q on the son of man whom you made strong for yourself.
+\q on the son of man whom you strengthened for yourself.
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 \v 18 Then we will not turn away from you;
 \q revive us, and we will call on your name.