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 \v 16 No longer would he be a slave, but better than a slave, a beloved brother. He is beloved especially to me, and much more so to you, in both the flesh and in the Lord.
 
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-\v 17 And so if you regard me a partner, receive him as you would receive me.
-\v 18 But if he has wronged you at all, or owes you anything, charge that to my account.
-\v 19 I, Paul, write this with my own hand: I will pay you back. I do not mention to you that you owe me your very life.
-\v 20 Yes, brother, let me have some joy in the Lord from you; refresh my heart in Christ.
+\v 17 And so if you have me as a partner, receive him as me.
+\v 18 If he has wronged you or owes you anything, charge that to me.
+\v 19 I, Paul, write this with my own hand: I will pay you back. Not to tell you that you owe me your own self.
+\v 20 Yes, brother, do me a favor in the Lord; give rest to my heart in Christ.
 
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-\v 21 Confident about your obedience, I write to you, knowing that you will do even more than I ask.
-\v 22 At the same time, prepare a guest room for me, for I hope that through your prayers I will soon be able to visit you.
+\v 21 Confident about your obedience, I am writing to you. I know that you will do even more than I ask.
+\v 22 At the same time, prepare a guest room for me, for I hope that through your prayers I will be given back to you.
 
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-\v 23 Epaphras, my fellow prisoner in Christ Jesus, greets you,
-\v 24 and so do Mark, Aristarchus, Demas, Luke, my fellow workers.
+\v 23 Epaphras, my fellow prisoner in Christ Jesus, greets you.
+\v 24 So do Mark, Aristarchus, Demas, and Luke, my fellow workers.
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 \v 25 May the grace of our Lord Jesus Christ be with your spirit. Amen.