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42 Commits

Author SHA1 Message Date
Hanker10 b29fd8a5de Romans 3:24 change wording
Romans 3:24 change wording to reflect the action of Christ for us beyond only his death.
2016-07-08 12:04:06 -04:00
Hanker10 24b83c7565 Romans 3:21 change wording
Romans 3:21 change wording for clarity
2016-07-08 12:01:14 -04:00
Hanker10 e3750f7dc7 Romans 3:19-20 change wording
Romans 3:19-20 change wording and punctuation for clarity
2016-07-08 11:54:56 -04:00
Hanker10 a79ddcc9c3 Romans 3:9 cut dialog
Romans 3:9 cut dialog
2016-07-08 11:35:58 -04:00
Hanker10 c8cc398737 Romans 3:5-8 clear up dialog
Romans 3:5-8  clear up dialog
2016-07-08 11:30:02 -04:00
Hanker10 5a597196f5 Romans 3:3-4 cut dialog
Romans 3:3-4 cut imaginary dialog since this is not needed and not in the text
2016-07-08 11:14:21 -04:00
Hanker10 8014f3ca37 Romans 3:1-2 change wording
Romans 3:1-2  change wording from a direct quote (not in the text) and the imaginary dialog.
2016-07-08 11:10:57 -04:00
Hanker10 8d89082596 Romans 2:25 correct verb number
Romans 2:25 correct verb number
2016-07-08 11:00:34 -04:00
Hanker10 3592323645 Romans 2:24 cut extra sentence
Romans 2:24 cut extra sentence, "The non-Jews say God must be a hypocrite if he tolerates the behavior of people like you."
2016-07-08 10:59:33 -04:00
Hanker10 6632df2e73 Romans 2:20 cut extra word
Romans 2:20 cut extra word "in" and change "what" from "you have __ the law __ teaches you"
2016-07-08 10:56:32 -04:00
Hanker10 7554a08bb2 Romans 2:16 change wording
Romans 2:16 change wording to shorten and simplify the sentence structure. The idea of secret is central, not an added feature.
2016-07-08 10:53:15 -04:00
Hanker10 cbcef77589 Romans 2:12 change wording
Romans 2:12 change wording to shorten the text.
2016-07-08 10:43:22 -04:00
Hanker10 195645294f Romans 2:1 cut added wording
Romans 2:1 cut added wording that is too interpretive and not in the text at all.
2016-07-08 10:21:44 -04:00
Hanker10 8d9b792854 Romans 1:27 change wording
Romans 1:27 change wording from, "As a result, God has punished them by sicknesses in their bodies, which is what they deserve." to what you see. To ascribe the agency to God is true ultimately but is too much to read out of the text and is likely offensive to some. The more immediate agency is the physical effects of such behavior that have become obvious in our context as well.
2016-07-08 10:14:32 -04:00
Hanker10 23c0c899f7 Rom 1:14 change wording
Romans 1:14 change the loaded terms "educated and to those who are uneducated" to what you see. There are many MTTs and their readers who may not have much formal education, but still have good discretion and ability to learn. Besides, this does not convey  the idea of "wise" and "foolish" in the text.
2016-07-08 09:52:45 -04:00
Hanker10 b9825095a1 Romans 1:5 change wording
Romans 1:5 change wording of "among the non-Jewish people groups" to what you see. The Greek says "all the people groups" and that includes the Jews, of course, and Paul certainly included them in his ministry.
2016-07-06 09:31:43 -04:00
Tom Warren c36ddc9ebd dead / unable to have children
matching the ULB
2016-07-05 22:27:19 -04:00
Tom Warren bc5d64d4f2 2:12 and 13
Rework in Nepal with MTT
2016-06-30 04:16:41 -04:00
Hanker10 7273f16096 Update 01.usfm 2016-06-17 11:23:20 -04:00
Hanker10 a4422f8cdb Romans 1:29-31 trimmed the necessary repetition
Romans 1:29-31 trimmed the necessary repetition of "They strongly desire to ..." and "Many ..."
2016-06-17 11:21:23 -04:00
Hanker10 1beeba382f Romans 1:18 change referent in clause
Romans 1:18 change "everyone in the "who" clause to "all" and the number of the verbs "show" and "do" to match. This also matches with the "them" in the next sentence.
2016-06-17 10:55:26 -04:00
Hanker10 062ee7b7f7 Romans 1:7 added "in Rome"
Romans 1:7 added "in Rome" since this is in the Greek, helps the idea along, and does not hinder the flow of style.
2016-06-17 10:30:35 -04:00
Hanker10 9c7ae84fdf Romans 1:1 correct verb number
Romans 1:1 correct the number (singular) of the the verb "serve(s)"
2016-06-16 19:57:10 -04:00
pohlig 886a5b9b67 Update 07.usfm 2016-05-31 11:04:58 -04:00
Tom Warren 07ef4887a9 Rewrite 2016-05-23 12:19:22 -04:00
pohlig 0bf056abec Update 06.usfm 2016-05-18 08:15:17 -04:00
pohlig f757a3ee0e Update 06.usfm 2016-05-18 08:10:48 -04:00
Tom Warren 0670505f12 Update 16.usfm 2016-05-17 11:37:35 -04:00
Tom Warren 35c6227079 Footnote
Following the ULB, the footnote is added for clarity.
2016-05-17 11:35:08 -04:00
pohlig 2fe958666d Update 06.usfm 2016-05-17 09:55:46 -04:00
pohlig 49f0e3960c Update 06.usfm 2016-05-17 09:54:07 -04:00
pohlig f2a8902b5e Update 06.usfm 2016-05-17 09:52:50 -04:00
Henry Whitney 32ade479c9 Rom 16
towards to toward
deleted empty lines
2016-05-02 10:42:18 +05:45
Henry Whitney 9b9292514c Rom 11
towards to toward
deleted empty lines
2016-05-02 10:39:49 +05:45
Henry Whitney 58f43cc1ba Towards to toward Rom 9:18 2016-05-02 10:04:41 +05:45
Henry Whitney 4325568620 Towards to toward Rom 5:10
towards to toward
2016-05-02 10:02:46 +05:45
Dave Statezni 2de771240d UDB_SQ_1 global replace 2016-04-28 21:29:33 -05:00
pohlig b566d8f1d0 Update 09.usfm 2016-04-18 17:16:08 -04:00
pohlig 60829efe07 Update 02.usfm 2016-04-13 11:54:29 -04:00
Tom Warren 314a0d05d5 Rewrite of vs 34 2016-04-08 09:46:21 -04:00
Apache Production e3fd5a5d05 Added README.md for each book with links to door43.org 2016-04-05 15:56:40 +00:00
Richard Mahn 78b7b614f7 Initial commit from Etherpad 2016-04-01 21:07:40 +00:00