Update 04.usfm

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 \q1 That is certainly true because I, Yahweh, have said it!
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 \q1
-\v 9 I caused your grain fields to dry up;
-\q2 I caused your gardens and vineyards to be struck and mildew.
+\v 9 I caused your grain fields to dry up,
+\q2 and your gardens and vineyards to be struck and mildew.
 \q1 I sent locusts to eat the leaves on your fig trees and olive trees,
 \q2 but in spite of that, you rejected me.
 \q1 That is certainly true because I, Yahweh, have said it!
@@ -72,15 +72,15 @@
 \v 10 I caused you to experience plagues
 \q2 like the plagues that I sent to the people of Egypt.
 \q1 I caused many of your young men to die in battles.
-\q2 I allowed your enemies to capture your horses.
+\q2 and allowed your enemies to capture your horses.
 \q1 Many of your soldiers were killed,
-\q2 and I caused your camps to be filled with the smell of their corpses.
+\q2 and your camps were filled with the smell of their corpses.
 \q2 But in spite of that, you rejected me.
 \q1 That is certainly true, because I, Yahweh, have said it!
 \b
 \q1
 \v 11 I got rid of many of you,
-\q2 like I got rid of the people in Sodom and Gomorrah.
+\q2 like the people in Sodom and Gomorrah.
 \q1 Those of you who did not die were like  a burning stick that was snatched from a fire so that it would not burn completely.
 \q2 But in spite of that, you rejected me.
 \q1 That is certainly true, because I, Yahweh, have said it!
@@ -93,11 +93,11 @@
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 \q1
 \v 13 I created the mountains,
-\q2 and I created the winds.
+\q2 and the winds.
 \q1 I reveal to humans what I am thinking.
-\q2 I sometimes cause the daylight to become dark like the night.
-\q1 I rule over everything;
-\q2 I even walk on the highest mountains on the earth!
+\q2 and sometimes cause the daylight to become dark like the night.
+\q1 I rule over everything,
+\q2 and even walk on the highest mountains on the earth!
 \q2 I am Yahweh, Commander of the angel armies!"