Notes from Aaron Fenlason

03-LEV/14.usfm

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 \v 21 But if the person has gotten well is poor and cannot afford to bring all those animals, he must bring to the priest one male lamb for the priest to lift it up and offer it to Yahweh. This will be a sacrifice because the sick person was not able to give to Yahweh the things that he was required to give him. He must also bring about two liters of flour offering mixed with about one third liter of olive oil; this will be an offering made from flour. He must also bring about one third liter of olive oil. 
-\v 22 He must also bring two pigeons or two young pigeons, one for Yahweh to forgive his sins, and one for the priest to burn whole on the altar.
+\v 22 He must also bring doves or two pigeons, one for Yahweh to as to offer for his sins, and one for the priest to burn completely on the altar.
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 \v 23 On that same day, the eighth day, that person must take those things to the priest at the entrance to the sacred tent, to offer them to Yahweh.
 
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-\v 24 The priest will take the lamb for an offering lifted high to Yahweh the things that he was required to give him, along with the olive oil, and lift them high to present these to Yahweh.
+\v 24 The priest will take the lamb for an offering, and he will take with it the olive oil, and he will lift them high as he presents them to Yahweh. 
+\v 24 Then the priest will take the lamb for the guilt offering and the log of oil, and he will raise them up as an offering to Yahweh and present them to him.
 \v 25 Then the priest will slaughter that lamb and catch some of the blood in a bowl. He will take some of the blood and put it onto the person's right earlobe, his right thumb, and his right big toe.
 
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 \v 29 He must put the rest of the oil that is in his hand on the head of the person whose has gotten well. This will show that Yahweh has forgiven that person's sins.
 
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-\v 30 Then the priest must sacrifice the pigeons or the pigeons, whichever that person has brought.
+\v 30 Then the priest must sacrifice the doves or young pigeons, whichever kind that person has brought.
 \v 31 One will be a sin offering and the other will be completely burned on the altar, along with the offering made from flour. By doing that, the priest will atone for that person's sins.
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 \v 32 These are the regulations for anyone who has a contagious skin disease and who is poor and cannot afford the usual offerings, in order that he can be with people again."

03-LEV/15.usfm

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-\v 32 Those are the regulations for a man who has a fluid that flows from his private parts or who should not be touched because some of his semen spills while sleeping with a woman,
+\v 32 Those are the regulations for a man who has a discharge from his body, or who has an emission of semen, when that happens he is unclean; 
 \v 33 and for any woman during her menstrual period, and for any man who sleeps with a woman during her menstrual period.'"
 
 

03-LEV/16.usfm

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 \v 12 Then he must take some burning coals from the bronze altar and put them into the incense burner. Then he must fill his hands with fragrant, finely ground incense. Then he must take the incense and the incense burner inside the curtain into the very holy place, in the sacred tent.
-\v 13 There he must put the incense on the burning coals, and a cloud of burning incense will rise up over the lid of the sacred chest. If he obeys these instructions, he will not die as Korah did, who had offered incense incorrectly.
+\v 13 In the presence of Yahweh, he must put the incense on the burning coals. And a cloud of burning incense will rise up over the lid of the sacred chest. If he obeys these instructions, he will not die when he presents these offerings to Yahweh.
 
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 \v 14 Then Aaron must dip his finger into the basin and sprinkle some blood on the lid of the sacred chest, and also sprinkle some blood seven times against the front of the chest.

03-LEV/23.usfm

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 \v 1 Yahweh said to Moses,
-\v 2 "Tell the Israelites about the festivals for Yahweh, the days when you all must gather together in holy assemblies and we have them on set times each year, as festivals in which you worship me.
+\v 2 "Tell the Israelites about the festivals for Yahweh, the days when you all must gather together in holy assemblies on set times each year, as festivals in which you worship me.
 
 
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