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 The terms "honor" and "to honor" refer to giving someone respect, esteem, or reverence.
 
 * Honor is usually given to someone who is of higher status and importance, such as a king or God.
-* God also instructs Christians to honor others, but not to try to get honor for themselves.
-* Children are instructed to honor their parents, which includes respect and obedience.
+* God instructs Christians to honor others.
+* Children are instructed to honor their parents in ways that include respecting them and obeying them.
 * The terms "honor" and "glory" are often used together, especially when referring to Jesus. These may be two different ways of referring to the same thing.
-* Honor for God include thanking and praising him, and showing him respect by obeying him and living in a way that shows how great he is.
+* Ways of honoring God include thanking and praising him, and showing him respect by obeying him and living in a way that shows how great he is.
 
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