# Hamor ... went out to Jacob "Hamor ... went to meet Jacob" # The men were offended "The men were outraged" # They were very angry ... should not have been done This can be stated as a direct quotation spoken by Jacob's son, as in the UDB. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-quotations]]) # he had disgraced Israel Here the word "Israel" refers to every member of Jacob's family. Israel as a people group was disgraced. AT: "he had humiliated the family of Israel" or "he had brought shame on the people of Israel" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]]) # forcing himself on Jacob's daughter "assaulting Jacob's daughter" # for such a thing should not have been done This can be stated in active form. AT: "for he should not have done such a terrible thing" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])