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-# Jacob will no longer ... his face ... he sees his children
+# he sees his children
 
-Here "Jacob" represents his descendants. Alternate translation: "Jacob's descendants will no longer ... their faces ... they see their children" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
+The words "he" and "his" speak of Jacob (verse 22) and represent his descendants. Alternate translation: "Jacob's descendants will no longer ... their faces ... they see their children" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
 
 # But when he sees his children, the work of my hands