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-# On the one hand ... On the other hand
+# As far as the gospel is concerned
 
-This is a pair of phrases used to compare two different facts about a subject. Paul uses these phrases to explain that God has rejected the Jews, but he also still loves them.
+You can make explicit why Paul mentions the gospel. AT: "Because the Jews rejected the gospel" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])
 
-# concerning the gospel
+# they are enemies for your sake
 
-You can make explicit that God treated the Jews as enemies because they rejected Jesus. AT: "because the Jews rejected the good news about Christ" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])
+You can make explicit whose enemies they are, and how this was for the Gentiles' sake. AT: "they are God's enemies for your sake" or "God has treated them as enemies in order that you also might hear the gospel" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])
 
-# they are enemies on your behalf
+# as far as election is concerned
 
-God's love for the Gentiles was so great that his love for the Jews seemed like hatred in comparison. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-hyperbole]])
+You can make explicit why Paul mentions election. AT: "because God has elected the Jews" or "because God has chosen the Jews" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])
 
-# they are beloved because of the ancestors
+# they are beloved because of their forefathers
 
-You can translate this in an active form. AT: "God still loves them because of what he promised to do for their ancestors" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
+You can make explicit who loves the Jews and why Paul mentions their forefathers. You can also translate this in an active form. AT: "God still loves them because of what he promised to do for their ancestors" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
 
 # For the gifts and the call of God are unchangeable